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Part 3

After Dinner:

Maan: toh guys, i think we should play a game!
muski: haan! great idea!
Rahul: hmm lekin sirf aisa waisa koi khel nahin...
atul: toh kaisa khel?
Armaan: such a game that helps us get to know each other better!
geet: like kya?
Maan-Rahul-Armaan: Truth aur Dare!
Anji: hmm not bad! good idea boys
Ridz: lekin first, to make sure we are all loose, lets all have a shot!
Girls: haan! lets go!
Rahul: you girls drink?
Atul: don't get nervous guys, they only have one shot, or light wine. They know their limits! they don't drink much! not like what you're thinking hahaha...
Armaan: theek hai theek hai

Just then the waiter comes with the shots for everyone!

Ridz: ruko ruko ruko guys!
Maan: kya hua?
Geet: hum saab
Muskaan: ek saat lenge!
Anji: yea! its like tradition! we count down to 3 and take it at the same time!

Rahul: you girls are too cute!
Atul: hey lekin Anji mera hai! okay aur baki teen meri behen jaise!
armaan: hmm anji teri hai?
maan: idk hmm...
rahul: i think woh meri
armaan - rahul - maan: bhabhi hai!
Atul: oh god guys! tum ne toh mera jaan hi nikal diya!

Anji blushes

Muski: okay ready! 1 -2 -3

They all take their shots!

Ridz: okay phir game shuru!

They spin the bottle and it lands on Anjali
Armaan: so anji truth aur dare?
Anji: truth
Armaan: okay so the story behind when you first kissed atul?
anji: oh woah...
Ridz: come on di itna cute story hai
anji: okay..well atul was like always chasing after me you know? like mera peecha hi nahin chora! but i never gave him the time of day. he would always bring me presents and compliment me, try and flirt with me, ect. Then one day i yelled at him and told him to leave me alone, the next day our cousin Kripa got engaged to Angad jeej, and atul didnt even look at me once... He didnt even ask me to dance or anything... He asked Nupur! instead! I was so upset! he and nupur were slow dancing and nupur was all over him. I don't know what came over me, but i went up to them, and pulled nupur away from him. then i threw my hands around his neck and just kissed him!
Ridz: that too in front of mom and dad!
Rahul: kya! tumhari parents ki samne!
Anji: lekin mom dad are cool about it!
Atul: you know it was all b/c of ridz, geet, and muski that we're together now!
Maan: aur woh kaise?
Atul: these three angels told me to ignore anji and pretend to be into nupur, btw i'll let you in on a secret - nupur is my sister, anji didn't know
armaan: kya? you had a sister but anji didn't know?
Atul: well not my blood sister, but we grew up in the orphanage together for a few years, she would do raksha bandhan to me every year 😊
geet/muski: aur ab hum bhi karte hai!
Atul: haan!
Ridz pouts and says: di doesnt let me do it :(
maan: aur woh kyun?
ridz: b/c if atul is my brother, my brother will marry my sister, doesn't sound good na? so i don't have anyone to do it too :(
Rahul: hmm thats true... ek kaam karte hai, aaj se tum meri behen ho!
Ridz: really!
Rahul: haan! aur raksha bandhan is coming up! you better tie one on my hand! i've always wanted a sister! every year i feel so sad :( lekin ab aur nahin! i've found a sister now!
*they hug and shed a few tears*
Anji: okay guys ab back to the game! I'll spin!
It lands on Atul!
Geet: Okay atul truth or dare
atul: hmm dare!
Geet: okay you know that thing you've been wanting to do! always prepared but you keep waiting for the right time/place? do it now!
atul's jaw drops!: kya lekin aise kaise?
Rahul: bro whatever she's talking about you have to do! dare kiya!
atul: alright ek minute!
Atul goes on stage and whispers something into a the dj's ear! he then takes the mic,
Atul: hey guys! i know i know you all are wondering what i am doing here! lekin please just 2 minutes muhje dedo phir dj shaan will play some mmore music!
Atul: Anjali? I love you. I loved you when we first met, i loved you when you first yelled at me, i loved you when you first cried in my arms, i loved you when i walked in on you changing *giggles from the audience and anji blushes*, in short I have loved you every second of every day since we've met. *atul starts walking towards anji with a spotlight following him* Anji, with every step we take my love for you only increases, i promise my love for you will never die and will only increase. I know we live across the hall from each other only, but every second i spend away from you is torture. You are my air, i can't breath without you. *he gets down on one knee and pulls a small box out of his pocket* Jaan, will you marry me?

Anji *with tears* : haan, haan atul i'll marry you! I can't stand a second away from you either!
Atul stands up and slips a BEAUTIFUL diamond ring on her finger and kisses her passionately

everyone in the club goes crazy cheering!

after they break the kiss, anji notices the ring,
Anji: atul, this is my dream ring? tumhe kaise pata? yeh toh BOHOT expensive hai na?
Atul: meri jaan ke bare mme i know everything - gives her a peck on the lips, aur I told you na, it was love at first sight for me. i have been saving up since we've met for our wedding and future. I have plenty saved, Don't worry about the money. waise its nothing compared to you...
rest of gang: aww soo cute!! *they all hug/congratulate the happy couple*
Atul: thanks geet, agar you hadn't dared me idk how long i would have taken
geet: no problem atul, waise i was getting tired of watching you practice in front of the mirror
Atul: okay now my turn to spin the bottle!

Geet: oh gosh...
Ridz: toh geet, remember you swore you'd pick dare this time😉
Geet: that's why i'm saying oh no, and to make it worse the end is facing you! alright kya karna hai?
Ridz: hmm okay i know what you have to do lekin not sure to who, hmm muski, di? come here she whispers in their ears *okay so we decided what last time, lekin to who? lets assign a number to each guy and ask them to pick a number k? - they nod- so armaan =1, rahul =2, maan = 3, atul jeeju=taken by anji di hehe, aur some random guy from the club=4 theek hai?* *anji and muski say yes*
Ridz: okay lekin boys we need your help pick a number - only one number- between 1 and 4 okay?
The boys talk about it and agree on 3
Ridz: okay geet come here *she whispers something in her ear making geet's mouth drop*
geet: ridz are you crazy? urghhh theek hai lekin let me get another shot first! i really need to loosen up first...
A minute late geet comes back and the music changes to Zara Zara touch me touch me...
Geet starts dancing to it and tries to kind of seduce maan - who is practically drooling (imagine the ammy/ridz zara zara sequence with geet and maan, only maan doesnt run away at the end and they end with geet sitting in his lap)

Geet jumps up and goes back to her seat as soon as the song ends... sorry maan woh ridzy ne dare kiya tumhari saat aise karne ko toh...and ridzy, you just wait for your turn to come!
armaan: wow geet you are amazing, waise basket what was the pick a # thing for?
ridz: oh haan teddy, to pick the guy she does it to, 1 - you, 2 - rahul, 3- maan, 4- a random guy from the club, we didnt inc. atul jeeju b/c he is involved with anji di
rahul: hmm smart you made us chose and see if we pick ourself or not...
maan: wow geet tum to, woow
muski: hey maan no ideas okay? sirf ek dare tha! humari geet toh sapne mein bhi aise nahin karsakti! idk how she managed and that to sooo sexily!
geet:di! oof i'll spin now!
Anji: hmm maan, truth or dare?
maan: well after seeing what you gupta sisters dare, truth!
Anji: hmm bachgaya! fine ummm, have you ever been in love? like any girlfriends?
maan: nahin, mein toh mera sapno ki rani ka intezaar karehihoon...i dont want to break someone's heart for timepass,
anji: aww so cutee
maan: okay next! *he spins the bottle*
maan:ooh muski! truth or dare?
muski: hmm i always pick dare so truth
maan: have you ever been in love?
muski: haan do baar!
rahul: kya?? kiske saath?
muski:well first srk ji ki saat phir ksg ki saat 😃
rahul: hahahaha
muski: hmm nextt
atul: ooh rahul truth or dare?
rahul: hmm dare!
atul: theek hai toh you have to go kiss that chubby auntie over there on the cheek!
rahul: kya? fine!
rahul goes over and kisses her on the cheek, he then says cya ya later beautiful! and walks back to the table
lekin the fat lady runs behind him!
FL: jee meri naam lovely hai, app ki naam kya hai?
rahul: woh uh rahul, dekho ji woh ek dare ke wajese kiya, please i'll take your leave,
Lovely: jee? but i loveee you jee
muski giggles
rahul notices this and says sorry jee lekin im commited to someone.
Lovely: kya? par kaun?
rahul: muskaan! *he then goes over to muskaan and makes her stand up and wraps his arm around her waist and whispers in her ear play along and save me pleaseeeee
muskaan: haan, lovelyji - woah rahul is really my BF,
Lovely: oh theek hai lekin agar tumhara breakup wakeup ho jaye toh rahul call me!
with that lovely goes back to her table

Rahul: thanks muski! you saved me yaar

then ridz starts bursting out laughing!
rahul: ridzy baby, dont laugh so much your turn is yet to comee
he then spins the bottle and it lands on armaan
muski: hmm armaan, truth or dare?
armaan: hmm dare
muski: well we missed your performance the other day, so you have to do it again! right now!
Armaan: hmm darling, but how without my backup dancers? they had a HUGE part in this one and it would be wierd without them..
muski: hmm toh phir, you seem really muscular and strong... take off your vest and do 300 push-ups
armaan: sure!
muskaan: lekin... one of us will sit on your back!
maan-rahul: kya?
armaan: a dare is a dare guys! who wants to sit?
anji: hmm ridz you go! we shouldnt be too mean, and your the lightest amongst us!
armaan: theek hai, come
armaan begins doing them with ease

ridz: armaan just tell me na if i get too heavy,

rahul: muski, you should have listened to us...
maan: armaan does 500-1000 every day with one of US on his back....
rahul: its how he studies, he has a textbook on the floor and one of us on his back reading our own textbook... he even changes the pages himself
maan: meaning one armed pushups at times

muski-geet-anji-ridz:kya? wow armaan! sach?
armaan: guys stop bragging! lo 300 ho gaya!
ridz gets off his back, and sits down
armaan sits down and has a sip of water, his muscles are BULGING and he is looking super sexy, the girls are staring at him,
atul: armaan u can put your vest back on know...
armaan: oh haan, sorry *he puts it back on*
armaan: so basket tumhari turn!
ridz: haan dare!
rahul: hmm now you gave geet such a naughty dare, i'm thinking to do the same to you ridz...
ridz: hmm well batao, kya karna hoga?

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precap: ridz's naughty naughty dare




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Posted: 14 years ago
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omg m first one 2 comment yaeeee*dancing & jumping wid joy*!!

wonderful update
bt yaa u left it on a cliffhanger.... hayyeee waiting 2 know ridz's dare part.....

thnks 4 d pm😊 !!

cont soon....

Edited by kavyaa - 14 years ago
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hiiiii
aweome update
loved it
loved the truth and dare game
loved atul
so sweet
loved geets dare
loved rahul and ridzys bond
cant wait 4 ridzys dare
con soon
thanks 4 da pm

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