Maidens and Madmen Upd 20 Pg30, 13/07 - Page 15

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Posted: 14 years ago
Ah! Vru ...missed your verses was just waiting for them !
and there you are with them :)

now what should I say the drama is perfectly staged !!!
and the hidden emotions are bought out so very well !!!

I'm in love with this savior !!! and your description of him :)

Keep Writing !
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks shabbu...may i call you that??

i try..but then Maan is like that..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -RushTrip-

thanks shabbu...may i call you that??

i try..but then Maan is like that..



You can call me Shabs or Shab.....😳
Shabbu is like 😕


And I love Maan the way he is....don't we ?

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Posted: 14 years ago
@Sur: Thanks for the comment :-)

@Deepa: Thank you very much!

@Fatima: Thank you!

@Vrush: :-) I loved this one!

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Posted: 14 years ago

11. Tears

The entailment of his words as his palm pressed her mouth and her back pressed the tree trunk made her eyes glassy with tears. He wasn't simply insulting her femininity, but her moral integrity as a woman.

Fallible tear escapes clutches of eyelashes betrays her helplessness as her eyes avert.

He just remains undaunted.


Next part updated - Apprehension

Edited by -Sookie- - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Question to the ones who follow the thread:

Should I be sending PMs everyday? Or you guys will visit this thread no matter?

I really want to know this since the time take to send PM is way higher than the actual writing 😆 Not to mention I am thoroughly confused as to who reads this and who doesn't. 😆

Please do respond 😊

Sookie
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Posted: 14 years ago
Great one, again, Sookie!! 🤗👍🏼

If you're really busy and its time consuming, I'll hunt the thread and do the needful! 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey...Please keep pinging 😊...I love your writing!

I havent been responding coz I really havent seen too many of these episodes...once you shift to Delhi..I am going to try and respond word to word 😛


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Posted: 14 years ago
Nice one....put forward the pain beautifully !!

n no don't stop...I love it :)
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sookie!
Are you mad!? OF COURSE continue girl! I just love the way you write, it is so darn unique and I would hate it if you stopped because you just happen to tug at my emotions when I read your posts...they bring a new feeling to all the scenes I have watched and are a delight to read! Please do continue and sorry if I sounded rude at the beginning but I'm just in love with your writing!
Love,
Z

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