mayur ss (part-4 pag:-6) - Page 4

Created

Last reply

Replies

37

Views

5k

Users

18

Likes

79

Frequent Posters

Mahima_13 thumbnail
15th Anniversary Thumbnail A Bag Full of Love OS Contest Thumbnail + 5
Posted: 15 years ago
#31
wow
amazing
rocking
awesome
love it
-Annu- thumbnail
19th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#32
it very nice yaar .....plz PM me whenever u update.........just waiting 4 mayur 2 meet soon......very nice part,gr8 job👍🏼
Annu😊
devz_g thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#33
hey ridz
gud update..

i want this same to happen in show *fingers crossed*
Posted: 15 years ago
#34
heya ridz..
nice update dera!

hmm intresting..

kya cliffhanger tha yaar!!
5 yrs boy??????

aur wo b momma nupsi ko?

but but but!
nup ko marey hue toh 3 yrs hi hue na!!!!!
ye instant born hai kay(jus kidding)

well plzz do cont soon
muuah!

Faria. thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 15 years ago
#35
nice ff
loved it
pls update next part soon
sajan_mayur4eve thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#36
hey ridz..
love it..
wonderful update..
plz cont soon..
me waiting for the next part.
plzz cont soon asap
-Samira- thumbnail
17th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#37

sorry 4 d late comment

awesome part dear
thnx 4 d pm
angel.samee thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail Networker 1 Thumbnail
Posted: 14 years ago
#38

by rida..

4 part :

Boy:mummaa.

Anamika gives "wat happen "look to rosh

Rosh shrugs..

Rosh catchs him nd sit on her knees: ruko..phele yeh bolo ki tumhari mumma kahna hai??

Boy:who bahra hai aur main unse chup raha hoon..

Rosh:kyun kya hua..

A girl:kya hu anhai kya karoon iska..meri car kahrab kardi isney..she comes in bad mood..she is good but she was drench in mud water..

Rosh stands up..nd sarts laughing..even anamika..

lady:haan..haan hasoo..haso….meri pyari se car..

Rosh:divya di..abhi tak aap ka chtoey bachon ki tarha behave karna ki adat nahi chto..car karab ho gay hai tho aap ro rhai hia??..nd agin stars launghing..

Divya:chal bahut hogaya tera..

Rosh:hmm(she trys to stop)

But there some one was laughing..none other than.."anamika"

Divya:aab tu kyun has rahi hai..

Anamika(still laughing):aap ki halat dekh kar..jaye andar jaiye..main abhi aapki liye kapedy likar ati hoon..

Divya goes inside..

After hour three of them were enjoy they coffe in drawing room..

Divya:tho miss anamika kya plan hai..

Anamika:kya plan hai ..matlab???

Divya:apni job ka..kahna krney wali hoo..

Anamika:haan kal aunty mujhe unkey frnd ki office ko le jaa rahi hai..

Divya:hmm..

Myur mansion:

Maynk is doing some work..

As he complent's his work..

Some one calls him..

Maynk:hello ..

A girl:hum aa rahey hai

Maynk:thik hai..

He goes to kichen

Maid:saab aap yahna kuch chaey..aap mujhe bola detey toh amin aa jata aap yahna kyun ayi??

Maynk:kuch nahi aap jaye aap dusra kaam ki jiye..main aaj ka kahna kudh banooga..

Maid thik hai sab..

Maid goes from ther..

Maynak stars prepareing the food..

Back to anamika:

Divya:aacha chalo humey kahi gumhney jatey hai..kitney saal ho gaye hum ek sath kih ghumne nahi gaye hai..

Anamika:par kahna?

Divya:main jahan le kar joongi

Anamika:nahi divya aaj nahi ..phir kabhi..

Rosh:haan di aaj nahi..

Divya:chaloo..drags them both.

Anamika:aarey suno..gul..

Divya:aarey haan tumlog jao main gul ko likar ati hoon..

Aur sedha sedha car mein jao..

Anamika:thik hai..

In car:

Rosh:pata nahi yeh humey kahna le jaa rahi hai

Rosh to divya:di hum kahna jaa rhey hai??

Divya:rosh tujhe yaad hai hum dono chotey theyu jab hum papa ki sath ki park main aatey they..

Rosh:haan who bhi kya din they kash anamika dib hi jab hoti thi..waise di aap jab kahna thi..

Anamika:aan me pata nahi..shayad divya ko pata hoo..

Rosh:haan divya di di kahna …

Divya chages the topic..

Divya:offho hum purani baton ko lekar kyun bithey hai..rosh tub hi na..

Maynkk's place

Door bell rings..

Maynk opens the door ite gujan,diya& u day(its diya&dodo's first visti to mayur's home)

Diya:wow!..tum kitney badal gaye hoo..

Uday:haan becha kar bhi kya sakta hai nupur jo uska sath chod kar chaley gaeyi..

Maynk:nupur mujhe chod kar nahi gayi who abhi bhi merey sath hai.!!

Uday moves from there..

Diya &gunajn to dfllow uday b'cuz they think to leave maynk alone fro some tym..

Mayu looking at nups pic

In back ground:

Tere is jahan main ey KhudaWoh nahi to lagta hai kuch nahiNahi ho ke b hai woh her jagahKaron kyu yakeen kay woh ab nahi)-2

Its about 7..

Diya:okay bye gunjan main jaa rahi hoon..mujhe abhi kuch kaam se jana hai..

Gunjna:thi hia bye.

Diya leaves from there..\

Sh goes from there nd stops in front of divya's house..

Diya:oh!no ..yeh car ko kya ho gay??

She vomes out of the car..

To hire a taxi..

She turns..

Anamika was leveing the house..

Anamika:okay chalo jaldi chaltey hia

Diya looks at anamika ns she is totally shock..

Diya:nupur..

She was about to go near nups..but unfortunately nupur left the place..

But diya have not losse her hope she runs behind the car..

Nd she waw about to cross the road..but..

an hour after

Gunjan phone buzz..

Gunjna:hello….kya??

Anamika:

Anamika:haan chao ghar aa gya..

Anamika gul rosh get down from thee car..

Anamika &rosh r back to home..

Anamika:Rosh tum jaldi chang karkar so jao..kal hu,mey collage bhi jana hai na..

Gunjan rushe to the hospital..

Gaunjan:diya yeh sab kisey hua..

Diya:gunjan mujhe kuch nahi hua bas leg fracture ho gya hai..bas..par phele tum meri..

Gunjna:diya bahut hogaya..tumhne cross kar ney ki kya ..

Diya:who actullay gunjan meri car karab ho gayi thi..

Gunjan:haan tho tum hum mein se kisi ko inform kar satkhi thin a..

Diya:gunjan BAS..jab se main tumhe kuch batna chati hoon au tum meri baat hi nahi sun rahi hoo..(in lloud voice)..maine..maine nupur ko dekha..

Gunjna tum yeh kya kar rahi hoo diya??

Diya:main sach kah rahi hoon gujan maine nupur ko dekha

Gunjan is shocked..

Shift to namika's room..

Rosh:di aap kuch bol rahi thi..

aNamika:main??..Kuch bhi tho nahi..

rosh:thik hai acha hia mujhe kuch kaam yaad aya mein abhi aati hoon.

Rosh goes to kitchen..

Rosh:pata nahi mom ko bhi kya sujtha hai..

Rosh takes the glass..pour waters..

Rosh calls her mom..

Rosh:hello mom..

Rosh take out a tablet..

Rosh:takbet di ko bolna boley dena zaroori hai kya…

Mom:tumhe jityna bola gya hai who karoo..

Rosh:par kyun..aap jab tak kuch nahi bolgey mein di ko yeh dawa nahi doongi..

Mom:thik hai main tumhe sab boloni..par kal..

Roish:pakka??

Mom:haan pakka agar tum who tablet doogi nayhi tho mein nahi bolney wali..

Rosh:thik hi thik hai mein de raghhi hon..

Rosh cuts the call..she mixes the tablet in water ad goes to anamika's room..

Rosh:di aap ki liye paani..

Anamika:merey liye..par mein tho tum paani laney ki liye nahi bolt ha fir kyun le..

Rosh:bas aise hi..woh..woh..paani nahi than a..

Anamika:rosh paani yahi hai..nd show the jug with water..

Rosh:ohh!!...(kahna pash gayi mom bhi naa…)..ohh maine nhi dekha tha..aab mujhe nahi pata aap ko yeh paani pena hi hoga..

Anamika:rosh mujhe paani ki pyaas nahi lag rahi hai..

Rosh:*in filmy tone*di main aap ki liye apney hathoon se paani ko laya aur aur aap nahi pena chati..isey saaf saaf zahir hota hai ki .. ki ..aap mujhe se pyaar nahi karti,.

Anamika:is cofuse:rosh insem ppyaar nahi karney wali kya baat hogayi..

Rosh:agar aap mujhe chati hai tho..aap abhi is paani ko peloogi

Anamika:thi k hai thik hai..

She drinks the water..


~luv sameera~

Related Topics

Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: Rizz-ington

1 years ago

⭐Back⭐ Arhi FF | Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon: Chapter 3 - Part 3/3

A N A R H I F F ---- Iss Darr Ko Kya Naam Doon Summary: Khushi is an internet famous 27 year old fashion designer from Lucknow. She has a chirpy...

Expand ▼
Fan Fictions Thumbnail

Posted by: goodkashish

6 years ago

Kassir ...Sujal&Kashish...Part 28 - Pg 33

Kassir Extremes Intro 9pm - London Airport - Christmas Day It was a cold chilly night in the beautiful city of London. We arrive at Heathrow...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".