Unspoken l Armaan/Bharti: Part 2 l Pg 4 l 30/11

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Hetal

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Posted: 16 years ago

#31

I hope Armaan beats the crap out of Om is this happens!

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Anjali-K

@Anjali-K

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Posted: 16 years ago

#32

Nice part, the way you portrayed Bharti's emotions I could totally understand it. Cant wait to read what Armaan will dod now.

Please update sooner.

Anjali

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fizzles

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Posted: 16 years ago

#33

Neetz, I wish that the writers had somehow magically used your idea. I thought that was brilliant. In comparison, what happened in the show was average. And you captured Omkaar's nature very well. I'm eagerly awaiting for the next part..

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Sej

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Posted: 16 years ago

#34

nice part loved it and i loved the last part where she ran and got in the room before omkar could stop her :D plz wright more soon :)

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Jaslin

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Posted: 16 years ago

#35

Wow..Neetz This is really awesome..I simply lurve the way you wrote about Bharti's emotions and how she managed to run to Armaan's room and embraced him....And Armaan too embraced her automatically...That was reallie beautifully written hunni!!!!