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Posted: 14 years ago

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-truly magical-
part 170

He held her from the wrist. She looked at him little in shock, he never resisted her. She was bit hurt..he immediately shook his head nahi jaan.. I was just wanting u not to do anything. He closed his eyes feeling miserable that he hurt he yet again.
Geet - I am strong enough to carry a plate she snapped
Maan ordered - sit down, I think I need to explain the rules to u
he looked at her to seek her attention u r here to rest, I am here to take care of u. I will do every thing, cooking, cleaning, feeding.. everything ...he hugged mk side ways
geet turned away in anger, mk looked at Geet & then Maan.
He pulled the wrist & held her in his arms as she fell on his chest. Jaan .. tum kuch nahi karogi..his vice trembled..pleaded to her. She nodded snaking her hand in his back. He can't even express how contented he felt. He kissed her forehead.

Maan cleared the table. He got her medicines & milk for mk & Geet. Mk was fighting with Geet to change her night dress. He smiled. Main change karvadetha hoon. Mk immediately hugged & hid behind Maan.
Geet - aap hi sambalo aapni beti ko
how much he loved to hear that.. aapki beti!!! he kept looking at Geet lost in those words
Geet lifted her brows & asked him wat happened ' he just shook his head with a smile trying to hide the evident pain. He dressed her up & made her lie on the bed.
Mk - da..da...dy.. sto...ry...sto...ry sto...ry sto...ry sto...ry
he hugs her ' trying to ease her words
he told the story.
He didn't even have to complete & she dosed off. Geet kept watching him. She so much wanted to be in his arms too. She rested her hand on mk, who slept between them. Maan was softly patting mk on her stomach. His hand patted her hand now. She smiled with her eyes pretended to be closed. Mk turned to hug Maan as she slipped into deep sleep.

Now Geet was getting restless. His closeness, he was there next to her, he was holding her hand, she wanted to be in his arms. His touch send a warm current all over her. She turned little bit, still not letting his hand slip off hers that rested on mks back now. She just couldn't sleep. Babaji yeh kuch bolten kyun nahi she twisted her lips. She slowly moved her leg to caress his pretending to be an accident. He knew her intentions. He didn't know how to express his feelings. He was guilty, he was guilty for not taking care of her when she needed him the most..for not helping her life she lived... for not keeping her here with him in his embrace where she belonged... for not cleaning her messes & wiping her tears.. for the things he should have done just for her...only her....wat was her mistake.. she loved him.. still she did...why she does..he felt miserable for pushing her away.. when she needed to be with him.. the most..

he snapped out his thought when he felt her arm slide his waist, her lips resting on his back, her breath fanning nape of neck. Her whole body cuddled into his back. A tear escaped his eye. It was indeed magical.. truly magical.. both his angels cuddled into him. Both not letting him away. They loved him not matter wat. They just wanted him.. they didn't care if he expressed it back or not.. they didn't care wat he was.. they just wanted shower him with all the love they had.. unconditionally.. even though he didn't deserve any of them... he wanted to breakdown.. he couldn't !!! he couldn't even cry.. just a silent tear rolled down his eyes, as Geet moved still closer in her sleep. Her legs going around him holding him tight in with in her. Latter at night mk woke up & looked for Geet.
Mk - mujhe beech main sona hain.. she cried
Geet - aaja mera bacha..she twisted her lips & looked at Maan.. cribbing waise bhi yanha sone ka koi pyada nahi hain.
mk again dossed off hugging Maan tight..da ..da...ddy..after slipping between them
he knew Geet was angry. He wanted to say something, & still not a leading conversation.
Maan - abhi bhi kyun stutter kar rahi hain
Geet - because she fears..her voice was painful
he felt scared hearing those words..like he knew wat she was about to say
Geet - she fears she may wake up &
he could let those words escape her mouth, he hugs them both closer... nahi jaan.. aise kabhi nahi hoga..
Geet was kind of cold in her words & thought now - hope so...
she was a person who used to be so sure of every thing... but now.. all she could say was hope so!!! may be because she didn't understand the distance between them still.. why he didn't speak to her!! may be the past has made her to weigh her words before she spoke ..or be certain about... but it hurt!!! it really ached when she sounded uncertain of their being together.. because he had filled that uncertainty in her.. first with his words now with his act!!

With in a week Viraat had linked all the dots. He reached to gk's house. It was empty. Her belongings were already moved. Few of her stuffs were still there. But nothing of Mk's or Maans stuff was there. Guatum called Maan & informed him everything.
Gautum - aab kya karna hain
Maan rubbed his temple & whispered something
gautum - are u sure
Maan - umm
gautum - I think I need to ask Geet once
Maan - its ok.. I know her.. she won't refuse
gautum - that will be very high profile stuff
Maan - u will get the required written permission from whom ever u want.
Gautum - ok!!

Precap
Shocking news headline

-PREV PART 169 NEXT PART 171-

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muskan

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-memorable-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#52

awwwww i so love family reunion😊❤️

still geet is longing for maan😭 loved that she initiated & felt little jealous of jr. mk😛

Jr. mk is ⭐️

maneet's torture doesn't seems to end soon 😔

oh no viraat know now that shweta is gk😲😡

thank god he doesn't find any treace of Sr. & Jr. MK

what is it with the precap what did maan tell to gautam that made shocking headline in news

can't wait for next part, update soon👏👏

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heermeher

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Posted: 14 years ago

#53

Sweety family. Please send them to communication classes before their 25th anniversary comes nahi tho hum ye MU read karthe rahe jayege

So viraat is trying jot the dots not bad. But ab ye headline kya thi u always leave us with cliffhanger

I just LUV the line

Waise bhi yaha sone ka kya phayda hai 😃

Just give him sometime geet he wont let u sleep for more than 2 hours he is just waiting for u to full recover

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chsweety22

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Posted: 14 years ago

#54

thanks for updating

loved the way you described maan's state of mind

awesome update as usual...

looking forward to see how the story unfolds..

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sanu3108

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Posted: 14 years ago

#55

together yet so much pain .... 😭 ...

muski itnaa chota update "pouts"

not fair !!!! ..

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 14 years ago

#56

Beautiful part..........loved it!!!
waiting to knw wats the plan and the headline.
wonderful update!!!

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 14 years ago

#57

beautiful, brilliant update. loved it.
will give defo longgg comments.
continue soon.
thnku thnku , love u love u for beautiful update.

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meravigiliso

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Posted: 14 years ago

#58

what is the breaking news ??????????????????????? and we say transparency is much needed in any relation that what lacking in maaneet relation . gussa,pyar ,narazagi ji bhi hai use man se nikaal do but both are waiting the other to speak .hope soon they will pour out their hearts .