AR FF: Atlas of Love - Pg 5, 17/04

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Posted: 14 years ago
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The thread will be Vignettes, drabbles and short random moments in lives of Armaan and Riddhima. The stories will be short and mostly disconnected.

It started out as a challenge from Aria "Esquisse" to write something short and sweet without all the conundrums of life and leaving behind a comfortable zone. So here it is!

I am open to requests as far as if you have patience to wait for my response. 😊I enjoy writing small vignettes so I am hoping it should be okay for me to write quite frequently.
So yeah!



Index:

I. The beginning - Page 1
2. The Sound of Spices - Page 5
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Posted: 14 years ago
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And finally the map oops!😛 Atlas of love is here...

Can't wait, update soon.
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1. The Beginning

Crimson fabric fluttered around the patch of skin couple of inches above her naval playing peek-a-boo along with passing wind. Had they not been carrying case records and performing duties at hospital, he would have run his palms over the fabric and pulled her towards him. She caught him glancing towards her and let out a sigh.

"Armaan, are you listening to what I am saying?" She asked exasperated.

"Your sari is very distracting, Dr. Riddhima", he grinned an answer. She hit him across the chest with the file she was carrying and hid a smile.

"What made you wear a sari anyway? And isn't today your off?" He asked walking a tad closer to her.

"Secret!" She gushed amidst chuckles.

He shook his head and went on about his job for the day taking case files wiping out mirth from his face but retaining only a small smile. He had admired that woman for long and they were now in a position where he could tease her only to be teased back or play along.

She was an enigma gift wrapped in intelligence and bow-tied with wit.

If she hadn't been that, he was doubtful of the attention he was desperately seeking whenever she buzzed around.

Three hours later he trotted around the hospital corridors dragging his exhausted butt slowly to the lockers. Given the lateness of the time, he wasn't surprised to find it dimly lit with residue of passed day lingering in its ambience.

It was then he heard the sound of lighting of matchstick and silhouette of the woman who was now lighting candles; candles which stood on a small sized cake of irregular shape which seemed to have more icing than actual baked cake with "Happy Birthday" written on it in an urgent scrawl.

"Riddhima?" He said hesitatingly.

"Happy birthday Armaan", she looked up and said with a shy smile. Her shyness was completely understandable as they had never really publicized or even accepted to themselves what they mean to each other. Armaan was quite a popular guy with friends strewn across every few yards and she wondered what she was to him. And when her heart stuttered for a logical answer, her stomach had dropped in anticipation.

Armaan walked towards her happiness evident in his eyes. He was aware of the embarrassment which Riddhima was trying desperately to hide by the way she was looking at the cake and steadily avoided to look at him.

He understood her then. In that one unexplainable moment where everything around them stood still and she looked up to see straight in his eyes. The residual confusion from her inner argument lay there and the barely there smile held a bit of fear of rejection.

As he walked towards her ignoring her personal face, the confusion in her eyes now spread to her face and pink laced her cheeks. Her eyes widened as she felt his face coming closer to her and gasped as his arms wrapped her small waist and pulled her towards him.

"I wanted to do this since I saw you this morning." He said.

And then he kissed her erasing all possible doubts that her heart harbored.

Candles swooshed in the wind refusing to blow out and marked the beginning of something exhilarating and magical.

Sookie

Edited by -Sookie- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Reserving here too :)
First thing's first - Thank You!! for accepting the "challenge" and actually going through with it and posting...You'll have to agree, this title is so much better than the other one..kudos to you for that. And now - Nj- I know you'll be here at this thread sooner or later - we have a complete Trilogy here - AoL, IoL and At-o-L ..just hope the common thread between them doesnt end up being the three incomplete love stories!😆 (yeh this goes out to me and to-you-who-knows-what-i-am-talking-about-one-busy-writing-excerpts!! sigh AoL!!)
Coming back to this, Sookie - I am not going to welcome you back, that staus message is so misleading - you show up mysteriously- you post - you disappear!! classic Sookie!! we'll just have to accept this as the expected!!😆 This story, first thing I noticed, was the title no, not the obvious one I've already mentioned above but the "AR FF" bit I was like whaaa?? O_O...Not an OS - that was surprise alright...and the story is off to an unexpected start, sprinkled with surprisingly low dosage of wit and sarcasm :D ...I won't explain that here again..you know what I mean! Overall, it was a nice start, and I am eager to see how you develop this further. And I hope, after all that effort, there was some amount of fun in writing this as well, which was the whole point. I suspect you may write more than you thought...
Great start!
Aria
ps. I forgot to mention earlier, I was grinning like an idiot right from the start...no specifics as yet...!!😆 yeh! that's how much of a shock certain things were!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hi! Sookie, what a title! It's the title which pulled me to this thread. Though I'm not a fan of AR, but I think so your writings and the title has already hooked me to this thread. 😆

Best Wishes dear.

PS : Increase the quantity of your writings in MG world also
😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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My views are exactly the same on this just like Alice....
I'm not an AR fan but I'm hooked to your writing....you are just so awesomeee :)

This was very refreshing piece of writing and enjoyed reading it a lot !

Take Care.
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Naval play, Sooks??

Thanks Aria for getting the girl to go where she has never been before... ;)

-Devi
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing one pls do pm me next time
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Posted: 14 years ago
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U always come up with surprises!!And this one was really nice:)
Was missing reading AR in u words for sometime (am i hinting u to update something?Err..ignore )and here i get the treat..
It was simple..(for me😆) and lovely!!

He understood her then. In that one unexplainable moment where everything around them stood still and she looked up to see straight in his eyes. The residual confusion from her inner argument lay there and the barely there smile held a bit of fear of rejection.

^^Loved these lines..
Well..i am glad aria pestered u for this..it is worth and hoping u continue it ...
Request..i will think about it and i am patient enough :)
Great one sookie as always..
Good wishes..
Sri:-)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sridevi27

Naval play, Sooks??


Thanks Aria for getting the girl to go where she has never been before... ;)

-Devi

And what a pleasant surprise its been!! You are welcome Devi...for all the convincing it required...and some blackmail too... Sookie was a sport to give this a shot, and I hope she continues since this just promises to get better...😉I'm still partially shocked to respond to the actual part, so excuse my ignorance ;)😆
Aria

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