Unspoken l Armaan/Bharti: Part 2 l Pg 4 l 30/11

Heya peeps, so I figured that Armaan/Bharti are my fav. onscreen couple as of now (although I'm rather miffed with Armaan's character ATM), therefore, I present my very first Armaan/Bharti fic :) Please leave feedback!

Armaan. The name brought back so many bittersweet memories. Their small moments, light banter, mindless flirting and ultimately, a very strong friendship, that was on the verge of transforming into something even more special. Until now.

Hey Lizi!!

Hello Neeta,

I loved the way you have written but.............................

It is not the Bharti we see in BB. She is a much stronger and bindas girl, she is not that sad. And she is not that angry with Armaan. If you watch BB these days, the very recent episodes you will understand that Bharti still thinks Armaan her friend, not her lover. She was starting to love him but the whole chaos almost brought her back to the square one. She is not angry with Armaan rather she asked KK "what will happen to Armaan?"

So I am liking whatever you have written but don't make Bharti that serious. I loved the way she is presented in the serial. She feels very sad when everyone in the office teased her, when Armaan didn't say sorry to her or when she was remembering her old days in the office. But she was totally changed when she got the idea of stopping Armaan-OK's fight or when OK said she can join the office.

So what I mean to say don't make Bharti week. She is never thinking about what Armaan did to her, she is taking life as it is. Now she knows that she has to fulfill what KK said.

I know its a FF, you can write whatever you can but I just wanted to tell you my opinion.

Hey Neeta,

I am really sorry if I have hurt you. Actually Armaan and Bharti are my fav couple as well, so I just can't see any problems in between them.

Sorry yaar, I know there will be happy moments coming in your FF.
Please do continue.
I love reading ArBi FFs.

Kaninika

oh it was fantestic.👏

Originally posted by: Prasanthi

Hey Lizi!!

Wow honey! This seems to be an emotional one from your pen. And I Loved it! As always count me in :D.

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Hello Neeta,

I loved the way you have written but.............................

It is not the Bharti we see in BB. She is a much stronger and bindas girl, she is not that sad. And she is not that angry with Armaan. If you watch BB these days, the very recent episodes you will understand that Bharti still thinks Armaan her friend, not her lover. She was starting to love him but the whole chaos almost brought her back to the square one. She is not angry with Armaan rather she asked KK "what will happen to Armaan?"

First of all, thankyou for coming out with an honest opinion, I appreciate that. First of all, I must say that Bharti in my fic is not weak at all, infact in the future chapters, you will get to know that she is even stronger. The intro is something that I feel should have been a part of the show. Armaan not standing up for Bharti is defenitely something that didn't go down well in my brain, and I felt that the show failed to explain both POVs in this matter. Inevitably, Bharti would have been shattered to know that the man who claims to love her didn't take a stand for her when she needed him, and the show didn't capture that emotion adequately, hence I started my fic from there.

So I am liking whatever you have written but don't make Bharti that serious. I loved the way she is presented in the serial. She feels very sad when everyone in the office teased her, when Armaan didn't say sorry to her or when she was remembering her old days in the office. But she was totally changed when she got the idea of stopping Armaan-OK's fight or when OK said she can join the office.

Well, given the circumstances I'd say that anyone's life would be more than serious. I understand that BB is mainly a comic show, and tends to tackle all issues with a hint of humour, but I'm more bent towards the darker side of the situation. I apologize in advance, because I wouldn't be able to inject much light-heartedness in my story, nonetheless, I hope you enjoy it.

So what I mean to say don't make Bharti week. She is never thinking about what Armaan did to her, she is taking life as it is. Now she knows that she has to fulfill what KK said.

Yup, she has to fulfill what KK said but that doesn't stop her from being angry at Armaan, does it ? Also, KK's wishes would take a backseat in my fic, they will be there, but not as overpowering as they are in the show.

I know its a FF, you can write whatever you can but I just wanted to tell you my opinion.

Originally posted by: kaninikabasuray

Hey Neeta,

I am really sorry if I have hurt you. Actually Armaan and Bharti are my fav couple as well, so I just can't see any problems in between them.

Sorry yaar, I know there will be happy moments coming in your FF.
Please do continue.
I love reading ArBi FFs.

Kaninika

Hey Neeta or Liza?

Now I have totally understood your POV. In the actual BB they are taking everything lightly as it is a comic show and you just want to go into the deeper thoughts. OK. That's great. I would love to read what will happen to ArBi now😊

Jahan tak ArBi eksaath I have no problems😉

I love to give honest opinion, my friends in IF know that😊, But I really praise the work which I like😊. I liked your FF, specially Armaan's POV😊 I was just not happy with "sad Bharti"😆, but now I understood. So more stronger Bharti coming up😊.

I am very happy that you are not hurt😊

BTW, I just loved your "Armaan-Ridhima-TumSe Hi instrumental" VM. I have seen it very recently.👏

Please do continue your FF.

Kaninika