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hey guys i have another concept/idea i've been playing with (in a notebook, during class...gosh im so bad) and wanted to share...here is the intro
i didn't want to give a character intro b/c characters will be revealed during the story - if you guys want me to continue :D
Also I haven't named it yet, as I would like some suggestions :D please let me know if i should continue or not and suggestions for titles :D idk of i plan on this being a mini FF or a long one, depends on you guys, if i continue this I will regularly post both this and tum mile, as for pyaar ka naasha im having writers block for the epilogue. As in i have written something but i feel like it isnt spicy enough..like mirchi kum! lol
anywhoo lemme knoww
INTRODUCTION
'Angel ut! Ek naya din hai aur aj tum apni dosto ki saath Goa jareho.'
'Bhaiya sone do na. Itna acha sapna tha.'
'Shubankar tum jao. mein dekh thi hoon'
Shub - Theek hai keerti
Keerti - Ridz, phirse wahi sapna tha kya?
Riddhima Gupta jumps up with a HUGE smile
Ridz - haan bhabhi
k- kya aj uska poora chera dekh paye?
r - nahin, bas uske ankein phirse. Jaldi meri sketch pad kahan hai?
Keerti gives her a notebook and pencils; riddhima flips through various pages of sketches of blue-grey eyes - some sketched in black and white. Each sketch seems to be better and more intricate than the last. At last riddhima finds a blank page and begins sketching.
R- bhabhi woh kyun kabhie apna chera nahin dekata? Pata hai, aj woh basketball khel re the. phir uske pas gayi aur andhera ho gara. usne ghuma aur mein bas uske ankhein dekh payi.
K- mein bhi tumhara sapno ka raja dekhna chata hoon. Leki ab jaldi se ready ho jao! Tumhari doston tumhare intezr karehain.
R- oh mein toh bhul gayi! Aj hum Abhay, Kabir, aur Rahul ki dosto ko mil rahe, phir hum saab ek saat goa jayenge.
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on the other hand, we see a figure shifting under a blanket, he gets up, but we still don't see his face as we can only see his back.
"Oh God! phirse woh sapna? Yeh larki kaun hai?"
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In the mean while Riddhima had gotten ready and went over to her best friend Muskaan's house.
"Muski!!!! Jaldi kar sab niche intezaar kar rahe! Tumhari yeh beauty parlor ki liye samay nahe hai!"
Muski- Sorry Misha! Bas do minute!
"Tumhara woh Rahul bhaag ne wala nahin hai, okay? Lekin agar tumhari wajase hum late hojaye toh shayad mein tumko mardalunga"
Misha- Piya tumne bilkul sahi kaha!
Muski- sorry guys! bas ho gaya! waise ridz kaha hai?
Piya -aur kaha ho sakta hai? woh toh kabir ki saat masti mein busy hai!
Misha - haan kabir aur riddhima to inseperable hai!
Muski - haha haan , bhaiya aur ridzy toh bachpan se he aisa tha!
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Index:
Part 1 - page 3
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Index:
Part 1 - page 3
Part 2 - Page 7
Part 3 - Page 8
part 4 - page 11
promo - page 14
promo - page 14
part 5 - page 14
part 6 - page 16
part 7 - page 19
part 8 - page 22
part 9 - page 25
part 9 - page 25
part 10 -page 28
part 11- page 32
part 12-page 34
part13-page36
part 14 - page 39
part 15 - page41
part 16-page 42
part 17 - page 44
part 18 - page 47
part 19 - page 50
other ffs/OSs by me:
Pyaar ka Naasha - AR (complete)
A day to Late - 2 part OS (complete)
DOSTI, PYAAR, JALAAN, AUR PAGALPAN - ar short (complete)
Yeh Kaise Kahani - 4 AR OS's (complete)
Zindagi ka Khel-AR Short (complete)
Chori Chupke AR OS (complete)
Mujhe Saach Jaane ka Haq Hai - AR OS's, and an AR mini (some complete)
Ashu's Stress-buster AR mini (Complete)
Sabki Baaratein Aayeen AR mini (complete)
Meaning of Missing Someone AR ff (complete)
junoon Ar OS (complete)
AR OS for Maitree's Bday (complete)
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