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Posted: 15 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: shruthiR

This chp was nice.Looks like Adarsh is a full on padaaku😆and I am happy that Pratigya is bold and short tempered in your ff.Looking forward to the next chp😊



eheeee......sab kuch soch samajh ker kii hain....thanks fr likin it😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i jussstttttt lovvvveeeeee college stories..plzzzz cntinue😳😳😳😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was very interesting update. i like ur ff concept of college life.plz do continue. i m waiting for next chapter.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: kaasshh

i jussstttttt lovvvveeeeee college stories..plzzzz cntinue😳😳😳😳

me too yaar 😳 n wow the pratigya of ur ff is so cool !! is pratigya aur krishu ki love story will be a treat for us yaar.... please do continue & as i always say update soon 😉😆😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Veryyyyy Gooood!! Cant Wait For The Next Chapter!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@kaash: me too...thts y came up wid a FF😆

@halaa: thanks dear😊

@kriya_fan: lol..yh mayb a treat for all kriyans😉 and thnx 4 readin

@SadiaLuvs_SuKu: thanx😊


Chapter 2

Thakur Mansion

9:00AM (same day)
Its a housefull concert.Every audiences are applausing and appreciating the performer by saying "once more, once more"
the performer: "u want moreee....okhe then......luv uuuu guys"
(he starts to play guiter, jus then the alarm rings)
Krishna opened his eyes and turns off the alarm, wakes up
"arree yaarr, kya dream tha...kabhi pura nahin dekh pata...khair choro, iss dream ko reality mein bana kar rahoongi....aur yeh mera promise raha apne aap see, aab chaaloo utho"
he gets off 4rm the bed and goes for a bath

On the other room, the song "chaliya from the film tashan" is playing......komal is dancing
and that too infront of the mirror and giving killin luks in these lines:

"Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
Don't look at me like that mahi (winks)
Na lada na lada tu ankh na lada
Don't look at me like that boy"


Just then her amma calls "krishna komal, nachta tayar hain aajaaoo" from downstairs in dining room, where there is Shakti the elder brother, and Sajjan sing the father and krishna's daadi having brkfast.
Kesar, shakti's wife is standing beside him,serving him.
Amma: arree kesarbahu, zara dekho to komal kya kar rahe hain....aaj uski pehla din hain college main.....kahin late na ho jaaye:
Kesar: "jii maaji"
She goes upstairs to call komal

(in komal's room)
she turns off the song(wen her mom calls).....and calls her best friend Pooja (who is a childhood friend since school days, and is now studying in the same college)
Komal: "hey pooh, tu college poch gayi kya??"
Pooja: "nahin, baas 10min mein poch rahi hoon....aur tu?"
Komal: arrree maine to abhi brkfast bhi nahin kii.tu ek kaam kar college poch mere liye bahar intezar karna......hum eksaath
enter karenge.aftrall aaj humara pehle din hain"
Pooja: "alri8, jaldi aana..byee n c u in college"
Komal: "byeee...."
(she cuts the phone, jus then kesar knocks on the door)
Kesar: "komal, niche aajao, amma tumhara intezar kar rahe hain"
komal: "yh mein aa rahi hoon..aap jao"
(kesar leaves) komal took her books and Ipod in her bag....and comes to downstairs in dining room

On the other side,
Krishna comes out 4m bathing, threw the towel on bed..he combs his hair...then he took his bag and guiter(he loves his guiter alot)
and goes to dining room

(in dining room)
everyone was having brkfast, krishna came and took an apple and
asked komal: "are u going wid mee, komal??"
Komal: "yes"
Krishna: "then lets go"
komal gets up and take blessings from her parents and daadi
SajjanSing: "class mein dhan se par na.......apne dosto ke saath gappe maat marna thik hain?"
Komal Nods

Krishna takes out his bike.....komal took her seat
and the two bro and sis are on the way of their destination- RedCliffe College



now the real suspense starts😆 wi8 for the 3rd part......it may take me longer time coz im still thinkin of some more interesting parts..thanks



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Posted: 15 years ago
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Loved the update.
The dream sequence is amazing.
Update soon.😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
#18
Hey
Very interesting
Please update soon and PM when you do so.
Thanks
Tc =)
Nupur
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ffkhan

Loved the update.

The dream sequence is amazing.
Update soon.😛



thanks😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#20

Originally posted by: cutegurl224

Hey
Very interesting
Please update soon and PM when you do so.
Thanks
Tc =)
Nupur



glad to hear that ur interested.....thanks😊 wil surely PM ya

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