Tum Mile - An AR FF part 17b -pg 51, final pt pg52

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Guys! So with Pyaar ka Naasha ending soon I am starting another AR FF! This one wont be a thriller! Just romance!

I am jumping straight to part 1 instead of giving a list of characters and stuff! You will see what characters I have included from DMG and other starone shows with time. Also the only character info i will give now is as follows:

Armaan :senior in mumbai college, studying psychology
Riddhima: junior in Mumbai College, studying psychology as well

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Here is for Part 1:

Well I can show you guys better than I can describe it!

The entire college (Except for a a few junior students) is gathered for the school function. It is always the hottest show of the year! As the school's heart throb performs every year, blowing everyones mind away


(for those of you who dont want to watch it, you really should! sooo hotttt! but its basically armaan performing Aai Paapi from the March 16, 2010 episode of dmg - ignore the interns and the AR scene)

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during this HAWT performance, there was another group of people mourning at a funeral.

Geet: Ridz I'm so sorry,
Muskaan: haan ridzi tumhe himmat rakna hoga
Anji: haan dehko bare pops bhi theek hai
Atul: haan ridzi
Ridzi: meri dadaji mera papa thi! Anji di, papa was never there for me! never! dadaji brought me up!
Anji: i know ridzi, lekin tumhari dadaji ko toh cancer tha! woh bhi last stage mein!
Ridz: i know, i know! lekin *sobs*
Atul: its okay ridz, chalo i'll drive us home.

Anji, Muski, Geet, and Ridz live together in an apartment ( anji and ridz are cousins- their moms are sisters, and geet and muskaan are twins, but geet has straight hair, is more soft spoken and dresses in selwar kamiz while muski has curly hair, is more bubbly and arguementative)
Atul lives alone but is meeting with 3 seniors who need a place urgently.

The next day in the library:

Armaan, maan, and rahul meet with Atul and finalize the details, when suddenly they hear soft sobs from behind them.

They turn around

Atul : oh shit ridzi, i hope anji use handel kar pata hai... Guys i have to go, looks like my friend needs me. BTW they are our neighbors. I'll introduce you guys later, i think my friend ridz needs me right now. My GF Anji is her cousin, but even anji isnt able to cheer her up nowadays...
Armaan: lekin why is she so sad? everything okay?
Atul explains how rid's dadaji cum dad like figure, just died of cancer.

Maan: oh thats to bad
Rahul: I know, i hope she can hold it out okay
Armaan: do you mind if i try something?
Atul: uh no, but why? you don't even know her?
Armaan: no i don't, not yet, but I feel like i do. And her tears are like piercing though my heart. Such an angelic face with childlike innocence doesnt looks good crying.
Rahul: armaan? did YOU just praise a girl? have i died? is this a dream?
Armaan: shut up rahool, just help me yaar

Armaan gets up with his guitar and starts playing/walking towards ridz, while Maan and Rahul do a silly dance behind him

Armaan:
Kabhi kabhi riddhima zindagi mein yuhi koi apna lagta hai,

Kabhi kabhi Riddhima wo bichad jaaye to ek sapna lagta hai,
Aise mein koi kaise apne aasuon ko behne se roke?
Aur kaise koi soch le everything's gonna be ok?

Riddhima looks up at them

Kabhi kabhi to lage zindagi mein rahi naa khushi aur naa mazaa,
Kabhi kabhi to lage har din mushkil aur har pal ek sazaa,
Aise mein koi kaise muskuraye, kaise hass de khush hoke?
Aur kaise koi soch le everything gonna be ok?

She gets up and walks away.

They go after her and Muski sings:

Soch zara jaane jaa tujhko hum kitna chahte hai,
Rote hai hum bhi agar teri aankhon mein aasu aate hai,

Atul sings:
Gaana to aata nahi hai magar phir bhi hum gaate hai,

Armaan:
Ki Riddhima maan kabhi , kabhi saare jahan mein andhera hota hai,
Lekin raat ke baad hi to savera hota hai..

Kabhi kabhi Riddima zindagi mein yuhi koi apna lagta hai,
Kabhi kabhi Riddhima wo bichad jaaye to ek sapna lagta hai,

Maan and Rahul
Hey Riddhima hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de tu zara,
Nahi to bass thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda muskura..

Anji:

Tu khush hai to lage ki jahan mein chayee hai khushi,
Sooraj nikle badlon se,aur baaten zindagi,
Sun to zara madhosh hawa tujhse kehne lagi,

Geet:
Ki Riddhima wo jo bichadte hai ek naa ek din phir mil jaate,
Riddhima, jaane tu ya jaane naa phool phir khil jaate hai..

Armaan hands the guitar to Rahul and sings while going closer to her:

Kabhi kabhi Riddhimai zindagi mein yuhi koi apna lagta hai,
Kabhi kabhi Riddhima wo bichad jaaye to ek sapna lagta hai,
Hey Riddhima hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de tu zara,
Nahi to bass thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda muskura..

Her tears have stopped and she is staring at Armaan wondering why he is doing so much? he is doing silly things to make her laugh. Embarrassing himself without caring. Armaan continues to sing:

Hey Riddhima hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de tu zara,
Nahi to bass thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda muskura..
Hey Riddhima hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de tu zara,
Nahi to bass thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda muskura..

all sing:

Hey Riddhima hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de tu zara,
Nahi to bass thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda muskura..
Hey Riddhima hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de, hass de tu zara,

armaan pulls out chocolate from his bag and a teddy he bought while others were singing and presents them to her

Nahi to bass thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda thoda muskura..

She smiles at Armaan.

Riddhima: Thank you! Tum saab bohot ache ho! lekin Armaan, Maan, Rahul, you guys dont even know me, then kyun?

Armaan: well then how do you know us?

Ridz: college ke sabse popular larko ko toh sab jaante hain

Maan and Rahul laugh

Armaan: idk about popular, but well we are atul's new roommates and seeing you cry was making me sad too. seeing others so depressed upsets me. I like to see people always smiling and happy :D

Riddhima: tum bohot ache ho armaan

Geet: actually ridz, we have been trying for so long, how did armaan?

Riddhima: ajnabee ho kar bhi itna farak paara.... aur haan teddy bhi 😃
Armaan: As long as you keep smiling like this forever, waise friends?
everyone else:friends!
Riddhima: but you guys are seniors no? we are only juniors...
Armaan moving closer to her: kyun? am i not allowed to be friends with a junior? are you embarresed to be seen with me?
Riddhima: nahin aise baat nahin hain
armaan moves even closer to her so he is hovering over her shoulder (from behind-ish) and whispers into her ear : toh? am I that bad?
riddhima: nah..nahin...woh sirf i wasnt sure if you knew...most seniors dont like to be seen with juniors....
Armaan *still whispering in her ear slowly* : well i guess main baaki sab seniors ki taara nahin hoon, itna khoobsurat junior dekh ke apne aap ko rok nahin paya.
Riddhima: kya kya?
Armaan: dirty mind, i meant you know dosti ke liye, kyun tumhe kya laaga?
riddhima: ku...kuch nahin....

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precap: moving and partyyyyyy

LOVE LOVE LOVE,
ASHU

let me know what you think and if i should continue, plus pming my buddy list so if you want a pm add me, and if you are on my buddy list and dont want one let me know 😛

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Posted: 14 years ago
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wowww i'm first :) hey Ashu.. congrats for the new ff. :)
itzzz really cute.. plzz plzz continue it...:)
i luved how everyone cheered up Ridz n Armaan is soo damn cute <3
thanx for the pm and continue it.. ok
tc :)
Preet <3
Edited by cutiepreet - 14 years ago
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Index

Part 1 - Page 1
Part 2 - Page 3
part 3 - page 5
part 4 - page 7
part 5a - page 9
part5b- page 12
part 6 - page 14
part 7 - pg17
part 8 - page 18
part 9 - pg 20
part 10 - page 22
part 11 - page 25
part 12 - page 27
part 13 - page 30
part 14a - page 33
part 14b - page 35
part 15 - page 39
part 16 - page 43
part 17a - page 48
part 17b - page 51
part 18/final part - page 52
Edited by ammy_ka_ashu - 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: cutiepreet

wowww i'm first :) hey Ashu.. congrats for the new ff. :)
itzzz really cute.. plzz plzz continue it...:)
i luved how everyone cheered up Ridz n Armaan is soo damn cute <3
thanx for the pm and continue it.. ok
tc :)
Preet <3


Thanks!

No problem!! yay first comment 😆 and that too almost immediately!

xoxo,
Ashu

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hey loved it
do pm me with next update
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Awesome


Soooooooo happy that ur starting a new ff


Thanx 4 the pm


Update soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Nice part frnd.
Update soon.
Take care.
Luv Anuj.
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hey dear awsome FF yar i really love it part .thanx to pm me this amazing FF .waiting for ur next [part bye
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Awesome part....can't wait to read more....

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