Maidens and Madmen Upd 20 Pg30, 13/07 - Page 3

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sookie...

i only respond to stimuli..and..you provide me enough...


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Posted: 14 years ago
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2: Fluvial

The nonchalance with which he discards her wet body on the bank of river chills her more than the cold water did when she blindly took a plunge. Tears, moisture from lake stuck on her eyelashes made his profile diaphanous. An enfant terrible, she decides.

The second meeting leaves her in a Kafkaesque daze.


Next part updated -- Monsoon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice concept

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Posted: 14 years ago
#24
Ah Sookie..you are the best


whether to thank or hurl an insult
whether to cry or laugh is the guilt

of not being independent
of being coy and suppliant

to hate one self for weakness
or hate him for his strength

the battle of wills
one outside other within..



fell in love with this story that day sookie...and now..your journey through it is making me fall in love once again...

thanks for this..
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Sookie,

That was wonderful, even in the show, i was shocked with the way Maan just dumped Geet on the floor 😆

Nadia

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Posted: 14 years ago
#26

Nice way to say it all!

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Short n simply written
Liked it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Sookie-

2: Fluvial

The nonchalance with which he discards her wet body on the bank of river chills her more than the cold water did when she blindly took a plunge. Tears, moisture from lake stuck on her eyelashes made his profile diaphanous. An enfant terrible, she decides.

The second meeting leaves her in a Kafkaesque daze.


SUPERB.👏...Good job at selecting scenes that flow together..😊.Ur vocab is really nice....Impressed...👍🏼



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Posted: 14 years ago
#29
@afsha - Thank you mucho!

@Vrush - Yep. One of the best scenes of the series without any cliched post semi-traumatic event. Awesomely penned!

@Nadia - I was shocked and that scene made me like the show :)

@P - :D Thanks!!!!

@Absoluv - Thanks so much! :-)
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Posted: 14 years ago
#30
ah my favourite maan geet scene... seriously... 😊 and i love the fact that your drabble made me take google uncle's help... thrice... 😆 i'm looking forward to you drabbling on all their major scenes... 😊

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