Maidens and Madmen Upd 20 Pg30, 13/07 - Page 13

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Posted: 14 years ago
Your words are just too captivating!!!! Brilliant! 👏 Brilliant is too small of a word to describe this really, but i am intent on reading everything you write because your way of writing just gives everything a whole new meaning!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
thanks Sookie and here goes..

Hope is the what you gave
beyond reason to have

your hand not just held
reality and dream did blend

my anchor, my strength, my fling
you were the wind beneath my wing

hope and reason to fight
you gave me back my right
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Posted: 14 years ago
I haven't seen all these episodes....so finding it difficult to comment...

Hopefully I shall be able to contribute more once you reach the point in the story from where I started watching 😛

You weave magic with your words that goes without saying!
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

Jailbird

Her fists are bruised from violent slamming on the door and voice hoarse after pleading the elders to release her from incarceration. In the war where principles clash, she prefers to be in no man's land. But alas!

Using all her might, she throws.

One prayer. One wish. One hope.

Her veil finds him.


Beautiful ...excellent...In these few words you have summed up her plight, her disappointment and her hope and desire to fight.

Bruised and broken
but let me bind
Dejected and lost
but let me find
A hope and love
that is one of a kind
Edited by whitepearl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sookie, Rush and Whitepearl, Brilliant!!! 👏
Binge thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
Sookie, Rush and Whitepearl, Brilliant!!! 👏 Love the way how you guys put those emotions in words.. make it magic!

Sorry for the double post! My net is acting weird😕
Edited by mayurrocks - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mayurrocks

Sookie, Rush and Whitepearl, Brilliant!!! 👏 Love the way how you guys put those emotions in words.. make it magic!


Sorry for the double post! My net is acting weird😕


Thanks a lot shreya.
Edited by whitepearl - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

omg...I'm stuck behind both of you...

don't know what more to say...
delivered so beautifully, and I love the flaw...beautiful!!!
Yes, he was the reason for her transformation from a weak soul to a brave young lady!!!
@Sookie...I loved the ending words the most..as quoted from your post...

Using all her might, she throws.

One prayer. One wish. One hope.

Her veil finds him.

@Vru, you have continued right from there...and you know how much I love your poetic lines
P.S. I hope my comment won't confuse you both😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
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One prayer. One wish. One hope.

Her veil finds him.



👏 One word .. Brilliant!⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
Nothing else can be a more perfect way to say that. :)

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