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Nisha

@dazzling_glory

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

Nice part

please continue soon

Wishing you a very HAPPY NEW YEAR

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Prerna

@prerna1

Sparkler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

that was nice
plz continue soon

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Hey Riya,

thank u soooo much yaar for changing buajis name 😃

the update is really nice,shekawats ke ghar main pooja ki tayariya horahi hain n lata jee aur veena jee kitna darr the hain amarjee se

raj is so cute

totally lovely part 👏 👏 👏

plz continue soon

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

sorry yaar, pichle kuch mahine itne busy the ki IF ke liye bilkul bhi time nahin thi 😭. lekin ab waapas aayi hoon aur promise karti hoon ki har update time pe padhoongi aur comment bhi likhoongi 😳. pakka promise! 😆

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ria

@ronojoy_ria

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

banse door kholne jaata ha

amar-kon ha banse banse-sahab laxmi aaye ha

banse aur laxmi ander aate ha

aasita-lo ab time mila ha isse kam pe aanne ka kun re tujhe pata nahin tha aaj ghar main pooja ha

laxmi-jee pata kun nahin hoga buajee

aasita-toh phir itne dar se kun aae ha kam pe

laxmi-buajee main toh subhe he aa gaye the woh toh baare maa ne kaha tha phool laane ko isliye main phool laane gaye the

aasita-kya tu aaj subha pooja ke lie phool laane gae the banse tunne kal pooja ke lie phool nahin laaya

banse-buajee saman ke list main jo likha tha woh sab main lee aaya

aasita-aacha toh tera kahena yeh ha ke saman ke list main phool ke baare main likha he nahin tha

banse-jee buajee

aasita-ho he nahin sakta bol mujhe saman ka list kisne banaye the

aasita ka sawaal sun ke veena aur lata dono ke haath paao thande ho jaate ha

aasita-bol bhoot banke ab kun khara ha

amar-aaa aasita usse bolne do bol banse kal tujhe saman ka list kisne diya tha

banse-sahab woh saman ka list mujhe

banse ke kuch kahene se pahele he veena bol dete ha ke saman ka list sunne diya tha yeh baat sun ke amar bohot gussa ho jaata ha

amar-veena tum ne tumse itne baare galati kaise ho sakte ha

veena-jee woh pata nahin kaise main bhul gaye

amar-veena tum itne laaparva kaise ho sakte ho mujhe tumse yeh umeed bilkul nahin the

amar jaake pooja main baithta ha veena bhi chup chap amar ke saath baithte ha

pooja khatam hone ke bad sab log aapne aapne room main chale jaate ha

lata-didi aapne mere galati ko kun aapne galati kahe aaj mere baaja se aapko bhaiya se kitna kuch sunna paara sab ke sammne didi main abhie jaake bhaiya se kahe dete hu ke ke list mainne banaye the

veena-chotte tu chorna jo ho gaya so hogaya ab bhul jaa woh sab

lata-didi zarur mainne picchle janam main kuch punne kie the jis ke baaja se mujhe is janam main aap jaise didi mile bhaagwan se main har roz yehi duyaa karte hu didi ke mujhe har janam main aap jaise he didi mile

veena-aacha aacha ab mere tariff karna badh kar aur chal mere saath nasta banane main mere madad kar warna tjhe toh pata ha tere ladlo ko agar nasta nahin milla na toh kya haal karenge

lata-jee didi chaliye

lata aur veena dono kitchen main nasta banane jaate ha par nhe pata he nahin ke unke saree baate aasita sun leete ha

aasita-aacha toh galati lata bhabhi se hue the itne baare baat toh mujhe bhaiya ko baata na he paarega

aasita amar jee ke room main jaate ha

amarjee aapne files check kar rahe the

aasita-bhaiya mujhe aapse kuch baat karne the

amarjee-ha bolo kya baat ha

aasita-bhaiya woh (tells everything)

amarjee-kyaaaaaaaaa

aasita-ha bhaiya aap khud he bhabhi se pucch lijiye

amarjee-hmm

amarjee banse se kaheta ha veena ko jaake bula laae

veena room main aate ha

amarjee-yeh sab main kya sunn raha hu veena

veena-main maante hu ke mujhse galati ho gaye ha is bar plz mujhe maaff kar dijiye

amarjee-veena aaj jo tumne kiya ha uske liye main tumhe sukriya kahena chahata hu

aasita-bhaiya pagal ho gaye ha kya yeh bhaiya bhabhi ko sukriya kun kahe rahe ha

amarjee ke eh baat sunke toh veena aur aasita dono shocked ho jaate ha

veena hairaan nazro se amarjee ke taraff dekhte ha

amarjee-veena aaj jo tumne kiya ha uske liye i am proud of u lata ke galati ko aapne galati baatake chup chap mere sab sun gaye

veena-dekhee mainne toh wohi kiya jo mujhe karna chaheye tha

amarjee-veena aaj agar tum nahin hote na toh pata nahin main kaise aapne ghar ko samal pata

aasita amarjee aur veena ke baat sunke waha se chali aate ha aapna uttra hua muh leeke

aasita-yeh kya sab ullta kun ho gaya

amarjee-veena tum sach main mere humrahe ho

aamarjee hgs veena

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Suhana

@suhana.dixit

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Hi Dear

Title is really different..

Story is really nice n all the characters r gud...

Raj ke ghar mein pooja hai😊

Do continue soon

Bye

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

This Aasita has to ask everything aur saara sacch bahar aa gaya!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒

Lata ko bachane ke liye Veena ke ilzaam apne sar pe le liya!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Amar is angry and scolds Veena!!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

Lata felt bad ke uski wajah se Veena ko itna kuch sunna pada!!!!

She wanted to go and confess the truth to Amar but Veena told her ke jo ho gaya so ho gaya!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊

Lata feels lucky that she has got a sister like Veena!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Veena aur Lata ki saari baatein Aasita sun leti hai and goes off to tell Amar about it!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😒 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡

On hearing everything Amar calls Veena and Veena is saying to sorry to him!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Amar instead of getting angry is thanking Veena much to the surprise of Aasita who thinks Amar has gone mad!!!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Amar said ke aaj agar Veena nahi hoti toh pata nahi woh apna ghar ko kaise sambhal pata!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 😊

Aasita is unhappy ke yeh toh sab ulta hi ho gaya!!!! 😊 😊 😊 😊She is a witch!!!!😈 😈 😈 😈

Amar hugged Veena and it was really touching to see that!!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊 🤗 🤗 🤗 🤗

Edited by Shaina_b - 15 years ago

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sea_nyx

@sea_nyx

Inactive

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

aww, the last scene when amar hugs veena was really touching! God this Ashita is such a witch yaar! ugh, total vamp. lovely update and really liked the interaction b/w the co-sisters. waiting for RN to meet though!