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Posted: 14 years ago
#11
heyy dear
nice part
loved it
cont soon
n thx for pm
dhruvika
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Posted: 14 years ago
#12
aww😊 dat was sho shweet!! & d last parrt😉😉 was toh cherry on d cake!! luved it!! cont soon dear!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: crazyap

hey loved it

do pm me with next update


Hi i def. will!

BTW your display pic is driving me insane!

KSG with glasses = HAWT

like will he marry me?
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Posted: 14 years ago
#14
hiiii
cute ff
loved it
it looks awesome
cant wait 2 read more
loved the song
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
plz do pm when u update
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Posted: 14 years ago
#15

Hey LOVED The positive response!!

Without wasting much time, here is part 2:

Armaan: dirty mind, i meant you know dosti ke liye, kyun tumhe kya laaga?
riddhima: ku...kuch nahin....

Maan: tum dono phusur phusur kya kareho?
Rahul: haan armaan, chal humme hamari saman lane hai! We will have to do more than one trip as our cars cant hold everything! Let's get going before it's too late!

Anji: well guys we have 2 cars with us, if you need any help, we don't mind coming along?
Muski: haan bilkul sahi! waise our classes are done for the day, kyun ridz? chale?
Ridz: sure sure
Rahul: well since we are all going to the same place why don't we miz our selves up amongst the cars a bit? that way we can get to know each other.

So it was decided that Atul-Anji would go in Atul's car, Maan and Muskaan would go in Maan's car, Rahul-Geet in Geet/Muskaans shared car, and of course AR in armaans car.

Atul-Anji spoke of their usual sweet nothings, Geet and Muskaan both talked about each other - being twins they tend to do that...
In Armaan's car:

Armaan: toh Riddhima, what are you studying?
Rid: psychology, aur aap?
Armaan: main bhi psychology pari hoon, lekin ek baat bolo, muhjse yeh aap aap mat bulao. I mean ajeeb lagta hai, and we are friends now right?
Rid: haan, okay teddy 😃
Armaan: teddy?
Ridz: haan yeh teddy jo tumne gift kiya looks just like you. So from today I will call you teddy :D
Armaan: aw soo sweet, then I will have to find a cute nickname for you too. can I ask you something? How come I have never seen you before today?
Ridz: Hmm i dont know, I guess destiny had something else planned? maybe if I had met you before, you wouldnt have been able to cheer me up
Armaan: no, phir i would have tried another tareeka...lekin you believe in destiny too? you know i do too, but whenever i tell someone they look at me like
ridz: your crazy right? i get that too, but lekin kya karun, i cant change my beliefs for others right?
Armaan: bilkul sahi kaha hai tumne, waise tell me about your self, what are you into?
Ridz: hmm jogging, basketball, dancing, singing, reading, aur having fun with my friends 😉 aur tum?
Armaan: basically the same, but I also love racing, boxing, and working out. Oh we are here! Chalo Basket!
Ridz: basket?
Armaan: haan thats my nickname for you, b/c you also like basketball, acha hai na?
Riddhima: pagal!

They get down from the car and load everything into the 4 cars.
After they take everything to the apartment and the girls help unpack, well muski, geet, and ridz do, AA are busy romancing.
Maan and Rahul share a room, and Armaan and Atul get their own rooms.

In Armaans room:
Armaan: basket if you don't mind helping can u unpack that bag?? i'll do this one?
Ridz: sure no problem teddy!

30 seconds later

Ridz: wow teddy tumhara boxers itna CUUUTE hai! rubber duckies!
Armaan blushes, : woh, umm here you do this bag, and i'll do that one. I forgot it had my undergarments!
Ridz: nahin first I want to show these adorable boxers to everyone! so sweet teddy!
Armaan chases ridz around the room till he catches her but falls ontop of her on the bed with one hand around her waist and one holding him up beside her head.

Armaan: please basket don't tell anyone about my boxers, woh thoda personal hai na...
Ridz: theek hai par do shart par
Arm: kya?
Rid: first you have to give us a party tonight! since its friday and humari dosti ki kushi mein
Armaan: sure no problem! woh toh main bhi soch rahin tha! aur dusra kya hai?
Ridz; dusra yeh hai ki get off of me!
Armaan: oh haan sorry!

Mus-Geet-Rah-Maan had already finished unpacking as AA decided to go help, so then they all came to Armaans room to help. They made plans for the party that night while they all worked.

They all went back to their own apartments/rooms to change for the night as they had decided to go clubbing.

here are the girls outfits :

Geet - http://images12.greatglam.com/prod_images_large/ConstructionBlkB.jpg
Anji -http://clubbingdresses.asonda.co.uk/images/browndress.jpg
Ridzi (only a bit longer like halfway above knees)-
The guys were all in jeans and dress shirts, only Armaan was wearing a sexy vest that revealed his muscular chest and arms...

The girls had decided on meeting the guys there.
Shockingly the girls arrived before the guys, as Atul got a flat tire on the way.

So when the guys entered the club they were completely shocked! Not only were the girls looking super sexy, but they were dancing away with random guys!

As soon as the girls noticed them, they all left there dance partners to come greet the guys, who were looking pretty sexy too, well all went over but Riddhima, she tried to but her dance partner pulled her back,

Ridz: vivekkk lemme go na, my friends are here!
Vivek: you promise you'll come back to dance with me?
Ridz: of course!
Vivek: theek hai! but come back soon! you are the hottest girl around here and nobody else can even come close to your dancing! And have I told you how sexy you look in this dress?
Ridz: yes vivek you havee, i'll be back later okay?

Ridz makes her way over to the group,
Ridz: hey guys!
Anji: wow ridz he is so hott! your so lucky!
Atul: kya?
Anji: oh i mean since atul is taken already,
Armaan: riddhima, tum vivek ko kaise janti ho?
Ridz: oh you know him? oh i almost forgot, he's a senior too right! Well we just met a short while ago when he asked me to dance. kyun?
Arm: woh acha larka nahin hain ridz. use door rahna, he has ruined many girls lives.
Ridz: kya? but dont worry teddy i can take care of myself
Armaan: i know you can, but please basket, for me?
Rahul: yea ridz vivek is bad news
Maan: reaaal bad
Ridz: theek hai, i guess you guys know better
Geet: if you guys are done with all this serious talk come on lets go eat! im starving!!
Guys: sure, btw you girls look AMAZING!
Maan: haan lekin geet, i thought you werent really into western clothing?
Geet: well no muski, anji, and ridzi forced me to wear this, but how do you know?
Maan: well muski keeps talking about you nonstop so I feel like i've known you my whole life!
Rahul: wow geet does the same about muskaan, i feel like i've known muskaan all my life!
muski- geet: haha sorry guys! bure adat hai!

They all sit down to have dinner.

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That's it for part 2!

yay let me know what you think!
no precap!

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Posted: 14 years ago
#16
yaeee 1st one 2 comment😃.....

aww dat was soo cute😊.. especially d teddy thing!! d name teddy suits armaan😉!!!
& armaan warning ridz about vivek was also sweet!! so protective of him😊!! hayye.....

luved it😊!! thnks 4 d pm!! cot soon.....

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Edited by kavyaa - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
#17
hey Ashu.. this was a nice part. :)
glad everyone is mixed up by now :)
AR scene abt boxers was cute..lol Armaan is all shy but Ridz not.. ahaha
anwyayzzz liked the part and great tht they r at party now but wooooo Vivek.. omg.. with Ridz... omg.. but gud tht guys told her tht he is not a gud guy. ;)
thanxx for the pm and continue soon.. :)
tc ;)
Preet <3
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Posted: 14 years ago
#18
hiiiii
lovely update
loved it
loved AR friendship
cute nickname 4 armaan teddy
cant wait 4 more
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Amazing!!!!!

Love Armaan's nickname


Thanx 4 the pm


Can't wait till the next part



Update soon

Kamal
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i really like you ff, please do update soon 😊

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