Maidens and Madmen Upd 20 Pg30, 13/07

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Escapist

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Voyager

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Posted: 14 years ago

#41

Read all the three together and must say it's awesome and flawless !
How do you come up with such things and then mere 54 words yet you convey all that you wish to convey....surreal yet so real !

Beautiful and captivating dear !

-Fatima

Edited by -shabnoor- - 14 years ago

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@-Aria-

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#42

Just read the last one, its so ........succintly apt. Looks like you are really having fun with this one. Good to see you back Sookie.

Edited by esquisse - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#43

Sookie,

Once again another lovely part ⭐️

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Sur_10

@Sur_10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#44

thats something new...

And I CANT manage without a pm...or more like a reminder on the chat atleast.

good ones

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-RushTrip-

@-RushTrip-

Rocker

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Posted: 14 years ago

#45

what a beautiful portrayal....

what i thought to be promise
was nothing but a premise

for you wanted from me
was less than what i could give thee

i gave my whole being, my whole life to you
you took my very being leaving a life in me

a night to remember is what it should have been
a night i cannot forget is all i am given

what a contrast night and day bring
what you tore your bro made sing

if not for you, he would not have been mine
i should forgive you for you gave not one but two lives

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#46

@whitepearl: Thank you very much. I am trying to write whatever I think are important episodes of Geet :-)

@Fatima: Thank you very much.

@Aria: Oh yeah! I am really having fun with this one :-)

@Nadia: Thank you :-)

@Sur: You can manage!! :D Yeah yeah yeah...will remind you...

@Vrush: :-) I guess you summarized Dev-Geet relationship very well. Nicely done! Thanks much!!!

@afsha - Thank you very much

@spvd: Thanks Deepa.

@phoenixgirl: Thank you!!

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Sookie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#47

4. Nightmare

The heaviness and helplessness of her footsteps mingled with gentle sound of anklets resonated in the airport's boarding area. She screamed for his name till her voice turned her hoarse and allowed tears to flow.

She surrendered to the inviting darkness hoping all this to be a bad dream.

But nightmares had only begun.

Next part updated - Heat

Edited by -Sookie- - 14 years ago

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Sur_10

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Posted: 14 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

4. Nightmare
The heaviness and helplessness of her footsteps mingled with gentle sound of anklets resonated in the airport's boarding area. She screamed for his name till her voice turned her hoarse and allowed tears to flow.

She surrendered to the inviting darkness hoping all this to be a bad dream.

But nightmares had only begun.

My personal favorite.... :) after the first one

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Kankshita

@thegameison

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Posted: 14 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: -Sookie-

4. Nightmare
The heaviness and helplessness of her footsteps mingled with gentle sound of anklets resonated in the airport's boarding area. She screamed for his name till her voice turned her hoarse and allowed tears to flow.

She surrendered to the inviting darkness hoping all this to be a bad dream.

But nightmares had only begun.