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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hello guyz....

I m extremely sorry for updating the 3rd part soooo late......!!!!
Was very busy with college happenings......
Here's the 3rd update....I sincerely apologise for the short length...

Continued..

Akshara is fallen in Naitik's arms..
Both are speechless,yet the speaking is done....through eyes.....
Eyes met eyes...Nazron se nazrein mili.....Jannat si mehki fizaa......
There is an eye-lock.....
Tender memories of their very first date are flashing in both the minds...!!
They hv now met again in the same way,maybe just to start their new journey together henceforth.....
Just then,a soft breeze blows a hair strand on Akshara's blushing face......
Both the hearts are pumping faster...Naitik slowly touches the strand to move it away from her face..
Both are lost in ecstasy for sometime,enjoying some precious golden moments of love and togetherness after a month!!

In the mandir

Gaya3 and Nani come face to face..Varsha is very scared seeing them both together.Her mind doubts that Nani will speak up something and spoil over everything!!
Her mind predicted right..Her fear turned true..
Nani,succumbed to her nature,just couldn't let Gaya3 go away without trying to clear the air with her..
Nani:Gaya3!!
Gaya3:Maaji!Radhekrishna!Kaisi hai aap??
Nani:Radhekrishna!Arrey main theek hu!Meri chhod,tu bataa,ghar mein sab kaise hai?Arrey,mhaari bitiyaa ki yaad nahi aati kya kisiko??
Gaya3 :Sab kushal mangal hai bhagwaan ki krupa se..!Wo..bahu ka maayke jaane ka mann tha,aap jo aanewaali thi,to humne usse bhej diya..
Nani:Arrey manne jhoothi baatein mat bataa.Jitni bholi dikhu hu utni hu na..(Looking at Varsha)Inn sab logon ne mhaare se bahut chupaane ki koshish ki,par manne sab pataa chal gaya hai!

Varsha thinks she has to stop Nani from blabbering any rubbish to Gaya3 or from asking for forgiveness on behalf of Akshara.
So she interrupts in.
Varsha:Radhekrishna Maa.
Gaya3 :Radhekrishna beta.
Varsha touches Gaya3's feet.
Gaya3 :Khush raho.
Nani:Arrey Gaya3,main to aaj thaare ghar hi aanewaali thi,accha ho gaya tu yahi mil gayi!
Varsha now feels she should immediately call Akshara as she is the only one who can try to control Nani and her words!She tells Nani that she'll just be bak in a few minutes.
She goes outside the mandir to find Akshara..

Near the Mandir

Suddenly Naitik and Akshara are shaken up from the wonderful feeling they were experiencing,thanks to Varsha's voice!
Varsha had called out Akshara's name,seeing her nowhere..
However,after seeing naitik and akshara together,she decides to leave them alone and walks back in the mandir,taking up the responsibilty of controlling Nani and the situation on her own!!
Akshara and Naitik regain their senses,although Akshara finds no one calling her.Both are standing a few centimeters away from each other,extremely nervous..
Akshara is completely unaware of the fact that Naitik has just read her letter..
Naitik is also unaware of the feelings and emotions running through Akshar's heart and of the fact that Akshara had never intended to ignore him or disconnect his call..
Both were longing to meet each other for a month.And now that they have met,neither of them could pick up the courage to kick start the conversation.
Finally,after some moments of sheer silence..
Akshara:Naitik,main aapse bahut dino se kuch kehna chahti thi.Maine kitni baar koshish ki par aap...
Naitik:Mujhe bhi aapse kuch kehna hai Akshara..
Who will speak first..!So,both remain silent,indirectly asking the other one to speak first..
Again,after sometime,
Akshara:Hamare beech ki galatfehmiyon ki wajah hamari chuppi hai.Hum ek-dusre ki baat sunate nahi hai ya sunanaa chahte nahi hai..
Shayad hum ab bhi ek-dusre ko acche se samajh nahi paaye hai.Tabhi to ek-dusre ki khamoshi nahi padh paate hai..
Naitik,:Akshara,aapko is tarah ghar chhodkar nahi jaana chahiye tha.
Akshara:Main maanti hu main galat thi Naitik!Mujhe aise chale nahi jaana chahiye tha.Main ghar nahi chhodnaa chahti thi..Par jab aapne hi mujhe maayke lautne ke liye keh diya to mera dil toot gaya..jab aap hi nahi chahte the ki main waha rahu,to main....
Uss ghar mein mere saare rishte aap hi se jude hai Naitik.Aapke bina main kuch bhi nahi hu..
She breaks down and gets closer to Naitik unknowingly.
Naitik gives her a hug and brushes his hand over her hair.
Naitik:Akshara,aap aise roiye mat!Chup ho jaiye naa..Akshara....

To be continued soon.......

Hope u guyz like it!😃
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And Please leave ur precious comments......

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Posted: 15 years ago
#52
wow manu
really awesome yaar
plz cont. soon waiting eagerly 4 next part😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
hey very nicely written👏
jst read al ur 3 parts................
wishing anything lik this cld happen in reality bt😭
ny ways plz update nxt part soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54

Originally posted by: naitikakshara

wow manu

really awesome yaar
plz cont. soon waiting eagerly 4 next part😉

hey bhavz......
thanxxxx a lott dear!!!!!!!😳😃
will try to update it soooon......!😊
i thought u went away 2 sleep!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: aditi7

hey very nicely written👏

jst read al ur 3 parts................
wishing anything lik this cld happen in reality bt😭
ny ways plz update nxt part soon

thankkkk u so much!!!!😃
yeah....seriously...hope happy days will b bak soon!!!!😛
will update it soon...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: manasi_31

hey bhavz......
thanxxxx a lott dear!!!!!!!😳😃
will try to update it soooon......!😊
i thought u went away 2 sleep!!!

no i had gone 2 study
so after finishing it i opened if n found ur pm
anyways really gud work
cont. soon
Edited by naitikakshara - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
yar.. too gud.!! srsly..
well... i dnt noe if i shud write this... but a suggestion for u.. hope u dnt mind.. um..
plz if u can include the words spoken by naitik to akshara on the day they were leaving.. it wud look more interesting...
but even if u dnt do dat.. i wont mind...
itz already awesum.!!!
continue soon.!
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58
awesome there..................absolutely...............Full of emotions............Have become a fan of urs absolutely!
Pls, do continue whenever u get time..................and sorry, 4 not commenting last time..............I hadn't seen it, b4..............Anyways, wonderful there! 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
#59
very nice part 👏👏👏
liked it a lot⭐️
keep it up👍🏼
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60
sorry for late reply but really loved it

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