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Posted: 15 years ago
Rocking OS Annie 🤗

u r my rockstar 😃

I want to see this throws tantrums 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
awesome os
loved mayur to the core
do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Loved the OS, Annie...

I hope ki esa scene serial me dekhne ko mile.

Thanks for PM, dear...

Keep writing.

Love.
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Posted: 15 years ago
such a cute OS Annie!!!
i luvddddd it!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
annie its soooooooooooooooooo beautiful!

i loved each bit of it!

and i wish to see it in mjht.......but no luck there!

and i loved it completely!

do write more and thanks a lot for the pm!

love,
Mahak
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Posted: 15 years ago
Lovely OS Annie..
I would love to watch such scene in MJHT.......
Thanks for the pm.......
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Posted: 15 years ago

The baby's parents were found and she was safely home......the entire fiasco has ended in a joke.

Life was getting back to normal for all, except Mayank and Nupur. Irrelevant of the way he behaved during the entire fiasco, Mayank was extremely hurt that Nupur didnt trust him.Apart from this, there were other things annoying him.His self respect and values his mother ingrained in him, were most important to him, and he realised thet somewhere , he just lost his true self with the gang. He acted the way he wudnt have and mostly forgot his responsibilities.

Nupur, on the other hand was feeling extremely guilty. She knew she has crossed all her limits this time, and acted like a hitler with her husband. Maybe the whole Bauji and Gunjna thing has made her less trusting about people in her life, but still that was no excuse. She knew Mayank was hurt ,and she didnt know what to do.Usually they fought and shouted at each other, and then things would be ok, but now Mayank wasnt responding at all.

She sat looking at him studying. He had woken up early and made coffee for her as a routine and then went back to his books. As she sipped world's best coffee, she tried thinking of ways to get her husband come around.Suddenly she got up with a smile, and went to freshen up. She came out of the bathroom, with her wet hair tied in a towel.
She stood very close to Mayank and started drying her hair, making sure that a few drops fall on him. She knew that would irritate him, but Mayank just got up and said " main nahane jaa raha hoon".....
Nupur looked at his retreating back, but she hadnt given up yet. She will make him angry so that he can vent out his frustration.
She took out several dresses of hers and dumped them on the bed. she also threw her wet towel carelessly on the bed, as she knew that her cleanliness freak husband, didnt like mess, especially on bed.

Mayank came out of the bathroom, all dressed and saw the mess on bed, while Nupur waited for an outburst.But he just retrieved his mobile from the mess and turned to walk out of the door.
Nupur was about to call out to him, when he turned back and came. She started smiling, which was soon replaced by a frown when he said "Nupur, mujhe library mein kaam hai, isiliye main jaldi jaa raha hoon. Tumhe time lagega tum baad mein aa jana, aur haan, maine breakfast bana diya tha, kar lena"...........

Nupur just kept looking as he went out of the door, she knew it was all her fault. She has hurt him and badly. Sadly she cleaned the house and went to college.

She didnt see Mayank the wholde day, as he was busy with work, or maybe avoiding her. She didnt know. She was hurt, upset and angry at herself for doing this to the person who loved her most in this world.

Gunjan saw her sullen face , and asked whats wrong. She was about to tell, but then just shook her head and walked away. She had decided, that from now onwards, everything between her and Mayank, will be their personal matter.

She came back home, all dejected and was thinking what to cook, when an idea struck her. Quickly she dialed a number and waited impatiently while the person at the other end, take the call.

"hello, Nupur"......came a motherly voice........"maa, kaisi hain aap"......Nupur asked Mayank's momand now hers too......"main to thik hun, aur tum.....? Mayu zyada pareshan to nahi karta na, tum uski shikayat mujhe kar sakti ho....."---Shilpa Sharma adoringly told her lovely daughter in law.
Nupur bit her lips to stop from crying and said "Nahin maa, Mayank nahin, main use pareshan karti hun, mujhe aap se uski favorite karele ki sabzi ki recipe puchni thi".....
Shilpa smiled and told her the recipe. After noting down the recipe and a little more teasing from her Maa, Nupur kept the phone down, and got on with work.

Mayank came back, pretty late at night, he had been studying in library lately. He knew he has been avoiding Nupur, but he needed time, to let his wounds heal.He walked in to see, his wife, watching something on TV. She looked up as he walked in, and quickly switched off the TV, which surprised him, but he kept quiet."Mayank, tum aa gaye,jaldi se fresh ho jao , main khana laga deti hun" Nupur happily told him, to which he replied with a nod.

They sat down for dinner, and Mayank was suprised to see karela. He took a bite, and immediately knew, whose recipe it was. He turned to Nupur and asked......"tumne maa se baat ki thi?" She replied "haan, unse ye recipe li, tumhe pasand hai na? kaisi hai"He smiled a bit, but then said " thik hai" and resumed eating quietly. Nupur was totally shaken, she didnt knw what to do as they ate in silence.

Later on Nupur was clearing the table,while Mayank did dishes in kitchen. It was their everyday ritual, he helped her in everyway in household work. He was the best husband any girl can ask for, and it was killing her to think that she treated him so badly.She was lost in her thoughts and didnt realsie where she is walking, as the corner of the table scraped her arm. "ouch" she shouted......and Mayank came running from the kitchen. ......"kya hua Nupur"..........he took her hand in his and scolded her......"tum koi kaam dekh ke nahi kar sakti kya?".........Tears welled up in her eyes, not coz of pain, but coz of the anguish she felt on herself.........he looked at her and asked as he blowed on it......"dard ho raha hai kya, tum ruko main first-aid box lata hun".......

But she hugged him, before he turned and said " i m sorry Mayank, please mujhe maaf kar do, i m really sorry".........He held her back, the distant look was back in his eyes...he left her and went to get the first aid box. He made her sit down and started cleaning her wound.
She said " Mayank, kya tum mujhse baat nahi karoge, i m sorry , main jaanti hun meri galti...........""Nahi Nupur" he cut her off......."galti to meri hai,main tumhare layak hi nahin hun, tumhare Bauji sahi the"......

Nupur starts off......." nahi May..........."

But he again cuts her off and said " Nupur, jab tumhe hi mujhpe trust nahi hai to , Bauji kaise karenge. "

Nupur looked at him and said ......"Mayank aisa nahi hai, wo halat hi kuch aise the, main jaanti hun ki main galat thi, par tumhe bhi to ek baar laga ki tumne galti ki hai"....

Mayank looked at her and said "nahin, mujhe aisa nahin laga. holi wali baat par mujhe kuch yaad nahin tha, main jaanta tha ki maine aisa kuch galat nahi kiya hoga, par phir bhi anjane mein bhi main tumhe dhoka nahin dena chahta tha, isiliye main chup raha. par mujhe Uday ki baat par bhi yakeen nahi tha. Aur jahan baat hai Riya ki, to tab tum meri zindagi mein nahin thi, aur sach kahun to main khud bhi us baat ko bhul chuka tha, jab Riya ko dekha tab yaad ayaa. Maine har baat clear ki, taki hamare beech koi misunderstanding na ho, par shayad main tumhara Raj nahin ban paya"...........

Nupur looked distressed, she held his hands, and said......." please Mayank, main jaanti hun, maine galat kiya, par hamari shaadi ke baat jo bhi Bauji aur Gunjan ke saath hua, usse mujhe dar lagne laga, apno ko kho dene ka aur mujhe Raj nahi chahiye, sirf aur sirf Mayank, kyunki wo mere liye perfect hai.........."

Mayanak held her hand tightly and said " Main tumhe chod ke kahin nahin jaunga Nupur, meri mein tumhare aur Maa ke siwa hai hi kaun"............

To this Nupur smiled and said......." I m sory Mayank " and then thinking something added, " dil se sorry, duniya mein jitne sorry hain, saare sorry".........

He smiled widely and took her in his arms, and said " I love u Nupur"..............and she just smiled blissfully.

Edited by annie07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
Annnnniiiieeeeeeee I lovvveeeee uuuu 🤗

that was awesomeeeeee............

Now I want to see this please post it in cvs thread MN OS thread na pls?
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Posted: 15 years ago
Annie it was Such a sweet One shot.....

I want to see this in MJHT......😒

I wonder if these people will ever show such scenes in the show...

Luv
Nidzy~
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Posted: 15 years ago
Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww that was so cute Annie!!!!
I was smiling the whole way!!!! It was BEAUTIFUL!!!!
Brought the old MayUr back!!!
I want this scene, I want it BADLY!!!!
Gosh both their emotions, you described it perfectly!!!
You write so well!! Thanks for making my day 🤗

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