NaKsh oneshot[Last part updated@Pg.11]......... - Page 8

hey mansi.. amazing update👏👏.. sorry yaar for late reply.. btw update the next part soon oki,.. waiting for itt😳

wow ya manasi ....very nice.....👏👏

very well done really!!!!!!👏👏👏

Originally posted by: ananya_krish

hey mansi.. amazing update👏👏.. sorry yaar for late reply.. btw update the next part soon oki,.. waiting for itt😳

Originally posted by: yrk_fan

wow ya manasi ....very nice.....👏👏

pls cont soon.. cant wait to read the next part

Originally posted by: karandeewani

very well done really!!!!!!👏👏👏

Hello guyzz.....I m EXTREMELY sorry 4 delaying the update!!!!!Examz had caught me!!!!!😕
My heartfelt thanks to all those who took out time to read and appreciate my oneshot!!!U buddies r my inspiration!!!!😃
sry the 3rd update was v short...Here's the last update.....itz a longggg one......😉
My special thanks moonlight08 aka kaumudi 4 her luvely suggestion and a big thank u to all EKR members!
Have tried my best not to disappoint anyone!!Hope i m successful in it!😛
Here it goes.........

Continued..

..Then suddenly both come back to their senses.
Naitik suddenly gets flashes in his mind of the night Akshara left the house-
"Mamaji sahi kehte hai.Aapke ghar ke reeti-rivaaz rang-dhang bahut alag hai.Agar humne uss waqt shaadi karne se pehle socha hota,to shayad ye din nahi dekhna padta!"
"Aap bhi mujhe nahi samajh paaye Naitik.Mujhe koi nahi samajhta.Main haar gayi hu".
"Agar aapko abhi bhi yahi lagta hai ki main samajh nahi paaya,
aur agar aapko iss ghar mein itna hi dukh hai,to aap apne ghar wapas laut jaiye.
Aapko koi nahi rokega......"
"aap jaegi to yaha kam se kam shaanti to rahegi"

After a few moments,
Naitik:Maine gusse mein aapse kuch keh diya aur apne usse sach maan liya!Mera wo matlab nahi tha Akshara.bas gusse mein..
Main ye kabhi nahi chahunga ki aap mujhse door chali jaye.Jab mujhe aapki sabse jyada jaroorat thi tabhi apne mera saath chhod diya.Maine kabhi sapne mein bhi mohit se ye umeed nahi ki thi!Dosti ka itna bada dhokha khaane ke baad mujhe sabse jyada jaroorat aapki,aapke pyaar ki thi..
Akshara:To phir aap mujhe lene kyu nahi aaye?!
Naitik:Wo..(pause)(softly says)Aap bhi to ghar laut sakti thi!
Akshara aapko nandini didi ka saath nahi dena chahiye tha.
Akshara:Main aap sab se ye chupaana nahi chahti thi..Par didi ne mujhe apni kasam de di thi!Aise me main kisiko kaise bataa paati!Phir bhi maine aapko bataane ki kitni baar koshish ki!Par kuch na kuch ho jaata aur aap mere mann ki baat jaan hi nahi paaye!!
Main to bas didi ki khushiyan chahti thi.Aur didi ki khushi mohit ke saath hai Naitik.
Naitik:Aap samajhti kyu nahi Akshara.Ye sab itna aasaan nahi hai.Didi ki khushi daddaji aur bhabhimaa ki khushi se jyada maayne rakhti hai?!Dono ko kitna dukh pahucha hai iss sab se.
Akshara looks at him surprised.

In the mandir
Nani:Main Akshara ki taraf se tum sabse maafi maangti hu.
Gaya3:Arrey nahi nahi Maa ji.Ye aap kya kar rahi hai!
Nani:Meri bitiya to naadaan hai.Usse sahi aur galat ki poori parakh na hai ab tak.Usse aise apna sasural chhodkar nahi aana chahiye tha.
Gaya3:Hum samajh sakte hai ki bahu ne naadaani mein galat kadam uthaaya.Par daddaji ko Akshara ke bauji aur Rajashri behen se ye umeed nahi thi!
Nani:Arrey Gaya3,mhaare jamaaisa ko duniyadaari ki samajh naa hai!Mhari beti to chahti thi ki Akshara apne ghar wapas chali jaye par pati ki aagya ke aage wo kuch naa kar saki.
Par ab main aa gayi hu naa.Main chahti hu ki Akshara beti jald se jald aapke ghar chali jaaye.Ye baat biraadri mein failne se pehle hi sulajh jaaye to accha hoga!
Gaya3:Hum bhi yahi chahte hai Maa ji.Par dono bacche apni jidd par aise ade hai.Ab to daddaji bhi aap sabse naraaz ho gaye hai!
Nani:Arrey tu wo sab chintaa naa kar.Main unse se baat karne aa jaungi.
Gaya3:Arrey nahi Maaji.Aap kyu takleef le rahi hai!Main bhabhimaa aur daddaji se iss baare mein baat karne ki koshish karungi.Bahu ghar jitne jaldi aa jaye utni hi badnaami kam hogi!!

Near the mandir
Akshara:I m sorry Naitik.Maine aap se ye sab chupaya!Shayad maine aapka vishwaas kho diya hai!Par Main waadaa karti hu ki ab se hum dono ke beech koi raaz nahi rahega!
Naitik,main to bas nandini didi ko khush dekhna chahti hu.Sabko khush karte karte main kisiko bhi khush nahi rakh payi.!
Naitik:Galatiyan to mujhse bhi hui hai Akshara!Aap ke saath maine jis tarah ka vartaav kiya uske liye i m sorry!Hum sab ki khushi to aapke lautne...(pauses)
Akshara:Kya Naitik?Mere...??Boliye na..
Naitik:Akshara,sab chahte hai ki aap ghar wapas aa jaaye.Sab aapko bahut yaad karte hai.
Akshara:Aur aap?Kya aapko kabhi bhi meri yaad nahi aayi?
Naitik is silent,a mix of emotions running through his heart....
Akshara:Kuch to boliye Naitik.Kya apne mujhe bilkul bhi miss nahi kiya?
Naitik:Haan Akshara haan!Aayi aapki yaad!Bahut miss kiya maine aapko!Pal pal aapke bina sadiyon ki tarah beeta..!Par.....
Akshara(excitedly!):Aap jaante hai main yahi sunane ke liye taras gayi thi!!
Naitik:Par..Main chahta hu ki aap ghar laut jaye,lekin apni marzi se......
Akshara hears nani calling her,and thus she has to leave.She runs in the mandir and is shocked to see Gaya3 there!

In the mandir
Akshara:Varsha,nani aur Maa ek saath!!Nani ne kuch baat ki Maa se?Kya hua Varsha?
Varsha:Nani ne baat bhi kar di aur sab kuch sulajh bhi gaya hai shayad!
Akshara:Matlab?
Varsha:Kuch nahi(smiles).Jaa jaakar Maa se mil aa.
Akshara greets Gaya3 and takes her blessings.
Nani:Arrey Akshara kaha chali gayi thi tu!
Akshara:Wo..nani bas yahi thi..
Gaya3:Chaliye Maa ji.Mujhe chalna hoga ab.
Nani:Accha Gaya3,daddaji se iss baare mein baat kar lena..Radhekrishna.
Gaya3:Ji maa ji.Radhekrishna.
Gaya3 leaves.
Akshara:Kis baare mein baat karni hai nani?
Nani:Kuch nahi beta.Chalo ghar chalte hai.

@Singhanias
In the living room,
Bhabhimaa:Ji,wo bhi to sulah chahte hai!
Daddaji:Theek hai.Waise bhi ab bahut ho gayi bacchon ki manmaani.Munna aate hi usse mhare kamremein bhej dena.
Bhabhimaa:Ji..
Daddaji leaves.

@Maheshwaris
In the living room,(Akshara is absent)
Vishambhar:Maa ji,apne unse baat ki ye to teek hai.Par jab tak jamaaisa khud Akshara ko lene yaha nahi aate tab tak hum Akshara ko nahi jaane denge.
Rajashri:Ji aap sahi keh rahe hai par agar wo bhi iss maamle ko suljhaana chahte hai,to meri samajh se hume bhi ek kadam aage badhaana chahiye!
Shaurya:Lekin Maa..Bas aise hi hum Akshara ko kaise..
Dadi:Shaurya,badi bahu theek keh rahi hai.Hum kab tak yu pehle aap pehle aap karte rahenge!
Vishambhar:Theek hai Maa.Dekhte hai daddaji ka kya faisla hai.

Akshara's room
Akshara is in her room,siting on her bed,very worried.Her mind is recalling again and again the last lines said by Naitik-
Varsha enters her room.
Varsha:Akshara kya baat hai.Jab se mandir se laute hai,tu itni pareshaan kyu hai?
Akshara:Varsha,mandir ke bahar jab main apna phone laane gayi thi,to waha mujhe Naitik mile!
Then she tells her everythng tht happened there..
Varsha:Hmmm..Maine tum dono ko dekh liya tha!
Akshara:Sach??
Varsha:Haa!Jab tu Naitik ji ki baahon mein thi!
Akshara blushes a little..!
Akshara:Lekin Varsha,'apni marzi se' se unka kya matlab hoga?!Kya wo ab bhi yahi chahte honge ki main khud laut jau?
Varsha:Mujhe lagta hai wo ye chahte hai ki tu raazi-khushi wapas jaye,shayad poore maan-sammaan ke saath!Jaisa kihum sab chahte hai!
Akshara:Main unhe jaanti hu Varsha.Wo mujhe lene nahi aayenge(starts sobbing!)
Varsha takes Akshara's hand in her hand.
Varsha:Akshara,tu himmat mat haarna!Tum dono ke beech itne dino ke baad baat hui ye iss baat ka shubh-sanket hai ki ab jald hi sab theek ho jayega....

~~THE END~~(or rather ~~THE BEGINNING OF NAKSH'S HAPPY LIFE TOGETHER~~!!)

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as usual it was gr88 nice ending...👏😃⭐️👏
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Originally posted by: akshunaitik

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