hamaara pyaar...part-10..pg-37..updated

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hai friends....i am trying 4 my first naksh ff...hope ur encouragement and support will be there till the end......
After all the problems atlast daddaji agrees 4 mohith and nandni,s marrige....everybody is very happy in the singhania,s house.......
At night naitik tells to akshara..''akshara,kitne dino baad ghar mein itna roshni aayi hai na..sablog kitna ghush hai....
A:ha...naitik..sab ko ghush dekhke mujhe bhi bohoth ghushi ho rahi hai...aur nandini didi bhi kitni ghush hai na..unki manpsand jeeven saathi paakar.
N:lekin akshara main bhi khush hoon lekin thodi dukhi nahi dikh rahi..?dekhiye mera chehra dekhiye...
A:kya hua naitik..ab aap ko kya..hogaya..??
N:aur kya hoga..aap hi tho meri problem hai..
A:mein..??meine kya kiya??
N:aap itne dinon se ek baar bhi nahi poocha..ki mein kaisi hoon...maana ki aap pareshaan thi...lekin phir bhi aap ek baar pooch tho sakthi thi.....
A:OO...tho yeh hai aapka problem...tho ab aap ye bataayiye ki hum ise suljhaaye kaise??
N:hm...accha mein ek idea batao..😉..aaj poori raath jaagke hum dher saari bathe karthe hai na.....
A:hm..tho ye hai aapka idea..mujhe to bohoth neend aa rahi hai naitik..🥱..itni din theek se soya nahi hai na...aur aap bhi so jayiye..kal subah hi aapko daddaji bulane vaale hai...
N:vaise mein to apni pyaar ke liye apni neend bhi nyochavar karne ke kiye tayyar hoon....
A:ye sab aap baad mein kijiye mujheto ab sona hai..
and they both lies on bed...
N:lekin akshara...aapke saath beith nahi saktha tho so tho sakthi hoon na....
(then they both hugs each other..)
(if u liked it, then pls press the LIKE button.....)thank u.....
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Drishti... thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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woww!!!..shama it was a wonderful part..!..i cud imagine both of them actually saying these lines...i rlly liked it...

and naitik's being mischevious haan?..lol...it was veryyy nice..
keeep it up...and do pm me wen u update(if u have a pm list and have no problem 😊)
thnks
drishti
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Posted: 15 years ago
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keep up the good workkk👏👏👏👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ananya_krish

keep up the good workkk👏👏👏👏

thnx anu...thnx a lot.....🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shamasallfav

y only reserved??not so gud?/

no no no...i reserved it cos i wanted to be the first one to comment shama...😊
its rlly good...i will edit it abhi 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awsom start am
keep going 👍🏼 👏 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Drishti...

woww!!!..shama it was a wonderful part..!..i cud imagine both of them actually saying these lines...i rlly liked it...

and naitik's being mischevious haan?..lol...it was veryyy nice..
keeep it up...and do pm me wen u update(if u have a pm list and have no problem 😊)
thnks
drishti

thnx a lot drii.....🤗..sure freind....wat problem??i ll surely PM u.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: yrk_fan

good start!!!keep it up

thnx a lot dipsi........🤗..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: shamasallfav

thnx a lot drii.....a big hug 4 u.....🤗..sure my freind....wat problem??i ll surely PM u.......

aww...ure most welcome
but remember frndship mein no thnks.no sorry n no plss 😃
aww..thnks..one for u too 🤗
thanku Smile
and the update was rlly good
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thnx a lot preksha.....🤗

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