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anu.happy4ever

@anu.happy4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#61

ahh...I'm so loving this...its like sweet story telling :-D More than sweet, captivating!

And, now that you hav returned, I hope the words increase from 54 to......... ( you know what I mean right? right? 😉 )

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#62

@Sur: Thank you :=)

@Kanky: Thank you very much. Yeah, they are too short. But I can update daily because of that :D

@pixie - Thank you thank you.

@Prasanthi: thank you :D

@Vrsuh: Woah Vrush. This time, am spell bound too!

@Nadia: Thank you mucho!

@Afsha: Thanks Thanks :=)

@Shreya: Thank you! Yep, Vrushali is just amazing when she verses.

@Zee: Thank you :D

@NJ/SC: Imagine you to pick up on something inane :D "Kafkaesque" was thrown in just to take a break from normalcy. Actually the chapter which is your favorite was only an extension of my own ego :D If you had not realized by now! And then reality hit and I realized that modesty is a virtue I was not blessed with :-) Alright, am just kidding :D
Yeah yeah yeah...I know about that. Will get to Infinity soon. I hope :-)
I was wondering when you would end up here :D Glad you stopped by.

@Fatima: Thank you very much...

@Deepa: Thanks :=)

@Anu: No. No. No. The word count remains at 54 :D. Am much glad that you liked it :=)

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Sookie

@-Sookie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#63

5. Heat

The wind expatiates about its old association with her. Mid-morning heat tinges her cheek pink as she tries to make sense of the situation with a snarling stranger.

Amidst her desperate rants, he waspishly utters - The land is not yours but mine.

Brightness consumes her in its womb and he breaks her fall.

Next part updated -Geet

Edited by -Sookie- - 14 years ago

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blueflames

@blueflames

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Posted: 14 years ago

#64

yipeeeeee

I am the first to comment :)

Awesome!!!!

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Binge

@Binge

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Posted: 14 years ago

#65

Sookie!!! 🤗 👏 Speechless!!

Brightness consumes her in its womb and he breaks her fall.

Loved it!!!! 😊 You know, when you write this, I can actually visualize that day and the scene where she passes out and he lifts her up. She's in yellow dress and gosh, what makes me even more contented is that Maan who had been unintentionally rude to Geet that time, now considers her as his oxygen, his life! Also that first impression is not always the last impression! 😊 Its the time that counts the most.

Edited by mayurrocks - 14 years ago

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Tamalika Basu

@sukklover

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Posted: 14 years ago

#66

simply supar dear...👏👏👏.

keep it up...👍🏼.

lov,❤️

Tama

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-pixie-

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Posted: 14 years ago

#67

@spln: Thank you for the compliment🤗.Believe me, I am no writer. Your words were very kind.

Now that I have found you, when are you updating the Stats FF/OS/OS 😆

@Bri: Captivating as usual!

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Escapist

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Posted: 14 years ago

#68

Too captivating....I could imagine each and every scene that had taken place
it was like reading this replayed every thing back in a flash.....
Maan's rudeness yet concern and Geet's palpable condition......

Awesome :)