||SaVan|| Happily Ever After?

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello All!
I am Jahnvi and this is my first Fan Fiction.
I have been reading a lot of FFs here and decided to write one
myself too and see if you guys like it.😊



"Have I told you yet...
how much you mean to me...
Have I told you yet...
About all the happiness you bring...
Just in case I haven't...
I want you to know that...
You're the best thing...
that's ever happened to me!"


Main Characters:

Avantika Chopra (Avani) (female protagonist)
Manoj & Rani Chopra (Avantika's deceased parents)
Veena Gill (avani's aunt)
Hina Qureshi (avani's BFF)
Sagar Ahuja (male protagonist)
Latika Ahuja (sagar's mother)
Rakesh Ahuja (sagar's father)


(I will add more characters as the story continues)

Character Analysis:

Avantika Chopra:

'She was like a kite ready to fly. All she needed was someone to hold her string and let her go higher and higher.'

Background: 24 years old. Born in India but brought up in San Francisco, CA (United States) by her bua (father's sister/aunt). Her mother died right after giving her birth and father died a couple of years after that in a car crash. Engaged-to-marry once but it was called off due to mutual lack of interest.

Personality: "Girl next door" type. Loving, caring, down-to-earth, respectful, successful, beautiful, self-confident, careful, faithful, doesn't believe in love.

Profession: Photographer. Graduated from Academy of Art University-SF.

Veena Gill:

Background: 55+ yrs. Old. Avantika's bua. A widow and childless but always considered Avantika as her child and loves her dearly. Been living in US for more than 25 years. Wants to go live with husband's sister's family in India for about 6 months and visit all the temples there (go on a tirathyatra).

Personality: bubbly, jolly, hindi cinema freak, protective (of Avantika), full of life, dependable, sympathetic, romantic.

Profession: Owns several Indian restaurants in southern SF.

Hina Qureshi:

Background: 23 years old. Born and raised in SF, CA. Went to school and is now best friends with Avantika.

Personality: Spoiled rich girl, loves dating guys (for short period of time only), carefree, independent, caring, lovable, loyal, trustworthy, silly.

Profession: A cosmetologist.

Sagar Ahuja:

'He wove dreams and all he needed was someone who would fill colors in them'

Background: 26 years old. Born and raised in Delhi, India. Latika & Rakesh's son. Divorced after wife (Ritika) left him for someone else. Has a two year old daughter named Ishana. Lives separately from parents.

Personality: Smart, handsome, successful, charming, over-protective, sensitive, short-tempered, generous, understanding.

Profession: A writer.


Rani & Manoj Chopra ----- Veena & Ravi Gill ------ Latika & Rakesh Ahuja
(both deceased) (Ravi deceased) |
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Avantika Sagar & Ritika Ahuja
(divorced)
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---- = siblings |
& = married Ishana




The analysis for the other characters will be continued as the story progresses.

I will start with part one soon. Till then, I would like to see comments and suggestions from you all. Only then will I continue!
Please press the like button if you want me to PM you after the update!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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sounds good...pm me when u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
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amazing! i love the characters already! 😃
Pleeeeeeeaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeeee update sooooooon! 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: jahnvi.angel10


Sagar Ahuja:

'He wove dreams and all he needed was someone who would fill colors in them'

Background: 26 years old. Born and raised in Delhi, India. Latika & Manoj's son. Veena's nephew. Widowed after wife (Ritika) left him for someone else. Has a two year old daughter named Suhana. Lives seperately from parents.



@Bold - I like this sentence very much.... keep going!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: DCgirl


@Bold - I like this sentence very much.... keep going!


oops.. my mistake! it was supposed to be divorced. anyway, glad you like it😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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[Scene 1, at San Fransisco International Airport]

avantika: bua.. meri chinta karna band karo. main bhi aa jaungi na 2 hafte mein wahan. aur waise bhi aap mujhe wahan jaake bhool jaane wale ho.

veena: khabardaar dubara aise kaha toh. main tujhe ek pal ke liye bhi nahin bhula sakti kabhi bhi. achha sun--

hina: auntyji! plz stop it now na. aapki avani ab chhoti bacchi nahin hai. aur main hoon na uske saath. abhi aap bina chinta kare jao.

veena: haan tu theek keh rahi hai, hina puttar (beta). woh kya hai na maine kabhi isse ek din se zyada apne se door nahin kiya. isliye thodi tensed ho gayi thi.

avantika: bui!!! i'll miss you. and i promise main roz phone karungi aur isse pehle ki aap kaho, main theek se khana khaungi, darwaze-khidkiyan band rakhoongi. happy? aur haan Latika aunty ko kehna mujhe aate hi unke haath ka bana halwa aur poha khana hai.

veena: (laughs out loud) haan haan keh doongi, meri bacchi! apna khayal rakhna.
(Announcement: this is a final call for flight 438B flying to New Delhi, India)

hina: chalo aunty. ab toh final call bhi aa gaya.

avantika: hina, its gayi. aa gayi.

hina: (rolls her eyes at avani) shut up! (then winks at veena)

Veena hugged both Avani & Hina one last time, headed towards the check-in counter, turned around and waived at the two girls. They both waived back and waited to make sure Veena was all the way inside before they left the airport.


[Scene 2, same time in ND, India]


Latika: Suno, tume Sagar ko phone kiya ki nahin abhi tak?

Rakesh: haan woh raaste mein hai. Ishana thoda na aane ki zidd kar rahi thi isliye late ho gaya.

Latika goes silent thinking about her son and granddaughter.

Rakesh: kya hua? chup kyon ho gayi?

Latika: tumhe nahin lagta ki Ritika ke chale jaane ke baad hamara Sagar bahut badal sa gaya hai? mera kehna ka matlab hai ki Ishana ki zimmedari uspe aa gayi hai aur woh akele hi ek saal se usse sambhal raha hai. iss chakkar mein usne ghoomna firna, doston se milna bilkul band hi kar diya hai. tum mauka dekh kar usse fir se kehna ki woh yahan aa jaye rehne ke liye hamare saath.

Rakesh: hmmm main usse baat karunga! par aisa nahin lagta ki woh -----

Someone rings the doorbell.

Rakesh: Lo aa gaya tumhara beta!

He opens the door and sees Sagar with Ishana in his arms on the other side.

Rakesh: Bhai, tumhari maa toh mujhe paka deti hai tum thoda sa bhi late ho jao.

Sagar: Ishu ready hi nahin ho rahi thi.

Rakesh (to Ishu): aaja mera baccha dadu ke paas. kya hua aapko? meri angel itni sad kyun hai?

Ishu: chocolates.

Rakesh: Oh ho! hamari bitiya rani ko chocolates chahiye? aisa karo aap dadi se jaakar lo.

Sagar: ek se zyada nahin, Ishu!

Latika (comes from behind): Sagar! tum meri aur meri poti (granddaughter) ke beech mein mat aaya karo.

Sagar and Rakesh look at each other with eyes full of humor.

Latika: beta dinner abhi karoge ya airport se aane ke baad?

Sagar: nahin, mami ke saath ek saath khayenge.

Rakesh: chalein phir?

Latika: Haan haan chalo. traffic bhi bahut hota hai iss time.

They all leave for the airport to receive Veena.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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nice start 😊...thx for the pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Jalebi jee i didnt knew u had a FF !! Well i noticed it now 😆 Loved the beginning dear ! Really nice introduction of the characters & am looking forward for the continuation, am sure this FF will rock 😛
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: theflyingdonkey

Jalebi jee i didnt knew u had a FF !! Well i noticed it now 😆 Loved the beginning dear ! Really nice introduction of the characters & am looking forward for the continuation, am sure this FF will rock 😛



aww thanks a lot! i just wrote my first couple scenes yesterday (i think? 😆) so i wz really scared. but im thinking it'll be alright now as i've gotten positive reviews so far. and i promise i will try to keep it as interesting and entertaining as possible.

@sweetie: you're welcome!

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