FF:Our Strange Journey-Step27 Pg71 (28/9) UPDATING - Page 9

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Posted: 14 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

hahah funny update!! I am still confused though maybe am slow..but Dev and Geet don't like each other why??😆😆😆

Well You are defo not slowwwwwwwwwwww - erm......I havent personally revealed any such reason yet but hmmm....Dev doesn't seem to be too fond of Geet.......whereas Geet ....hmmm she doesnt have anything against the dude...............................yet
Hehe updating in 2 mins xx
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Posted: 14 years ago
#82
Well Well Well
I'm back yes I know my time keeping is like totally rubbish - but wat can I do.............my net died at the best tym ever...just when I finish setting everything in the post box....click post...and BAM it goes!!!!!
Anyways
Heres 3rd of 4
Enjoy xx
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Maan's POV

Mr.Smith: Maan, right?? I was informed that you would be joining us this year. How are you finding the school so far – I know it's quite big, and one can easily get lost, but you'll soon get accustomed to it.

Maan: Err yess... it's Maan Singh Khurana actually and the school is indeed quite big but I guess I shall get used to it soon and its people*thinking of the girl bothering Pari*

Mr. Smith: wells that's the spirit my boy, Come we'll talk on our way to class. Hope you enjoy your experience here Maan, everyone here is rather helpful and friendly- so don't hold back from asking anything or any help you may need. And of course, if you ever do need someone to talk to about anything that may bother you or worry you – then please do come to me....I am generally the first point of call for many students here in this school.....................................

The old man continued to talk and talk and talk and talk but Maan couldn't seem to stop himself from thinking about the girl that left Pari's side this morning. He couldn't stop thinking that a senior was bullying his sister – HIS sister, the MSK's sister – he had to do something, but Pari didn't seem to want to tell....but he had to find out from someone.....and if Pari was being bullied he would have to complain....but what would he complain about and about whom. Maan was yet again lost in his thoughts when he saw Dev in the corridor. His back was towards him, He thought he'll ask him about the girl from the morning – he seemed to know things about the type of people Pari befriended. He walked determinedly towards him, as nearly he reached, he saw Dev was talking to someone – a girl perhaps...he wanted to get closer......he saw her eyes – they were a hazel brownish colour –but before he could get a better look, she turned away and walked in the other direction and Dev too followed suit and entered the room on his left.

Who was that girl? Why was Dev talking to her in the corridor? Could it be the same girl from this morning – could it be that Dev too was being bullied by her....oh my gosh....but her eyes....no no her eyes – no they didn't seem deceiving.....from however much I did see. So who was she???

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Mr.S: Right class, settle down now....we have a new student joining us today...*he gestured for Maan to come forward* - this is Maan everyone, Maan Singh Khurana and from today he shall be part of this class- so please welcome him and be nice to him and I hope you guys will help him until he get used to things around here.

Maan sees everyone smiling and looking at him – he can't help but to give a faint smile back. The teacher gestures him to go sit on the table near the window. He sat on the furthest chair on the table- closer to the window, which is slightly open bringing in fresh air – which is what he needed right now to clear his head.

Mr.S: Right folks, as you all know this is going to be your final year here and it is a very important year for you guys too as you will all disperse into different schools hereafter. To celebrate your achievements here, we have a custom of throwing a welcome party to our final years in the beginning of the year, so for you guys it shall be this coming Friday after school and then as the year comes to an end we all have our leaving assembly and then a short trip for you all to enjoy your last few days with your friends.

Everyone cheered with excitement, and enthusiasm as the teacher began distributing the different duties of preparing the welcome party to people. He came up to me and handed me a few sheets with questions asking me to attempt them as they needed to certify what set to place me in for maths and science. I took a look at them, and began working on them. As I began I heard the teacher calling out for someone and then turning to someone to ask them – I couldn't help but eavesdrop

Mr.S: Pinky...where is Geet??

"Geet" – Maan thought......it was a nice name.....it had a magical feel to it....I felt a ping in my chest- as if I had some kind of connection with the name........I remained dazed out for a while with the name echoing in my ears........until Mr Smith came and asked if I needed any help...I was broken out of the daze and nodded in negative and again began working – forgetting the moment that just passed.

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Posted: 14 years ago
#83

Right Folks because I'm feeling really tired🥱🥱🥱......I thought I'd post the next one too......⭐️

So I want double, no triple no QUADRUPLE😃 the comments and length – it could be worse you know.....I could just go to sleep and not update these updates – but I'm nice and so here goes the........

4th of the 4!!😃

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Geet POV:
Hey babaji, mummy ko bhi abhi hi kuch kaam parna tha – mujhe welcome party ki committee sheet sign karni thi, par ab toh saari spaces fill hogayi hongi.......babaji – plzzzzzzz tusi toh jaante ho na, committee ka hissa hona mera bachpan ka ...nahi nahi par pichle do saalon se toh mera sapna raha hai, haina? – aur aaj jab woh sapna sach hone ja raha hai te tusi mummy nu bhej diya – not fair babajiiii

Oh geet – tu yh kya bar bar kar rahi hai..........teri mummy ayi hai – zaroor koi important baat hogi.....avain tohri na aanevali hai........oh teri...... main kahin lunch toh nahi bhool gayi subah subah.....nahi nahi woh toh mere bag mein hai.....toh phir......haww kahin kuch sad sad...nahi nahi geet think good good – sab kuch will be good good.

Par yh mummy hai kahan.....yahan toh koi nahi hai....uss Dev ne toh kaha tha ke reception pe wait kar rahi hai.........hmm udhar dekh ti hoon........arre idhar bhi nahi.....shayad wait karte karte ghar ke liye nikli hongi –geet tu bhi na kitna tym lagati hai – ab unhe kahan dhoondoon..... main gate ke paas dekh kar aati hoon........huh yahan bhi nahi – toh kah......

Voice: Miss Geet Handa! What exactly do you think you are doing?

Geet's thoughts were broken.......as fear engulfed her tiny self as she turned to face the school headmaster – who didn't look too pleased with finding Geet here – at this time of day.

HM: I hope you weren't thinking of running truant dear

Geet: er ...n..n..nooooo Ms Munroe.......aisa kuch bhii....I mean it's nothing of that sort....I was just looking for my mum...she..

HM: Your mother my dear, you will find is probably at home, sitting back with peace thinking her daughter is at school and under safe hands. Do you realise the consequences of your actions if you had proceeded outside of those gates?

Geet: I'm sorry Ms, but I was told that my mother was here to see me at reception and since I couldn't find her I thought she may be here near the gate..........I'm sorry Ms, I was not trying to get you or myself into trouble. *Geet said as she lowered her eyes with shame*............

If there was one thing Geet didn't like, that was a tarnish on her reputation amongst school teachers and heads – everyone knew what a hardworking girl she was and her bubbly nature was not new to them all – in fact all staff were quite familiar with her nature and knew she would never do anything to bring shame to her parent's name or image – perhaps that is why, Ms Munroe didn't proceed further with her questioning and beckoned her to come in and make her way to her class

HD: Miss Handa, I believe you are getting late for your class, so I would suggest you come in and hurry off to your class before you get a late mark in the registration.

Geet heeds to what has been said but not before looking back once more to ensure this wasn't another one of Dev's stupid pranks........but sadly it seemed so

Ms Munroe realises the hesitation in Geet and asks her to tell her who had informed her of her mother being here. But Geet being Geet, the mahaan caring soul she is, never snitches on anyone – it wasn't in her rule book of being the cool and happening chick she was. So here too she remained silent and hurries off to her class with a quick sorry to the headmaster.

As Geet walks up the stairs to her class..............

Yeh Dev ki problem kya hai?? Usko mere se itni problem kyun hai – par aaj toh hadh hi kardi........ajj baal baal bacchii hoon main varna woh Ms Munroe toh mujhe kacha chabajaati. Offooo babajii – yh kya kar rahe ho mere saat....aaj mere pehle din pe hi daant pila di – toh agay ka poora saal kaise hoga.......... mere se koi galti hogi kya?? Then y are you treating me soooo??? Yeh dev kit oh main – aane do – aane do use mere saamne...uska murga na banaya toh........nahi nahi Geet yh tu kya soch rahi hai....usne toh mazak soch kar kiya – toh tu itni upset kyun ho rahi hai.....par woh mazaak uos ke liye hoga – mujhe toh asli daant par gayi na........par uss ne galti ki to ki- is ka matlab you bhi us ski jaisi bane gi – nahi nahi Geet tu aise kuch nahi karegi – usse pata bhi nahi chal ne dena ke tujhe bura laga haan...aise hi............*Geet's eyes widen in shock as she reaches her class door and instantly sees someone sitting in her seat on her table* – yh kaun hai??? Kaun hai jisko yh nahi pata ki Geet Handa ki seat pe koi nahi baitha – ek min....abhi iss ko batati hooonn..........

And she proceeds to open the door...................................

Precap:.......hmm I want you guys to tell me what you think will happen??😉

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That's it for today folks!!!! Get comments throwing at me....hopefully no jooti's or stuff coming my way - my poor umbrella broke cos of the wind today in the rain!!!!😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
#84
nice update! OHh man Maan thinks that Geet is the bullly lol..ahahhaa that is so funny!😆😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
#85
nice do continue plz,
thx for the pm.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#86

Thanks for the Quadrapule installments

all of them were lovely n bubbly. sooorrry, kan pakde ke sorry for the late reply having exams still having 3 of them🤢 n dreaming about FFs even in dreams😡😆

coming back nice bonding btn pari,meera n geet....liked how maan cared for her sister....does maan think that the reason for pari sobbing is geet still confused....loved when dev n meera said what... n dev trying to take his bro away before he finished the rakhi ceremony😆...maan lost in those eyes dreamy...does she meets anyone before she opens the door

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Posted: 14 years ago
#87
Liked all 4 parts
Maan thks a lot
He shuld give rest to his brain a lil
Faltu thking that senior is bullying his sis n bro
Sis toh we can understand but bro also impossible
Liked the way Dev was caught in confusion due to Maan
Pari will paka ak Meera abt her blushing
Maan got sumthg is wrong between them
Dev eerrrrr wat prob does he hav wit Geet
Why cant he jus stay away frm her
Maan ko toh Geet ka naam bhi pasand aagaya
Geet liked that all teachers loved her
She to mahaan
How can she forgive Dev wen she was gonna be ounished for his mere prank
Im not liking Dev
Geet toh was ready to fght wit Maan as he is siiting in her place
Lets c wat happens aage
Liked all parts
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Posted: 14 years ago
#88
hey
ur fanfic is realluy good.. i just read all the 9 parts now!!.... new story...
please PM me when you update next time...
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Posted: 14 years ago
#89
awesome part. enjoyed lots.
maan thinks a lot.
dev - meera. and meera is blushing. pari saw it.
maan thinks something wrong., dev drag him away and now maan more sure about it.
now what is upto dev. what is his problem with geet now.
aww maan loved geet's name.
loved geet's p.o.v.
update soon.
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Posted: 14 years ago
#90
wow trisha..loved it..and guess..mmm how about a fight..i would love botth arrogance se bhare fools to get into a fight..hehe

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