A little celebration!!!

sistu

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Hi everyone!!!!!!!!!!

It is time to celebrate!!!!!

Ice and fire have come together

Na jaane mere dil ko kya ho gaya
Abhi to yahin tha, abhi kho gaya

A poem:

Manzil nahi hain tumhe paana
tumhari manzil hum ho yahi hain chahana
Tumhare jism ko chune ka irada nahi
tumhare rooh se milna hain isse jyada nahi
tumhari karoon humesha ibaadat
agar na bhi tumhari izaazat

Tumhe zindagi me nahi hain shamil karna
Tumhe hain apni zindagi banana
nahi hain tumhare liye khusboo felana
tumhare liye hain khusboo banna
charo taraf hain tumhari rawangi
Tumhare liye hain bas itni deewangi

I have absouletly no idea what i am writting. I am too excited because we had prida after so long.

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liv2laugh

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Sistu pehle toh join the club - I have no idea what I am writing either. 😆 😆 😆

Love love loved your poem 👏

What beautiful sentiments......so powerfully expressed..........amazing poetry.

⭐️

Jhan

Edited by liv2laugh - 15 years ago

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shalini_s

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Sistu..

nice poem.. especially the first 2 lines.. loved it 👏

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sistu

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: liv2laugh
Sistu pehle toh join the club - I have no idea what I am writing either. 😆 😆 😆Chalo i m not alone in this🤣

Love love loved your poem 👏Thanks a lot😳

What beautiful sentiments......so powerfully expressed..........amazing poetry. thanks so much. so smart to make sense out of it😆

⭐️

Jhan

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sistu

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Originally posted by: loveness
Sistu..

nice poem.. especially the first 2 lines.. loved it 👏 thank you so much.

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Maz

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Posted: 15 years ago

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Sis that was Beautiful every line!.👏..superb!....wow we need lots and lots more Prida days like these so you can churn out more such awesome lines!!

keep it up!

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Mrunal

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Posted: 15 years ago

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wow Sistu... nice lines...👏

yup it is time for celebration...our PriDa is back and how....wowza...🥳

-- Mru

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Lifez_Beautiful

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Posted: 15 years ago

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yaar SIS .. aapki poem ne tho dil choo liya !! 😳 😳 😳...

jus luvd da whole poem...esp ...these lines...😳

Tumhare jism ko chune ka irada nahi
tumhare rooh se milna hain isse jyada nahi 😍 👏 👏 👏
tumhari karoon humesha ibaadat
agar na bhi tumhari izaazat ⭐️

Tumhe zindagi me nahi hain shamil karna
Tumhe hain apni zindagi banana 😳

charo taraf hain tumhari rawangi
Tumhare liye hain bas itni deewangi 😃 😃

itni pure thots.. they jus simply suit nly prida....hayeeeeeeee... im a gone case nw ! 😍😆

-LuvNiki..😳😳

Edited by Lifez_Beautiful - 15 years ago

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