Sabki Baaratein Aayeen - AR pt 2 - pg10;pt 3 -pg11

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Posted: 14 years ago
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okay so first of all i know everyone is going to HATE me for multiple reasons!
1. i'm in b/t installments for mujhe saach jaane ka haq hai
2. i already have 4 ffs running and have to guts/nerve to open another
3. idk you all tell me...

BUT this idea has been bugging me sooo much as in everytime i sit to write installments for other ffs, it keeps bugging me and i end up sketching bits for this idea! i had to pen down part of it as I was losing my mind thinking of it!

anyways jumping straight into it!

index:
intro:scroll down
part 1 - pge 3
part 2 - page 10
part 3 - page 11 (last part)
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Intro:

Armaan Mallik was attending his friend Abhimanyu Modi's wedding to Nikita Malhotra. Armaan had been in the United States for the past 10 years with his family, so it was interesting seeing friends after so long. Actually he had missed all the functions due to an emergency at work and had come straight for the wedding. He was talking with Atul Joshi, another old friend, when he heard Nikki speak. She was crying, "Can i have everyone''s attention please? Thankyou. I know this might be a lot to ask, par I'd like to ask my best friend to sing a song for my wedding. I know ki you didn't get a chance to practice and have sworn to not sing, par please? Meri liye? Riddhima please? I'm moving to New York with Abhi after the wedding, and I dont know ki when I'll see you again..."

Armaan wondered, why was that a lot to ask, and why did she swear not to sing again? that seemed like a strange request. Then he noticed Anjali (Atul's wife, Muskaan (Rahul's wife), Sapna (Amit's wife), and Keerti (Shubhankers wife) holding and leading a girl to stage. She was the definition of beautiful, but there was a strange sadness visible on her face.



She slightly smiled and hugged Nikki and took the mic. She closed her eyes and sighed before beginning.

Sab ki baaraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana - waves her hands indicating the barats coming
Sab ki baaraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana - points to the door
Dulhan banaake humko rajaji le jaana - twists her hand showing an invisible ghoonghat on her
Sab ki baaraatein aayi

Chaaha tha maine, socha tha maine - walks slowly meaninglessly
Kya kya the armaan dil nadaan ke, thinking about something
Aankhon mein aansu aaye - wipes her tear
Ho, aankhon mein aansu aaye par koi na aaya - another tear falls
Ab to kisi ko bhi apna ke hai bulaana
Sab ki baaraatein aayi - wipes her tear ans smiles forcefully

In aankhon mein thi ek raat saji - walking around
Haathon mein kabhi choodi si baji - shows her hands
Par aankh khuli to aaya nazar na raat saji na choodi baji - opens her eyes
Mera toota tha dil, uski jhankar thi - shows her bare hands
Saara voh rang tha mere khoone dil ka - holds her hands
Yeh to hai rona dil ka - crying
Haan, yeh to hai rona dil ka kaahe ka taraana
Ab to kisi ko bhi apna ke hai bulaana - closes her eyes

Sab ki baaraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana
Dulhan banaake humko rajaji le jaana - looks at the door as if waiting
Sab ki baaraatein aayi - tears escape her eyes

Aa aah, aa aah, aa aah - her friends all crying
Chalo jo bhi hua, voh khoob hua - holds her friends
Ab har koi mehboob hua - points to her
Hai sab ke liye yeh raat meri ab to hai yehi aukaat meri - fallss on the floor
Haske bheege palak chamkaana hai
Sooni baahein ada se laheraana hai
Gham khaake aansu peeke - her friends lift her
Ho, gham khaake aansu peeke mehfil mein gaana
Ab to kisi ko bhi apna ke hai bulaana - hugs anjali

Sab ki baaraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana - shows her friends - all married
Dulhan banaake humko rajaji le jaana - pretends to fill her own maang
Sab ki baaraatein aayi doli tu bhi laana - crying harder now
Dulhan banaake humko rajaji le jaana - points out the door
Sab ki baaraatein aayi - looks around, she is crying pretty badly
Aa aah - running away...she runs to her car and drives away

"array riddhima!! riddhima!" her friends ran after her, but it was no use, she was gone.

Armaan was confused, her voice was filled with so much pain. So much hurt. Why? why was she crying like that? Armaan turned and found all his friends crying, in fact EVERYONE had tears in their eyes after her heartfelt song.

Armaan went over to Rahul and asked, "Rahul kya hua? why was she so upset and broken? aur everyone is crying?" Rahul wiped his tears and said, "Riddhima ke kahani kuch aise hi hain ki you can't help but cry. You know everyone from our college friend group is married now but her? the strange thing is that she was set to marry first...par kismet ne aisa kiya ki ab she's a living zombie living a half life." Armaan was confused. What did he mean? Rahul walked away not being able to speak about it. Armaan stood their confused, then he felt a hand on his shoulder. He turned and saw a nana standing there. "Armaan if you'd like to know her story toh I can tell you. waise aur koi bol nahi payega...chalo beto.." Armaan sat down and looked at Nana.

"Toh suno yeh hai Riddhima ki Adha Adhuri Zindagi ka Kahani. Riddhima was always a bubbly girl, so full of life and masti. Her eyes always shined! She was the princess of all our hearts! Phir when she was in her final year of high school toh Siddhant Modi moved here. Sid and Riddhima fought at first, but humari Riddhima aisa hi tha ki nobody can hate her! When they fell in love, well even they couldn't pinpoint. They kept their relationship a secret for a few years. Then they went public in their final year of college. How they kept the relation a secret - well we don't know! everyone always suspected, but we never said anything. Phir Sid proposed to Riddhima one day. She was estatic! Even her parents agreed! everything was going beautifully for her! Soon a few months after graduation it was time for their wedding. Sangeet, Haldi, Mendhi everything happened with lots of dhoom dhaam. Sid kept sneaking into functions to try and sneak a meeting with Riddhima. Phir finally after her long wait, it was the day of her wedding. Riddhima dressed as a bride wearing the outfit Sid had sent for her. Par woh toh intezaar karte karte rehgayi. Baraat ke aane ke samay a truck hit Siddhant's car. Only Sid was killed - on spot. Riddhima's baraat never made it to the wedding. She was broken and well she still is. She is still waiting in a hope that Sid will turn up with her baraat. We took her to Sid's funeral. She saw that sid is indeed no more, par riddhima's wait has no end."

Armaan had tears in his eyes. "toh..toh how long has it been?" Nana closed his eyes, "4 years, 6 monthes, and 12 days, and 3 hours." Armaan looked at Nana shocked. "dont be so shocked. Sid was my brother."

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toh tell me should i continue??

hmm okay now going to go finish the part for mujhe saach jaane ka haq hai....pm's will go out together!

LOVE,
Ashu

BTW if you want me to continue - comment and let me know!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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You should for sure continue
N I love that song
Update soon n pm me
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Posted: 14 years ago
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u should definitley continue....
that was so nice... lovley song
thnx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i love the start! plz do continue!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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ASHUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU! I LOVE THIS CONCEPT! Pretty amaizing.. it kinda reminds me of babul? LOL but I feel sorry for Ridhimma and well for some reason I feel sorry for SID as well, their love remained uncomplete (THANK GOD!). BUT i am sooooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy coz AR are gonna Happen and Ofcourse Armaan is gonnna fix everything! Cant wait for you to reveal more and I wonder how will the story progress. Obviously you have to PM me (do you even have to ask?) Yaaar i really do love this concept its unique and heart wrenching in a totally amaizing way! ah lol when you wrote " Only sid died. on the spot" i couldnt help but imagine you all similing when writing it! hehee PLEASE UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOON!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice one but very sad yaar

thanx forpm

continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey!!
I'm cherry...: D
I love the concept!!it's so sad!!
I feel awful for riddhima.....but I also know that she'll be fine now that armaan is here!!: )
continue soon--can't wait to see how the story unfolds!: )
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing part
do continue
thanx for d pm

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey ashuuuuuuuuuu wow ek bad ek bomb............wow ek bad ek shorts .......god ashu yaar sooooooooo amazinggggggggggg fic it is.................Well u know i really love this song its really touch my heart as well as u r fic too........riddhima story is really touchng yaar.........i am really feeling bad for her ......but now is armaan is here so fear .i bet he will make herreal self.........Plzzzzzz update fast yaar .................dont make us wait to much ...............yaar u r amazing writer.i really love ur Ff like anythind .u ROCKS
love u
salina😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sure sure continue dear....
nice concept...lobed it....
thx 4da pm n do continue dear....
AMOON

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