Tum Mile - An AR FF part 17b -pg 51, final pt pg52

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roshni mittal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#31

hey love the part dear .now i am eagerly waiting for naughty naughty part plz send next part quick .thanx to pm me dear

love uuuuuuuuuuu

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Kamal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#32

awesome

thanx 4 the pm

update soon

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anushkajain

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Posted: 14 years ago

#33

hey awesome ff

👏do pm me

continue soon

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Parneet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#34

hey Ashu.. this was a pretty interesting and entertaining part.. :)
luved all the dares and the ans for the truth ques.. geet was amazing as u described and hard for me to imagine. ;) and Mann awww he is soo sweet and Rahul-lovely-muski scene was funny.. :)
Armaan dng push-ups quickly is not surprising.. :) but Ridz on his back.. awwww but i wonder wht Ridz naughty dare wud be.. :)
thanxx for the pm and dooo continue soon.:)
tc :)
Preet <3

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ankitajain94

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Posted: 14 years ago

#35

awesome part

cont soon

thnx for d pm

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Antara Mazumdar

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Posted: 14 years ago

#36

hey awesome part thnx fr d pm n cont soon

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roshni mittal

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Posted: 14 years ago

#37

hey dear when u r updating u r new part we r eagerly waiting for one plz dont make us wait toooooooooooooo long 😭😭😭 and gave update so we can read and critisized ,and give a lovely comment on ur FF so plz update soon. do pm me if u can

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salina😊😊

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jannat4ever

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Posted: 14 years ago

#38

great yar
loved it..........waiting 4 nxt update
update soonnnnnnnnnnnnn
thnx 4 d pm dear............

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Part 4

rahul: hmm now you gave geet such a naughty dare, i'm thinking to do the same to you ridz...

ridz: hmm well batao, kya karna hoga?

rahul: well tumhe hum sab ke samne...

suddenly maan interrupts and whispers something in rahuls ear...and shows him his phone

rahul: KYA?

maan whispers back, : haan abe chup if i wanted to announce it i would have said it out loud!

rahul whispers back: shit ab?

maan whispers back something...

rahul: theek hai ridz so your dare is that you have to pretend armaan is your bf for 2 weeks and you have to kiss him

ridz/armaan: kya?!

armaan: rahoooool, yeh kaisa dare hai? basket and i are just friends, aur yeh kiss? i mean tum jaante ho na ki....

suddenly armaan gets a fowarded text from maan with an attached note

fowarded msg from abhi:

was over at the club few minutes ago and over heard vivek, he has a new target. riddhima gupta. you know her right? warn her!

msg from maan:

ammy i know you dont like this idea, but its the only way to save her! you know vivek will never go after 'your girl.' besides do you want ridz to end up like nupur?

armaan looks up and looks at maan/rahul and they exchange meaningful looks

armaan: theek hai, im in lekin yeh sirf ek dare hai

maan: nnobody outside this friend circle should come to know its a dare

rahul suddenly notices something/someone coming towards them from behind ridz and points it out to maan

maan: okay so you have to kiss him, now, that to while sitting in his lap

ridz/armaan: kya?

rahul: haan now quickly

ridz: what kind of a bet is this? you guys are sick...

maan: please dont misunderstand us ridz, but its actually imp. we'll explain one day, but can't right now

ridz: fine...

with that she gets up from her chair and goes over to armaan and sits in his lap

anji: ridz you're seriously going to do this?

rid: yaar anji its only for a dare, besides whats the harm? papa is always saying na? "ridzy beta go out and do something crazy", toh i am! lol

armaan: wow i would love to meet your dad one day! hahaha but seriously basket, dont get me wrong! im really not this kind of guy, we will still be friends right?

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that's it for this part!

precap: the kiss, and suprise suprisee

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Parneet

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Posted: 14 years ago

#40

hey Ashu.. wow this part was nice but why soo short.. i finished it in like 2 mins...😕
i was soo excited to read the daring dare part.. which was gud..:)
i knew they were gonna give her this kind of dare including Armaan.. :)
plzz plzzz give a long part next time with lots of AR moments.. :) <3
tc :-)
Preet <3

Edited by cutiepreet - 14 years ago

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