FF- Pyar Aur Romance PROMO Pg 40

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haala

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Posted: 15 years ago

#31

that was awesome update. their first meeting was very interesting and i like the concept of love at first sight.thank u for this wonderful update. waiting for the next one. plz update soon the next chapter.

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Sadie

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Posted: 15 years ago

#32

Wooow!!

Hayeee I Couldt Stop Smiling!!

The Bit Where He's Walking Backwards Reminds Me Of Srk In Kuch Kuch Hota Hai Lolz

Update Soon x

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Aabray

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Posted: 15 years ago

#33

Originally posted by: SadieLuvs_Suku
Wooow!!
Hayeee I Couldt Stop Smiling!!

The Bit Where He's Walking Backwards Reminds Me Of Srk In Kuch Kuch Hota Hai Lolz

Update Soon x

oh no........i jus remembrd NOW......😆 i dunno why it came to my mind....
.but glad to hear tht u lykd it😊thankss

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kasturika ghosh

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Posted: 15 years ago

#34

hanha ha ha ha tunna ka dreamgrl.....🤣 vry well written....👏👏

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Aabray

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#35

thanks everybody.....for all ur wonderful comments😊

Chapter 4

(In Canteen)
Chandu is there wid burgers and cold drinks.Krishna and Tunna comes, and sits beside chandu.
Krishna: "yeh lo.....tu yaha betha hain.....aur tum tujhe kaha kaha nahin dhunda."
Chandu: "arree i was hungry......sooo college aate hii canteen mein beth gayi"
Krishna: "tu aur tera bhook, accha ek baat baata, ye college mein koi nayee students admission lii hain kya?"
Tunna: "ha liya hain, tere behen aur uskii dost poo poo haa pooja."
Krishna: "arrrre nahin......i mean except komal and pooja....aur bhi koi nayii hain?"
Tunna: "NAAYIII?? acchaa to tu uss ladki ki baat kar raha hain....jisse tu abhi kuch der pehle takra ya.......hai na?"
Chandu: "kya baat kar raha hoo tunna?, krish baat kya hain? kaun hain wo ladki hhuh??"
Krishna: "arree kya tum log.....aise koi baat nahin hain..wo main to aise hi pooch raha tha"
(sed widout looking at them)
Tunna: "accha agar koi baat nahiin, to nazra kyun nahin mila rahe ho?, arree hum to tere dost hain hum se chupayga?"
Chandu seconds Tunna.
Krishna: aarrre kya batayein?, pata nahin jabse usse dekha hain...tabse kuch ajeeb sa feeling hota hain,
ek pal ke liye lagta hain jaise saas e tham gayee...i dunno wats all this...uss ladki mein koi prob hain mein bata rahii hoon."
Chandu:"arre uss ladki mein prob nahin hain.......prob to kuch aur hain." Krish: "what?"
Chandu: arrre tujhe "love at first sight hua hain, yaarr" (pats him on bak)
Krishna: "wat rubbish..(stands up) aisa nahin ho sakta....mujhe aur pyar....naaahh"
Tunna: "abbbbbbb....Krishna interrupts him: abb kuch nahin clas ka time ho gaya chaloo."
Chandu: "iss ka kuch nahin ho sakta"
Tunna: "ur rite...hope ke usse jaldi ehsaas ho jaayee." Chandu nods.
Both of them goes to class.

(In Library)
Adarsh searching for book.Pooja and komal comes to library as Pooja needs to collect some notes.Komal is uninterested coming to the library but she joined Pooja as they are new students.
Komal (sits on a chair): "tu jaldi apna kaam khatam kar tabtak mein yaha bethe bethe rest le loon.....aur waise bhi iss silence jaaga mein mujhe bohot chen se rest milegii"
Pooja: "tu kabhi nahin sudregii" (she starts searching for books)
Adarsh found the book he wanted and sits on the same place wher komal was alrdy sitted.Adarsh didnt saw her as he hides his face wid the book.
Komal (thinking wen she saw adarsh): "ye lo.....pura ka kitab mein hii ghus gaya..stupid guy"
Pooja returns to komal
Pooja: hey got the book, but main isse ghar leke nahin jaa sakti."
Komal (confused): "kyun?"
Pooja: "kyun mujhe iss ke liye library ka member ho na parega."
Komal: "to baan ja, iss mein kaun sii bari baat hain"
Pooja: "arre lekin uss ke liye form to fill up karna parega aur mere paas form hii nahin hain, kisi ne mujhse kaha hain kii koi adarssh saxena naam ke kissi ladke ke see help lene ke liye...lekin ye adarsh saxena hai kaun?"
Komal: "arree tu chinta maat kar....main vai se kehke dekhti hoon...."
Pooja: "arre lekin ye pehle librarian se to baat karke dekhe?"
Komal: "haa chaal."
Komal and Pooja comes to the librarian......and enquires abt Adarsh.
the librarian told them that adarsh is sitting there...that one is adarsh.
Komal and Pooja turns to see.
Komal: "to yeh hain adarsh saxenaa, mr.padakooo"
then both komal n pooja comes infront of adarsh....
adarsh puts the book down.....but he didnt notice komal....instead he started writng something.
Komal: "excusee mee, mr.pa .....adarsh saxena?"
Adarsh (looks up to see her) : "yess?"

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precap: krishna playing wonderful tune from his guiter...pratigya listens and mesmerised

Edited by Aabrayy - 15 years ago

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ffkhan

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Posted: 15 years ago

#36

Nice update and loved the precap.

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shruthiR

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Posted: 15 years ago

#37

It was a very nice chp.I liked how Komal and Adarsh met.Looking forward to the next chp😊

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haala

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Posted: 15 years ago

#38

that was awesome update . komarsh first meeting was very interesting. thank u for this wonderful update.plz update soon.

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Aabray

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Posted: 15 years ago

#39

thanks frnds for ur wonderfull comments😳

Chapter 5

For a moment Komal and Adarsh locked into each other's eyes.
Adarsh: "u wanna say sth?"
Komal: "yess......." Pooja (interrupts her) " i want the registration form of the library, can u plz tell me where can I get it?"
Adarsh: "oh, ummm....i must say u are very lucky that there only two forms left with me, u can take it."
Pooja: "no we need only one."
Komal: "umm, noo two....i mean i also want to register"
Pooja was like huh? 0_o
Adarsh takes out the forms from his bag, and hands those to pooja and komal.
Pooja saying thanks leaves with komal.

Pooja and Komal goes to class room....there they meets Pratigya and Rolli.
Komal: hello galss, we r new"
Pratigya and Roli smiles.
Prats: woww...we are also neww...hi im pratigyaa, Rolli: and im roli.
The Foursome introduce themselves and shakes hand.Also introduces themselves with the old students.Amongst the old students, there is Nisha Gujral, very stylish, shows attitude, very rich.
Nisha: "hey galss, main hoo nisha, nisha gujral...college ke sabsee khubsurat ladkii.....each and every person here knows me, soo u better know me"
Pratigya: "hello nisha nice to meet u". jus then a male teacher enters the class room, its none other than professor shyam saxena father of pratigya and adarsh.
Prof. "hello students, let me 1st introduce the new students.
Komal, Pratigya, Pooja and Rolli.Welcum to the college.
Okhey now back to the class, let me tell u that i'll give u a project which u need help from your seniors, u'll get a student from senior class as ur partner and you and ur partner will make the project together, After class do check the noticeboard (pointing at the noticeboard at the corner of the room)"
He then starts giving lectures and writing on whiteboard.
Komal (feeling bored and whisperes in pooja's ears) :" arre ye prof itna dimaag kyun kha raha hain, mujhe to neend aa raha hain."
Pooja was about to say sth but the bell rings. -"le teri wish puri ho gayii.."
Komal : "thank God.........*phew*....."
When the professor leaves...everyone goes towards the noticeboard to see who their partner iss...all the students gathers there and creates crowd
Rolli sees that her patner is someone name "Chandu". Pooja got Tunna as her partner.
-abb ye chandu kaun hain? says Rolli
-aur ye tunna kaun hain...wierd namee says Pooja.
- dont worry humein senior students ke class mein jake dekhenge..says Pratigya, lekin pehle merii partner kaun hain....she search to see.....
-Krishnaa??? ye Krishna kaun hain?? asks Pratigya
-arree ye to mera bhai hain, answers komal
Nisha (on hearing that feels jealous on prats) : "lucky girl, krishna is the hottest hunk in the collegee, every girl wantss to b his LIFE partner."
Pratigya: "oh i seeee...."
Komal finds Adarsh as her partner....-"ohooooo luk pooh whos ma partner its none other than mr.padakooo adarsh"
Pratigya and Rolli laughs on hearing this.
Pratigya "adarsh mera bhai hain, and ur ritee....hez very padakooo...but u'll b
shocked to know that he is interested in basketball."
Komal: "acchaaa...."
Pratigya: "abb tum to bhaia se milchuke lekin main abhi tak tumhare vai se mila nahin........."
Komal: "oh ha chaloo..." (the four goes to find their partners...)
On the Way,
Komal asks another student (passing by) "umm kya tumne krishna ko kahiin dekhe hain.??"
He repliess: "noo.......but i guess u shud check in music room"
Komal : "thanks..." turns to pratigya "u go to the music room im sure u'll find him theree...and we'll go and find our partners. okhee byeee."
Roli: byee.....mujhe bhi dhundnii nahin...will meet u in canteen okhzz."
Pratigya: "aarrre paar....(they leavess....) abb main krishna ko kaise pehchanoo?, anyways pehle musicroom jaake dekhti hoon"
She goes to music room.....

(in music room)
Krishna setting tunings of his guitar....trying to play a romantic tunee.
Pratigya enters the room, lukin for krishnaa.....
(they didnt see each other yet)
While then Krishna starts playing a romantic tuneee.Pratigya listens and mesmerises....she moves forward and faces krishna's back....
She didnt call him as she keep listening to the tunee......
she felt some cold breeze on her.....she completely lost into the tuneee...
Pratigya stepping towards him....krishna felt that sum1 is behind him.....he stops and luks back....and sees pratigya.
Both of them went to flashback on their 1st meeting...
Krishna once agen locked in her eyess.....and beauty...
Pratigya : " ummm......krishna?" Krishna somehow managed to reply : "yup"
Prats : "ohhh hii im pratigya..........dadd told mee.... i mean our professor told mee that ur my project partner......."
Krishna : "oh yess i saw that on noticeboard......and wich prof r u talking abt?"
Prats : "prof shyam saxena" Krish : "he is ur dad? "
Prats : " yeah." krish: "to tum adarsh ki behen hoo hmmm"
Pratigya: "ritee...... waisee tum acha guitar bajate hoo."
Krishna: "thanks"
Prats (hesitated while saying ) : ummm suna hain college ke saaree ladkiyan tumpe fida hain.."
Krish : "yeah.....so to hain....lekin mujhe lagta nahin yakeen hain tum bhi unn ladkiyon mein see ek ho.(winksss)
Prats (felt irritating) : "jii nahiin......main sirf tumse project ke liye tumse mili, varnaa...main to tumsee baat bhi nahin karti...."
Krish : "project to sirf ek bahaanaa hain.....(cuming close to her) "
Pratigya (raising finger) : "dont u daree to cum close to me" (she stepped backward)
Krish :" itnaa ghussaa.......main to baass aise maaaza kar raha tha....aur tumne isse seriously le lii....pata nahin tum mere saath project par kaam kaise karogii."
Prats : " kaam karlungi...lekin mujheee aise maaza bilkul pasand nahinn.."
(now she is mad at him)
Krish : baap reee itnaa ghussaa....i think tumhara naam pratigya nahin......misss..............haa.....miss temper honi chahiye, wat say miss.temper."
Pratss : "tummmmmmm...." (jus then her mobile rings)
its roli whoz calling her....Rolii : "we r wi8in for u in canteen"
Prats : "alri8 im cuming....." (disconects the phone)
Prats : "will see uu laterr.." Krish : "ur most welcomed"
Pratigya leaves angrily......
Krishna : "bohot gusse walii hain.........miss.temper......but i lyk it...."

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precap : the basketball slips out from adarsh's hand and hits komal's back..

Edited by Aabrayy - 15 years ago