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hey guys...i m writing os on current track..i dont know u all will like it or not but have a look...i hope u like it..so here it is..read n njoy...actually one idea striked in my mind and i thought of sharing with u all... as u know that gunjan joins excel clg as councellor and she dont know that samrat is the trustee of excel clg...and mayank thinks that gunjan knows everything...at gunjan's home..
g-ashwini...vo...
ash-mai bahar jaa rahi hu..(as she is angry with gunjan)
g-par...ashwini..raat ke 9 baj chuke hai aur is waqt tum...😔
ash-tumhe kya problem hai aur vaise bhi tum meri real sis to nahi hona..😡
gunjan was heartbroken..ash went from there...
g to herself-pata nahi ashwini ko kya ho gaya hai..kyu vo mere sath aisa kar rahi hai...magar mujhe use sambhalna hoga..mai use akela nahi chod sakti...mujhe uska picha karna hoga...i m sorry ashwini par mujhe tumhari bohot fikar hai isliye mujhe aisa karna hoga..😔
gunjan followed ash..ash ko nahi pata hai ki gunjan use follow kar rahi hai...
other side..
s to himself-aj mai bohot khush hu...bohot bohot khush hu...ab sab thick ho jaega..haa..sab thick ho jaega..mujhe meri chasmish vapas mil jaegi...3 saal mai tumhare bagair raha hu chasmish ab aur nahi...ab mai tumhe hamesha ke liye apna bana na chahta hu...😊
at mayank's home..mayank see nupur photo...and tears coming from his eyes..
m to himself-nupur..tum kaha ho..tumne mere baare mai bilkul nahi socha...tumne to mujse vaada kiya tha ki tum mujhe chodkar kahi nahi jagoi. to fir kyu chale gayi...kyu nupur...pls nupur vapas aa jao nupur...tumhara mayank tumhare bagair adhura hai...😭
other side..ash went in her car...
g to herself-ashwini to bohot gusse mai hai..kahi isne kuch galat kar diya to....😔
gunjan sits in taxi and follow ash...ash stops her car at samrat's home..she came out from the car..gunjan also comes out from taxi..
ash to herself-samrat....mai tumhare paas aa rahi hu...😊
ash went inside...
g to herself-ye...ye ashwini samrat ke ghar...par ye samrat ko kaise janti hai....kuch to gadbad hai..😔
ash rang the bel...samrat opened the door..
s-tum..
ash-ha samrat..😊
gunjan chupke se sab dekh rahi thi..
s-kuch kaam hai ash??
ash-of ho samrat....ander to aane do mujhe..😊
s-aao...
ash went inside...samrat closed the door...
g to herself-ashwini aur samrat ek dusre ko jante hai...par kaise...samrat ne to darwaza band kar diya..ab mai kya karu..mera ye janna bohot zaruri hai...mujhe kuch bhi karke ander jaana hi hoga....par mai...mai samrat ko apni aakho ke samne nahi dekhna chahti hu...par ashwini ke liye mujhe ye karna hoga..😔
inside..
s-ab bolo kya kaam hai??
ash-samrat....vo...mera man hua isliye mai aa gayi...kuch galat to nahi kiya na maine..😊
s-ash...itni raat ko....
ash-samrat...agar tumhe acha nahi laga to mai chale jati hu...😔
s-maine aisa to nahi kaha na ash...
ash-😔
s-ok sorry...
ash-.....😊
other side..
g to herself-kya karu mai...kaise jao ander..😔
then suddenly gunjan ko chakkar ane lage..
g to herself-ye mujhe....mujhe chakkar kyu aa rahe hai...ye mujhe kya ho raha hai...😔
inside..
ash-samrat...mai tumse kuch puch sakti hu??😊
s-kya??
ash-samrat....kya tumhe....kabhi bhi....i mean kya tumhe kabhi kisi se pyaar hua hai??😊
s-(he was silent and started thinking about gunjan..all flashback scenes of sajan)
ash-samrat...
samrat was lost in thinking about gunjan and he was smiling...
ash to herself-ye samrat muskura kyu raha hai..
then ash pinched samrat..
s-oou...
ash-kaha kho gaye the??
s-vo....kuch nahi..
ash-ok....to samrat bolo na..kya tumhe kabhi kisise pyaar hua hai??😊
s-........ash ye kaisa sawaal hai..
ash-matlab...
s-ash...tumhe abhi apne ghar jaana chahiye..
ash-par...😔
s-ash..pls..
ash became angry and she went from there in anger...
s to himself-ye ash bhi na..
ash went from there..she sits in her car and went from there...she did not see gunjan...but gunjan saw ash...
g to herself-ye ashwini kaha chale gayi......😔
now in delhi...there is one girl..(guys she is nupur..)
flashback....jab accident hua tha tab sabko laga ki nupur is dead..but she is actually not...nupur was alive...doctor went to nupur...
n-doctor sab kaise hai??kisi ko kuch hua to nahi na...😭
doc-nahi...sab thick hai par...
n-par kya doctor...😭
doc-dekho..mai tumse kuch chupana nahi chahta hu.....
n-ap..ap kya kehna chahte hai??😭
doc-tum abhi to thick hu par aage jaakar problems ho sakti hai..
n-matlab??
doc-matlab ye ki.....kuch saalo baad tumhari yaadaas jaa sakti hai...
nupur was shocked to hear this..
n-kya...😭
doc-haa....par ham sure nahi hai...vaise 70% chances hai tumhari yaadaas jaane ke.....aur agar ek baar tumhari yaadaas chale gayi to fir vapas yaad ana bohot hi muskil hoga...
n-😭😭matlab.....meri yaadaas chale jaegi??😭
doc-maine kaha na 70 % chances hai...
n-doctor kya ye baat mayank ya gunjan ya kisi ko bhi pata hai??😭
doc-nahi....vo log abhi hosh mai nahi aye hai..
n to herself-agar ye baat mayank ko pata chal jaegi to vo.....vo ye bardaas nahi kar paega...aur...kuch saalo baad to meri yaadaas chale jaegi..nahi..mai mayank ko ye baat kabhi pata nahi chalne dugi........isse acha to yahi hoga ki.....mai uski zindegi se hamesha ke liye vapas chale jao.....haa yahi thick rahega...i m sorry mayank...tumhe mujhe bhulna hoga...😭😭😭
n-doctor...apko mere liye ek kaam karna hoga..😭
doc-kya??
n-apko sabko ye batana hoga ki mai...mai mar chuki hu...😭
doc-kya...magar mai aisa nahi kar sakta..ye galat hai...
n-dekhiye doctor..ye meri zindegi ka sawaal hai....mai mayank se bohot pyaar karti hu....
doc-par aisa bhi ho sakta hai ki apki yaadaas nahi jae...dekho ham sirf 70% keh sakte hai aur...
n-doctor...mai janti hu..par fir bhi....ap ko ye jhoot kehna hoga...😭
doc-par mai...
n-pls doctor..manaa mat kijiye...pls..😭😭
doc-mai tumse aur kuch bhi kehna chahta hu..
n-kya??😭
doc-agar tumhari yaadaas chale gayi to fir....
n-to fir kya doctor??
doc-to fir tumhe...tumhe mental disorder bhi ho sakta hai..
n-kya😭
doc-ye to sure hai ki agar tumhari yaadaas chale gayi to fir tumhe mental disorder to zarur hoga...
n-😭😭😭
she cried a lot...
n-apko....apko jhoot bolna hoga doctor...😭
doc-dekho nupur...
n-nahi....mujhe kuch nahi sunna hai...mai mayank ki life apni wajah se spoil nahi karna chahti hu...mai mayank se bohot pyaar karti hu...apko jhoot bolna hoga...pls..doctor pls..😭😭
doc-agar mai jhoot bol bhi duga to dead body ke baare mai kya kahuga??agar vo log mujse puchege ki dead body kaha hai to mai kya kahuga??tum hi batao..
n-.....😭ap...ap kuch bhi bol dena...bas ye sach kisi ko pata nahi chalna chahiye...pls doctor..mai apke haat per jodti hu..pls..😭😭
then nupur came to delhi....there she met one uncle and aunty who was having no child and nupur became very close to them and so she stays with them..they consider nupur as their own child....nupur also loves them a lot...flashback ends...nupur is in delhi...and she stays with her uncle and aunty...at her home...its 10 o clock...
n-uncle...aj mai bohot khush hu..puchiye kyu..😊
uncle-kya hua beta??
n-uncle...mujhe...job mil gayi...😊
uncle-job...kaha??
n-uncle maine apse kaha tha na ki mai job dhund rahi hu...to mujhe job mil gayi..vo malhotra company haina vaha mujhe job mili hai secretary ki....😊
uncle-acha...ye to bohot achi baat hai beta...to tum kitne baje jaogi??
n-mai subah 10 baje jaogi aur raat ko 10 baje vapas aa jaogi..😊
aunty came..
aunty-kya...
n-aunty..
aunty-koi zarurat nahi hai...subah ke 10 baje se lekar raat ke 10 baje tak...nahi...koi zarurat nahi hai..
n-aunty pls aisa mat kahiye....vo bohot badi company hai...aur..mujhe kitni muskil se job mili hai..pls manaa mat kijiye..😔
aunty-nahi.....
n-pls aunty.....😔
aunty-nahi nupur....raat ke 10 baje tak..nahi..mujhe ye manzur nahi hai..
n-uncle ap samjaeye na aunty ko pls..😔
uncle-par beta...iski baat sahi hai...itni der tak...
n-ap bhi uncle...mujhe ap log se baat hi nahi karni hai...😔
aunty-nupur beta...ahm tujse bohot pyaar karte hai beta...aur beta...tu kitni thak jaegi..pura din kaam..
n-aunty....mai janti hu par aunty mai is job se bohot khush hu...
aunty-par....
n-aunty..pls..😔
aunty-...............thick hai..
nupur became excited and she hugged her aunty..
n-thank u aunty..i love u...😊
guys...i wil continue the next part tomorrow...i dont know u will like it or not...but i want u all to comment..and feel free to comment..pls guys...i want to know that u liked it or not..love u all..
hazra
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rose.three thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww... so nice!!
lovely OS....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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sweet os but sad

plz cont 2row thnx hazra 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Very nice...plzz continue soon...
thnxx 4 the PM...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow!!! u r such a FABULOUS WRITER hazra!
do PM me after u've updated d nxt part!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awww... so nice!!
hazra this is so much better than actual mjht!!!
Nupur is there!!
It was a little sad!! but still when nupur is there everything is perfect!!
Mwah!! love you!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome update
loved it
sad but mindblowing
dieing 2 c what happens next
con soon
thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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update asap
am dying to read further
but so sad story
nupur ki yaadash n all
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey do continue soon missing nupz alott
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Posted: 15 years ago
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if sajan re-unite and rati cums bak....I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVVVVVVVVVEEEEEEEEEE dis os!

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