A NEW STRY BT SHRT ONE.ch6 pg 4

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GUYZ I M WRITING ANEW STRY ON MJT..........ITZ ABT DAT PYAAR E TWISTS KESE HOTE HAI..............AND HOW DESE TWISTS CHANGE UR 'LOVE"IN A SEC

TITLE:PYAAR ME KABHI KABHI

DATE:13 Feb,2010
mayur scene:
NUPUR:mayank tumne kabhi ksie se pyaar kiya hai?
MAYANK:pyaar toh kiya hai bt yeh neh pta k sacha hai ya jhoota
NUPUR:kiya hai...kis se
MAYANK:cumin clse to nupz:TUM......
NUPUR:BCMZ SHY.......
MAYANK:strts laughing loudly........
NUPUR: kya hua mayank?
MAYANK:tumhe laga me sach bol rha ho...i m kidding.............it waz a joke
NUPUR:mayank.....seriously kabhi kise se pyaar kiya hai..............kise ladki se
MAYANK:HAN kiya hai ............
NUPZ:kis se?
MAYANK:US SE jo duniya me sab se khobsurat ladki hai ............
nupz:KON?tumhe us se pyaar kese hua?
MAYU:us ki ankhein dekh kr pyaar pyaari green clr ki..WOH BILKUL gori the aur sehar ki kuri hone k bawjood bilkul gaone ki guri the
NUPZ:feels possessive....................kon mayank..kahan hai woh..tum abbhi us se pyaar kret ho
mayank:nahi ab nahi krta.....
NUPUR RELIEFS
MAYANK:kyunk ab woh us duniya me neh hai.us ki ek accident me death hogye
NUPZ:OH
MAYU:tumhe pta hai us k liye me 3 days rota rha den live goes on
NUPZ:kon the woh ladki
MAYU :MERE KITTY pyaari se kitty.
NUPZ:kon kitty
MAYU:han mere billi
NUPZ:MAYANk????????
MAYANK:sry.....
NUPZ:pr mayu pyaar toh tumne us se bhi kiya thatoh tum use bhol gye kal ko koi ladki k sath bhi aisa kro ge
MAYU:dependz
NUPZ:dependz?mayu mjhe tum se yeh umeed neh the.....mjhe tum jese ladke se koi baat nhe krne
MAYU:nupur.(she leaves).uf ......................nupur tum jo marzi kr lo pr me apne dil ki baat tumhe kal he btao ga ...valentines day .............
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at home..........
gunji:di tum itne late kese hogye.
nupuz:kch nhe woh mayank k sath walk krte krte tym ka pta he nhe chla.....
gunji:koi nhe di.tum araam kro.............me tumhre liye kch ley aao kafi thaki lag rhe ho
NUPZ:nhe gunjan me theek ho...........ab me so ge toh bhi so ja
GUNJI:han di bus tumhra w8 kr rhe the..........
DEY BTH sleeps..............
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adhi:YAR yeh suhaani ka kab se no. try kr rha ho mil he neh rhe
SUHAANI:kyunk suhaani yahan hai.........
ADHI:tum yahan is waqt mere room me................
SUHANI:han kyun tumhre room me nhe askte
ADHI;U R MST WELCUM HERE
SUHAANI:thnk u
DIA:suhaani ko mene bulaya hai...........
ADHI:kyun mera sukoon dekha neh jaat
SUHAANI stares him
DIA:OH U BTH...............suhaani ko mene mjhe lene k liye bulaya hai
SUHAANI:WESE dia adhi se keh do k me us se tab tak theek se baatn he kro ge jab tak woh mere baat nhe mane ga
ADHI:dia tum bhi suhaani se keh do k mene us ki baat man le hai ab woh apna mood saheeh krley
SUHANI:SACH adhiii. ur so sweet
DIA:guyz mjhe bhi btao na kya baat
SUHAANI:arre woh adhi k liye koi ache se grlfrend dhondna
DIA:oh...............datz kool
ADHI:aur tumhre saheli wants k me kal valentines baal me kisi ladki ko dhondo.........
DIA:bt guyz tab kal kise ko apna prtner nhe chose kr skte
ADHI:KYUN?
dia:kyunk kal ki prty me grlz apna prtner selct kre ge and woh jis boy ko khe ge un k sath unhe dance krna padega
SUHAANI:dats kool
adhi:hmmmmmmmmmmmm....................
DIA:yupz ............OH MJH YAAD AYA meen ladko ki list abhi tak ready nhe ke.....................i ve tpo go chle suhaani..............
SUHAANI:HMMMMMMchlo dia..mjeh bhi apna dress selct krna hai
suhani :bye adhi kal ready rehna
dia:BYE ADHI TRAKE CARE GUD NYT
ADHI:bye guyz..............dey bth leaves
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DATE:14 FEB, 2010.
DAY OF LOVE
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wow seems interesting ..wen ru goona update the next part.. 😛
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just may be in one or half hr.........im completing it........
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Originally posted by: laviza97

just may be in one or half hr.........im completing it........




oh then i will be waiting...
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me waiting......PM me wen u'll update......:)))))))))
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sooooo sry guyz as i promised dat i wud update in half or one hr......actulyy my lite went off so mere pura nxt prt save he nhe hua .......................i ve to write again bt i wud pm u wen i wud cntinue...................
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HEY GUYZ ITZ DA CH2

DATE:14 Feb,2010.
DAY OF LOVE
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mayur scene:
NUPUR enters da basket ball court and searching 4 mayank..suddenlymayank enters and scares nupur..
nupur:mayank ..tum ne mjhe dra diya
MAYANK:OHO...morena queen ko dar bhi lgta hai jis se adha clg drta hai.........
nupur:mayank tum.......
MAYANK:holds her hand ..me kya
NUPUR:kch nhe.......aur apna hath churwa lete hai
MAYANK:wese jhansi ki rani nupur kumari kisi ko dhond rhe the ya kise ka intezaar ho rha hai
nupz:me kyun kise ka w8 krne lge.............
MAYU:point toh hai.......agar tum kise se pyaar vyaar krte hote toh krte abhi se kyun kro ge
NUPZ;HMM
MAYU:wese me toh tumhra he w8 kr rha tha
nupz:kyun?
mayur:takes out a ring 4rm his pocket..yeh ring kese hai
nupz:bht ache hai mayu..
maynk:mjhe pta tah mere pasand humesha ache hoti hai
AUR tumhe pta hai k yeh ring me tumhe subha se dikhana chta tha bcz u r my
NUPZ:my?
MAYANK..A VOICE CUMS 4RM BACK..mayank tumhe princi office me bula rhe hai........:shaam ko valentine ball me milte hai
a music cums on nupz..
dillllllll bawraaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
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every1 iz gettin ready 4 valentine ball...........
a song cums on every1...........
on girlz:
dillllllllllllll bawraaaaaaa.............
kch na smjhe yeh
kch na bole yeh
kch na soche yeh
hayeeeeeeee
dillllllllllllllllllll bawraaaaaaaaa
on boyz:
dillllll dhonde use ko
jo ho dil ki rani
kise dor se jore hai do premi...............
every1 smiles
mayank:
nupur:
gunjan:
samrat
adhi:
dia:
suhaani:
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PM me too when you update :)
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wow seems entresting it was cute plzzzz pm me wen u update thanks
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ITZ CHAPTER 3

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Suhaani enters da ball....adhiraj iz talking to guyz...

suhaani:WAVES hand ...to sum1...and moves towards a group of many girls....
adhiraj keeps staring her 4 long...suddenly benji cums........
and sees adhi
BENJI:adhirajjjjj jeeee...........
ADHIRAJ suddenly says:tum tum yahan kab aye
BENJI:jab app kise k nazare kr rhe the tab he aya
ADHI:me kise ko nhe dekh rha tha
BENJI :wohtoh mene dekha...
ADHI GIVES him an angry luk:apne kaam se kaam rkho....and leaves
BENJI:pr mera kaam.......adhi
suhani cums to adhiraj:adhi.........kya kr rhe ho
while adhi iz searching sum1
ADHI:kch nhe suhaani woh aise he
SUHAANI:lgta hai ksie ka w8 ho rha hai
ADHI:nahi toh...
SUHAANI:acha bcho...wese agar w8 neh bhe ho rha so krna shrou krdo kyunk aaj tumhe apne ms.perfect se milna hai
ADHI:(THINKS in his heart)nahi suhaani usse mjh se milna hai
SUHAANI:meeting any other girl den suddenle sees adhi:kin khayalo me khoye ho..........apne us k khayal me
adhi gives a shy smile and suhaani strts laughing..........
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nupur gunjan enters da ball....
samrat says to mayank:finally woh agye
mayank:finally.....
dey bth luk each other and give ahi5..
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nupur to gunjan:gunjan yeh mayank aur baqi dekh kyun neh rhe.......
gunji:han di...pta neh aao dhondte hai
DEY BTH moves...
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GUNJAN:arre di woh dekho mayank aur samrat
NUPUZ:yeh dono akhte yanai daal me kch kala hai
GUNJI:daaal kaali..di tumhre tabyat toh theek hai na
NUPZ:han...chal na
GUNJAN:HMM
nupur:hi mayank hi samrat
MAYU:hi ..hi gunjan
gunji:hi
SAMRAT:hi hello ho gya ho toh fun strt kre dia kab se tum dono ka w8 krr rhe the.....
NUPUR:hamra...kyun?
MAYU:KYUNK tum dono ladkian ho
NUPZ:HAYE?
samrat:ARRE AAJ GIRLZ NE UN K PRTNERS CHOSE KRNE HAI AND PRTNERS KO 12 BJE TAK AKHTE REHAN HAI
nupz:OH..me toh bhol he gye dia ne mjhe kha tha jaldi ane ko..pr tyaar hone me mai bhool gye..
DIA:ENTERS DA GANG:guyz tum dono itne late arhe ho .yeh koi tym hai mene tumhe kaha tha na jaldi ana..
NUPZ:sry dia actully me bhool he gye the
DIA:hm cumon guyz...me stage pe jate ho..
NUPZ:all da bst....
DIA:THNX GUYZ...
dia:may i ve ur attention plz..........as u all kne k aaj humre clg ki girlz apne prtners chune geso i wud lyk to call girls on da stage
MANY GIRLZ CUM
DEN
nupz:smiles mayank...
mayan kgives her a cute smile
gunji:samrat dey bth smiles
SUHAANI:bejni.........
adhi bcmz sad
dia:smiles .adhiraj.......
all da girlz cum down and da song cums salaam-e-ishqand derez a dance sequence on dis song
AFTER DA DANCE
as dey all ve to stand together
DEY ALL were bsy in talkin to dere prtnerz
SUDDENLY SAMRATZ VOICE CUMZ
aaj hai pyaar ka din.......aaj pyaar se milne ka din ..aaj pyaar k iqraar ka din..........aur aaj he me apne pyaar se apne pyaar ka iqraar krne ja rha ho...........................i love gunjan..................
and sits on his knees and offers gunji a ring...........:kro ge mjh se pyaar gunjan
GUNJAN strts crying and hugs samrat tightly...........
every1 claps............mayank bcmz sad.he pretends to be happy
EVERY1 wishes gunjan and samrat......
den gunji samrat bcmz bsy wid each other
DIA:ADHI pyaar kitne pyaar hota hai na ..
adhi:HAN DIA..BHT Pyaara....
dia: kya tum ne kabhi kise se pyaar kiya hai?
adhi:han
dia:bcmz shy as shethinkz adhi luvz her
ADHI: i love suhaani...........
dia remains stunned........
da sad version of kya hua yeh goes on for dia
dia remembers her and adhi scenes
her eyes bcmz wet..
adhi turns 2wrds her
DIA TURNS BCK
adhi:kya hua na
dia wipes her tears :kch nhe........

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