mayur ss (part-4 pag:-6) - Page 3

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hey ridz!!
lovely update..loved it..but no sajan nd mayank..:(
wow!!precap was awesome..nupur in excel..
waiting for the next part..
plz cont soon..me waiting..:)

hey ridz!!!

awesome update dear!
waiting for MayUr meeting!

woho! nup..urf anamika in excel!
plzzzzzzzzzzz do cont soon
m waiting muuuuuah!

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rida its soo good yaar

ey ridz..
nice story yaar ..loved it..
mindbolwing ..
plz ping me when ever ur updating the next art..

iam waiting for the next part..

@adi_gupta:ya adi..gul is nups daughter she is 2 1/2 yrs old

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Part 3:

rosh comes back

Rosh:kya hua di aap itna dull kyun dik rahi hoo??

Aa:kuch nahi rosh bhi saar main thoda sa dard ho raha hai shayad bheed ki wajha se..

Rosh:toh thik hai hum wapis gahr chaltey hai..

A:nahi nahi aise koi baat nahi ..agar hum gahr chaley gaye tho mama papa pareshan hojange'bas abhi train aati hi hogi hum chaley jatey hai..

After some time the train comes..

it was night ..they takes some rest..rosh sleeps on nups lap..on othe lap gul was sleeping nd nupur was sleeping in a sitting position resting her head with the help of the window

Morning:

Maynk's home

Maynk was busy in some work..as he leave the house..a poor man comes infront of him..

Old man(om):baba thodey passey dedo baba..

Maynk gives him some money

Om:bhagwaan tujhe har kushi dega'.jo paas hai jo door hai sab tujhe dega....

Railway station

Anamika opens her eyes..its mumbai..

"tho chal padi hai morena ki sawari mumbai nagri hoja tiyar"

Ana:morena???

She comes out of her thoughts

Anamika:uthoa rosh mumbai aa gaya..

Rosh (in sleeping tone)itni jaldi..ruko main train waley bhai sab ko bolkar ati hoon ki humey aur 5 ghatey ghumey

An:rosh!!!uhto tum need mein kaya kya bolti hoo..

Rosh gets up

They stand in front of railway staion..with there luggages..

Here mayank was feeling something which couldn't express..

Maynk:yah mujhe kya ho raha hai..mujhe aisa kyun lag raha hai ki nupur mere paas hai'

Railway sation:

Ana:aunty ne toh kaha tha ki driver abhi ayega..par abhi tak nahi aya..

Rosh:dekha main ne bola na yeh aunty mujhe phele se hi nahi pasnd thi .dekho kya kar diya..

Ana:rosh ismein achey na lagney ki kya baat??

Rosh:who kya hia na di jo mujhe achey nahi lagtey who log hamesha bura kaam hi katey hai..

Ana:rosh tumhe antuy is itna gusaa kyun.??

Rosh:kyun ki di jab who ati hai toh woh aapko mere stah rhney nahi deti hai aur aapko unke paas bola leti hai..aur mujhe acha nahi lagta ki mere di ko koi mujhe se dur karey..agar gul ki pa(nd stops..)

Ana gets upset..

Roshto her self:wat the hell.i amm doing..rosh aaj tho apna muh band kar kar hi bita warna kuch bhi anap sanap baktey hi jayegi..

Rosh:acha who sab chodo'..ahh!! mujhse aur wait nahi kiya jaata.....

Jus then gul was getting irritated..becuase of crowd..nd starts crying..

R:di gul ko mujhe dedo..main usey samhal longi

Rosh takes gul

R: isye acha hota ki hum hotel hi chal jaety..warna jab mama papa hotey they tho hum apney ghar chaljatey.

A:who nahi hoga..mama papa..1 manhey aa rhey hai..

Jus then driver arves..

a:dekho driver bhi aa gaya..

They sitts in the car ns stops in front of a apartment

D:mam.madam aap ka yahna wait kar rahi hia..

Rosh:thik hai aa jaiye hum chaley jatey hia..

All three(anamika,rosh&gul)enters the apartment..

Sm:dekho beta yeh tumhara ka ghar aab se tum log yahai hi rahoge

Sm: ao betho

Sm starts talikng with anamika about there busniess

Rosh is getting bored..be cuz anamika was talking with sm..nd other hand gul was sleeping peace fully

Sm:aur aab main chalti hoon..hope ki tum log ko gahr acha laga ho..aur agar kuch bhibhi problem hogyi tho mujhe cal karndena..

Sm laeve

Rosh:takes a deep brath:hu..chali gayi..

then she cums bak..

Sm:areey beta bolna tho bhol hi gayi tum parson roshnin ka admission bhi karana hia na toh tum kal aa joa..

Anamika:thik hai aunty..

Sm:thik hia beta

Nd leaves..it was about 8pm

They have they dinner nd sleps

Next day

The door bell rings..

Rosh opens the door..

The 5 yrs boy runs inside towards nupur saying"mumaaa"

Rosh:oye tu ruk..

Precap:diya meet with an accident she is in hospital..

Diya:main sach kah rahi hoon gujan maine nupur ko dekha

awsome update rids yaar i liked it soo much