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Posted: 14 years ago
#31
Congo on the new thread!!! 🤗

Simply fab update!!!! Loved reading it!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
#32
Soooooooooooo Nys .. cant wait for the big twist ... 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#33
congo on the 4th thread muski!! omg 4th thread already!! goshh ... pata hi nahi chala 😆
nwaiiz looved this upd!! hot bubble bath 😳 😆 cant wait for the next upd!
-Mahi
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Wow congratz on the 4th thread 👏 👏 ur doing a great job & this prt was awesomee.... I realy liked the bubble bath prt makes me wanna hve 1 too lol 😆 it was pretty romantic 😳 Great goin cont soon 😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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its nice update👏👏👏...usual.....Ahem...Ahem...so much romantic hora hai😳😳😳....post update soon😉...v al will be waiting ....ur thoughs roaming around here n there....100 update pay dhaamak😲 ...hmmm...i really want whole world to know Geet😃 is Maan Singh Khurana wife😳....r u planing another child 4 Maaneet😳...n finally congrates 4 ur forth thread....growing messive na😆......

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Posted: 14 years ago
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superb!!!


i hope twist in favor of maneet!!!!

update sooN!!!!

congratz for 3rd thread!!!:D:D
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Posted: 14 years ago
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beautiful update.........

so a major twist is in store for us in 100th update....
plzzzzzzz heart attack mat dena..........kuch accha and surprising do
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Muskan your doing a great job, just like always. Love it. Can't wait for the new twist!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi muskan keep writing dear 👏 u r doing so great dear waiting for the next part plzzzzzzzzz update the next part for us as soon as u can😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
#40

geet - kuch bhol gaya the kya
maan - umm!!! kissed her & wispered u looked hot in the gym..& rushed out again..
geet stood turning pink.....

part 97

geet was still standing at the door untill she heard her phone ring..
geet - hai smriti ..


smriti - yaar we all are meeting up for lunch & then planning for some shopping
mera lehnga select karna hai
geet - wow..have u decided on the colour..
smriti - nahi yaar..ranbhir suggested pink..but I don't like pink
geet - then wat colour do u want?
smriti - yaar some shade of red..
geet - yah!! wedding main red hi aacha laagtha hain
smriti - iseliya tujhe bhula bhula ke thak gayai..please aa kar help kar na
geet - sure yaar..when do u want me to come
smriti - we will meet at the gurgoan mall at 12 have our lunch & then
check few jewels there & then go to chandini chowk ki kinari bazaar..
geet - yaar lunch not possible...I will be free only after 3pm...
smriti - yaar u have not even picked up a job..I wonder wat keeps u so busy
u know kavya & pooja have taken off today..kal janmashtami ki chuti hai
so we will have 2 whole days..aur to hai ki..
geet - mile ke batha thi hoon..
smriti - are u sure u don't want to have lunch with us..
geet - nahi yaar..lunch I can't commit..
(geet thinks again..agar yeh lunch ke liya aagaye to..nahi nahi..I better wait)
nahi smriti I won't be able to come for lunch...but yah! I will be there by 3-3.30pm

geet gets busy making lunch & arranges the table..
it was just 12 noon..smriti calls again
geet - hi smriti
pooja - pooja bhol rahi hoon..
geet - hai
pooja - yaar we are having a blast..kab aa rahi hain
geet - I will be there by 3.30pm I guess..
kavya - please geet jaldhi aana...I have lots to tell u
geet - hi kavya ..congrats yaar..heard about that NRI..guy
kavya - tu jaldhi aa na yaar we will talk about all that
geet - smriti kanha hain..
pooja - busy hain...ok ok ..we will talk to u latter..
smriti introduces pooja & kavya to ranbhir...
ranbhir - hai ..nice meeting u guys...
smriti u said three of ur friends right..
smriti - yah!! but woh busy hain..
pooja - hai jiju!! finally we get to meet..Mr. Khurana
ranbhir(blushed) - pleasure is all mine
kavya - glad u could make it
ranbhir - I could'nt have said no to smriti
smriti smiled
pooja - oye oye..jora ka gulam already
ranbhir - hum to inke gulam inhe dehkar hogaya the..
kavya - not bad jiju..
they order lunch & settle down..ranbhir & smriti sat togather
pooja & Kavya sit on the opposite side..
kavya - so jiju wat do u expect from ur future wife
ranbhir - nothing in specific..just want her to jell well with my family
pooja - don't u think there is too much of age difference between u both..
ranbhir - no no..I thought we are just perfect..(he smiled at smriti)
my bhiaya & bhabhi ..I guess unmhe to aur bhi age difference hain
they make a wonderfull couple..
kavya - smiriti was little scared about how she is going to manage all this family responsibilty..
she is still so young..
ranbhir - I guess she will do a great job!!
my bhabhi was just 18 when she got married to bhiaya...
pooja - aapki bhabhi padi likhi bhi hain yah nahi..
(that was rubbing the wrong side)
ranbhir - offcourse she is (strin voice)!!I just admire her so much...she completed her studies after
her marriage ..did well too..I just want u to be like her...
she really knows how to balance her friends & family..kid..husband..in-laws..every thing ..very well
smriti - aapne khabhi bhabhi se milaya nahi...
ranbhir - yeh !!!actually there was small accident..during our engaement..thats why they never came
for any of the functions
smriti - why wat happened...I hope every thing is fine..
ranbhir - now every thing is fine....yah!! family dinner ..main to bhabhi will definitly be there
not sure about bro..will let u know..
pooja & kavya..it will be really nice if u guys could also join us for the dinner
kavya - wo..I mean it is family dinner na...
ranbhir - we r family now...I know how close u guys are...
pooja - I am wanting to meet this bhabhi of urs..(smriti says pooja to keep quite)
ranbhir - tell ur other friend too...if u want I will speak to her
smriti - nahi nahi I will call her..
smriti calls geet...
geet - hi...
smriti - hi yaar I wanted to invite u for the family dinner..
geet - umm!!
maan walks in talking in the phone...geet was delighted to see him..
geet - ji aap aagayai..
smriti - kya bhol rahi hain to...
geet - kuch nahi I will call u latter...
smriti - sun to..
geet - bye bye...
she follows maan...he goes to the study & picks up a file..starts working on it


geet waits for few mins..maan looks at her...she looked confused..
not sure if he came for lunch or some file...it was already 2.30pm
she stood their expecting him to say some thing..she waited for few more mins.
she turned to leave..maan pulled her close & wispered close to her ears
while on phone
maan - i am really hungry..this call does'nt seem to end any sooner(he made a baby face)
geet caressed his face..challo..

precap
maan getting angry & geet ka shart!!!

thanxs for all ur replies & wishes..please do comment
love muskan
Edited by muskanp - 14 years ago

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