AR FF: Atlas of Love - Pg 5, 17/04

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Pebblez

@Pebblez

Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#51

M! :D

Is it weird that reading every single sentence of those extremely well written romantic shots made ma burst into laughter? Errr, probably not, because if somebody knows YOU as well as I do (at least from here, barring Aria) :P they'd get the pun in this.

Good attempt out of your 'comfort zone' woman, just that there's NO zone for you other than the Sookie and *ahem ahem* ones..you know what I'm talking about.

Niiice!! :P

@ Aria: I aint so impressed with your pestering. There's still pieces of her in it. Can you nag a freaking CF out of her? :P :P would make my day!!

Okay, ciao! retiring again to my world of physio and anatomy, notify me if an update comes along!!

Kiran.

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Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

Not planning to update this Sooks?

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Aanya

@Aanya.

Sparkler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Just came across this! Wonderful work :)

I loved the first one! I must say I was surprised though! You romanticize maturely in most of your work! This was different! A "good" different though 😆

As for the second one, there's nothing like a loved one waiting for you at home <3

Beautifully written!

Please add me to your PM list :)

xoxo

Aanya

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568124

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

So I finally took you up on that PM and here I'm.

First of all...Really? Is this even you? I mean did I rightly register when I read the update?

It's a bit of a shock to me but as you read the Sookie whom you know comes out...playing hide and seek here and there (just like the first line of your post).

You already know I don't read AR, but I guess your writing makes all the difference and the characters no longer seem so alien or distant to me. In such terse prose, there is vivid depiction of her anticipation and somehow it took the indifference I had towards her...i have no thoughts for Armaan, but hopefully that would come to pass too.

What's cooking up Sookie? And I love the play of words there too...

I agree with esquisse there, the update mellows you down in a calming way and you are left there with nothing but this couple spending a serene night, drenched in moonlight..Makes you want not more...but I guess it's ok to ask for you more updates...So when are you updating next?

Great writing Sookie.

Hasini

Edited by 6thElement - 14 years ago

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