AR FF: Atlas of Love - Pg 5, 17/04

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Sur_10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

hey

theres nothing better than somebody waiting 2 welcome u after a tired day.

i like this one.... :)

thanx for the pm....nicely written

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naureen

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

thanxs 4 pming me

as usual lovely piece of writing

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

aw that was super cute! i love these little snippets yo u write!

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qt4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

Hey dear
loved the way u write
pls pm me too

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anjie22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

Superb piece of writing again.....continue soon

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ammygurl

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

OKay.. My first comment here. :)

First of all. I am truly, eternally grateful to you for starting an Armaan Riddhima fiction! I love the way YOU portray Armaan Riddhima.

I read the spices one first :) And it is awesome. Short and sweet. And so apt.

A moment, to be cherished. A moment which must not be interrupted. Armaan Riddhima in pristine form.

Thanks for this.

Take care

P.S Thanks Aria! For challenging Sooks.. ! This solved my dilemma of me asking her. She really wasn't ready to write AR :P Do help me out more :D I will let you know :)

Thanks

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jasmine ansari

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

Very nice part.
Thanx 4 d pm.
T.c.

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Garima

@ScatteredCastle

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

Well, first things first, .. I really didn't know you had it in you, to write 'romantic' things in you! ROFL.

Nevertheless, It was a good one!..and don't you know how much i love to read/fantasize AR in such lovey-dovey scenes!! But, lemme be clear, it was so unlike you! No witty one liners; no word fights, no...more being sookie-ish! Not that I don't like this side of you, I loved that one better and that doesn't mean I want you to go back to writing all that MG crap all over again! and do I sound, geekish?! =S

and Winter Sonata, I've heard that before, isn't it some kind of Television series or something??

Coming back to this again, i loved the small details in the beginning! and it was sucha perfect thing to happen between AR! Much lover for writing this!

Write soon! :-)

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Sri

@RadiantTreasure

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Posted: 14 years ago

#39

Ah..I always wanted to say that the armaan n ridhimaa i read in ur's are different from what i saw in DMG..they are matured here..even if it's their senseless fightings or perfect sense of humour(like in Grimm..)

This particular part made me travel to those days where i always thought what if AR were married and armaan comes from sanjeevni n ridhimaa welcomes with a lovely candle light dinner..and they spend a romantic date..

In this..Armaan finding solace in ridhimaa!!Good one as always..
Loved these lines..

"You give me the feeling of home. No, you are home Riddhima"'

With her, he was just him; nothing more nothing less.

Glad we could see this side of writing's also from you..
Good wishes..
Sri:-)

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@spln

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

That was positively Unsookish (it should now become an acceptable Oxford word)

Apart from the fact that I shall hereby stamp cynicism as so much better coming from you - I also have to say, you are far too prejudiced to write this kinda stuff with all your heart (yes yes sookie, that cliche damn phrase) its like (i swear!) I can read your mockery under those utterly romantic words... its like I could see the romance wasn't flattering to the writer ... you know?!

So maybe I'm the only one saying this - but while I have nothing literary to complain about, I prefer chicken soup and the likes. You've cast yourself like an actor from the 60's-70's in a mould, and I'm the one-dimensional kind of audience now I reckon, not knowing how to accept you as anything but what is typical of you...

Just for second, maybe that's not good - but I'm not insinuating you're stereo - type at all Sookster - you're just the perfect out of box writer. You're the kind who can pull nearly any experiment through... except, romance is an experiment...?! Besides, there's far too many people to write the mush.

So yeh - not disappointed at all with At-O-L, nope... but its not your feature special for me.

ps: Aria - Sookie owes you one for that URGENT pm. I came here so soon courtesy thy =) And I'm stil getting a kick out of the trilogy comment - it totally fits, but you and me (more me?) need to strive and not make the 'incomplete' come true... knowing Sookie, she wont be the liability... but hey, let's think of a name for the triumvirate, shall we?! 😆

*edit* after reading the second update on pg 5...

whoa, did aria tell you this could be SUCH a fit into Pablo's?! Not even kidding! I thought I was reading a scene out of that, because the characters fit like a glove - so much, that they almost did not tally with the AR from your first post... oh I think I need to sleep over this and reconsider what to expect in this FF - the second bit to me was like sookie was forced into something she would chose to write last on the list (or maybe not even last) and then, sookie being sookie, just figured her way around making any damn genre/theme her playfield and started finding all the loopholes in the norm called 'romance' so she could accommodate it according to her spice level 😆

oh well - second update ensures I haven't given up on At-O-L yet, at all!

cheers,
nj

Edited by spln - 14 years ago

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