Maidens and Madmen Upd 20 Pg30, 13/07 - Page 6

Wow Sookie...spell bound..

54 words that are profound enough to evoke an image...tremendous..but then..i am enamoured..by your talent..


Elation of a new life turns to anguish
the light too bright before it did extinguish

Contrast of soft and hard, the sound and silence
the voice reverberated though finding no resonance

Feeling bereft and alone
the shouts turned to drone

embracing the floor and darkness
a fate that left emptiness and hardness

turned to stone without emotion
finding him was the only motion

again destiny intruded
he was included

and things turned once again
for better or worse, the question did remain

I loved the last line esp

sookie!!!! 😲😲😲

Thanks mayurrocks..


i am only as good as my muse...and Sookie has always had this effect on me..to take it from where she left off..

read four in a go - i see your pattern, in flow, and in independence... but i think i prefer the former. i want to not think of the episodes that come flashing back on reading the lines, but read it like snippets out of a brand new story - with just two names i know - that you don't mention anyways!

my favorite so far is the second. and the favorite of that is line last...there's no downing you on using some info in the most unexpected, phenomenal way - Kafkaesque falls right in line!

that said...to clear misconceptions you harbor - god knows how - W*H! i don't read horoscopes, except when u forced something on my uncorrupted mind last year around new years ... and, twitter is also not my thing... so 55/54/66/65 is definitely less... its like getting a glimpse of ur talent at writing (and commenting to up ur already *cough* ego *cough* 😆 and get no deserved return of reading the Substantial Sookie Something... bottom line: whatever all the nice people here may say, ur being a tease sookster! 😆 and i'm not falling for that trick, yet! 😆

(which also means, i'm still waiting... to go back all the way to where it begun... u know what, i hope its still brewing into existence...and this is not a pester note. I just happen to remember things 😆)

btw - this is such a random question - how many times have u read God of Small Things?

cheers,
your lovable SC =)

Originally posted by: -pixie-

Lion

Something about the rabbit caught the lion's eye- was it the plea for help, the beseeching look on her face or was it that smooth smooth fur?

Deep in thought he put down the beer bottle and made his way to where the drama was unfolding.

After all rabbits taste so good with beer.

wow! you should write more... more than just 54 words that is! you sound like sadist sookie's sadist twin with that last line! 😆 no seriously - i bet she loved your response, its the kind every writer wants to see on their thread! 👏