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Posted: 15 years ago
Mou... very nice OS.... I like this Nupur... she knows she is harsh on her husband sometimes.... but she understands him so well...and she cares for him.... and Mayank too... how come they both will forget the moment they decided to get seperated....with God's blessings they are together now... and no matter how harsh llife is on them... they will be there for each other...
I love your OS.... muaaaaahhhhhhhh...
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Posted: 15 years ago
Holi Special.........especially for Piya..........Congrats Buddy!!!!

The gang finally emerged triumpant in the whole JD fiasco and manged to get Yash behind bars......... It has been three days....and life was slowly coming back to normal for all..... Gunjan was on way to recovery , and was being treated by a very good therapist........and Samrat was still trying to woo her back.

Mayank and Nupur were also trying to get back to their normal routine............with college reopened...........Mayank was back to studies and job and Nupur to got herself busy with studies..........but she was still not over the trauma........she had become very quiet and hadnt forgotten the incident....Mayank was taking good care of her, but she wasnt sharing much with
him.............

It was night of Holika Dahan............the night to celebrate victory of good over evil...........Mayank and Nupur, went to do puja..........and then returned home...............Mayank decided to talk to Nupur...........he sat her down, held her hand and said.........."Nupur, main jaanta hoon, jo bhi hua, usse tum abhi bhi pareshan ho..........lekin ab to sab thik hai na.........hamari jeet hui, aur ab hum saath hain..............to un sabko bhool jao.........."

Tears wells up in Nupur's eyes and she starts crying.........Mayank takes and her in his arms, and lets her take it out............after a while he cups her face and says............."bas, Nupur ab aur nahi"........

Nupur says ........"Mayank, hamare saath aisa kyun ho raha hai, ek ke baad itni mushkilen...........jaise ki bhagwan bhi humein khush nahin dekhna chahta. Pehle hum almost alag ho gaye the, phir meri aur Gunjan ki ladai, aur ab ye......."..........

Mayank says........."nahin Nupur, infact har in mushkilon ke baad humein dugni khushi mili........hum dono hamesha ke liye ek ho gaye, in haadson mein Bauji ne tumhe acceptr kar liya aut hum sab ek family ki tarah aur paas aa gaye".........."aur vaise bhi, aaj holi ki aag mein hamari saari problems jal gayi.........ab sirf khusiyan hi rahaegi.........hamesha...........tum mujhpe bharosa hai na..........."

Nupur nods her head and smiles.............and they hug...........after a while ..........Mayank puts her to sleep...........patting her head...........he keeps looking at her face and resolves to keep her happy always.....

Next morning....Nupur wakes up..........and looks at her husband, sleeping on her side.........smiles looking at the innocence on his face...........she was feeling lighter today, she knew that come what may, with Mayank at her side, she can go through anyting.
Suddenly a mischevious idea struck her..........and with a glint in her eyes, she got up..........
She came back with some colours, and very lovingly applied them on her sleeping husband's face..........done with her job, she smiled satifactorily.......and patted herself......."wah Nupur Sharma, tera to jawab nahi, Mayank ko apna ye new look zaroor acha lagega." and with a chuckle she went to prepare his tea...........

Mayank woke up after a while.......and called out to Nupur.........unaware of his wife's doing, he was still very worried about her.
Nupur came with a very sly smile on her face.........and said........." aap uth gaye pati dev, ye lijiye chai".........Mayank was astonished at change in her..........but then this was his Nupur, always unpredicatble..........he looked at her........and said "kya baat hai, tum bahut khush lag rahi ho.........aur aaj tumne mere liye chai bhi banai"...........Nupur replied......."aapki sewa karna
to mera farz hai, aap mere pati parmeshwar jo ho"...........Now Mayank was sure something is wrong, he noticed the mischevious glint in her eyes........and said.........."Nupur kya baat hai?"........she replied........"kuch bhi to nahin.....aap jaldi taiyar ho jaiye......humein Samart ke farmhouse jaana hai, holi ke liye:"..and walks off.......

Scratching his head......Mayank walks off to the bathroom.......he looks at himself in mirror and shrieks in fright..........Nupur, who was standing behind him.........burst out laughing.........Mayank turned to look at her and said..........."ye sab tumne kiya na.......?".........Nupur replied triumphantly........."haan .........acha hai tumhara naya look, Monkey Mayank........"........Mayank
says........"Nupur, ab main tumhe nahi chodoonga......" and runs after her..........she tries to dodges him........but eventually he catches hold of her.........and slowly raises his hand........Nupur says........."nahi Mayank, colour mat lagana..........".........but Mayank, slowly caresses her cheeks...........and gives her a peck..........and she blushes.......and Mayank says with a smirk......" tumhara chehra aise hi laal ho gaya, mujhe colour ki zaroorat hi nahi padi.......happy holi Nupur........hamesha aise hi hanste rehna".........Nupur smiles and hugs him......and they happily goes off to play holi and Samrat's place.



EDIT:

The blushing idea...........credit goes to Deepti...............

Edited by annie07 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
lovely OS annie.........i simply loved the way mayank bring back the strength to Nupur & she is back to her normal self.....& the last dialogue.." tumhara chehra aise hi laal ho gaya, mujhe colour ki zaroorat hi nahi padi.......happy holi Nupur........hamesha aise hi hanste rehna".....
it was such a nicely putted scene.............👏..

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Posted: 15 years ago
annie veryyyyyyy cuteeeee starting with emotional ending adorable
it was sweet nupur ki blushing se hi holi ho gayi
happy holi dear .........
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey annie
I must say u can write very fast...
Beautiful OS annie...I would love to see such a scene in serial...
I loved every bits of it..
I loved it when mayank thought something is definitely wrong...Mayank knows her so well...
the last line is my favourite..."tumhara chehra aise hi laal ho gaya, mujhe colour ki zaroorat hi nahi padi.......happy holi Nupur........hamesha aise hi hanste rehna."
Aur tum humesha aise hi cute cute OS likhte rehna...
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Posted: 15 years ago
all the OS are fabulous!!!!
loved them all....
HAPPY HOLI!
Love
Mina
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb OS!!!!!
really.......it was very cute...
do write more
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey guys... i love all of the OS.. especially the after marriage one..
hope 2 see more soon... :)
and if any1 updates then if u can plz pm me... thanku! :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
love all da one shots plz pm me wenevere any1 of u updates!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
The ring of alarm woke Nupur from her sleep.......she shifted to her side still half alseep and felt something warm..... . immediately she opened her eyes to see her husband, sleeping peacefully next to her.....on other days he would be the first one to wake up, but they had returned very late from the picnic last night.

She ruffled his hair and kissed his forehead, and smiled at him.... he was the best thing that has ever happened to her, no matter how unreasonable she was, he was always there.

And now she has promised herself to shower him with all the love and care he deseves "being her husband".........

She quickly got up, freshen up and went to kitchen to make bed tea for Mayank.

Few mins later she came back with the tea and started waking him up..... "Mayank, mayank utho......Mayank".....

Mayank shifted and slowly opened his eyes and smiled at his beautiful wife........" Nupur tum aaj itni jaldi uth gayi"....

She replied....."jaldi?.....Mayank, 7.30 baj rahe hain"......

"kya?'.....Mayank got up with a jerk......."7.30?..... itni der kaise ho gayi? aur aaj se to mujhe job bhi join karna hai, alarm nahi baja kya?"........

Nupur laughed and said....."Relax pati dev.........mujhe pata hai mein kamal ki chiz hun, par mera itna asar"..........."tum ye chai piyo aur fresh ho jao......tab tak mein tumhare kapde nikal deti hun aur breakfast ready kar deti hun......."

Mayank was astonished at her this act, his Nupur didnt like to work......he held her back as she was getting up, and said....."Nupur, tum thik to ho na, ye sab........."

"kyun Mr. Sharma, agar tum world ke best pati ho to, mujhe bhi world ki best patni banna padega na........" she replied with an amused smile.......but then got serious.....she held his hand and said........."Mayank, maa ke jaane ke baad main hamesha Gunjan ki badi di bani rahi........par tumhare saath wo nasamajh, ziddi, bachon-si Nupur banna mujhe acha lagta tha...... kyunki main jaanti thi, ki tum ho mera khyal rakhne......par in sab mein maine ye socha hi nahi, ki main tumhe kitna hurt kar rahi hun..........tumne hamesha mera saath

diya, meri saari baatein sooni........ aur ab main apne ache pati ki achi patni banna chahti hun........main hamare iss struggle mein tumhara saath dena chahti hun....... kyunki ab hum dono saath saath hai.......hai na?".......

Mayank looked on lovingly at her........he always knew that she was very sensible and just act around as kid with him, and thats y he always ignored it........he smiled and said......."by god Nupur....tum jab aisi baatein karti ho na, to mujhe SRK ki film ki herione kam ar uski mom zyada lagti ho......"

Nupur hit him .......and he ducked and said......"main jaanta hun ki tum mere saath ho........aur haan apne ko badalne ki tumhe zaroorat nahin......kyunki maine kaha tha na.....Nupur bahut khaas hai aur mujhe wo aise hi pasand hai........"

Nupur pulled his cheeks.....and said....."aur mujhe bhi wo sadu aur akdu ladka hi acha lagta hai.......ye jalebi ki tarah sweet Mayank nahi......."

They both laughed and then suddenly Mayank realised he is getting late......he got up from the bed and said......."aaj to main gaya, life mein pehli baar late ho jaunga......Nupur tum kitna bolti ho"........

Nupur was about to reply back .......but realised that he was pulling her leg, so she just shoved him in bathroom, and started making breakfast with a smile on her face.

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