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aishwarya gayen

@aishwaryagayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

AiShUs AdDa

ONLY FOR MY BELOVED PREMEER

FANFICS

ANTAHEEN -{finished}
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1287388
A FALSE COMMITMENT -{finished}
1.www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1247331
2.https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1421893
NEVER FORGET ME !-
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1358841
jagdiya rasma ishq nahi janta:-(Finished)
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1514277
ss:just a love story{finished}
https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1674380

ONESHOTS
1. if tomorrow comes -pg 1
2.the night of storms pg -26
3. Colors of love pg 35
4. Do not waitpg 55
5.Mirage-pg93
6.severance pg102

7.Quietus pg110

8.Amour Pg114

9.Cheesy Crazy Love Pg119 ~NEW

avatars

pg 59

siggies
pg 59 randoms
set for dargah scene pg 77
hc delhi visit sigs pg 77
ff banner -jagdia rasma ... pg 81
valentine promo sig pg 83
sig frm aug 12 pg 83
AG at award function pg 83
prem juneja kross conn epi pg 83
shivmandier sets pg85
heerin prem arms pg86*
prem in rajasthan pg89 & 90 & 91
ag the vampire girl-pg91
zindagi kahe... -pg91
beautiful heeriye-pg92
v-day special*-pg92
AG at wedding a-s sbs-pg 92
3/3 specials premeer-pg92
bridal heer-pg95
zing photsht AG-pg95
on req by saba{PH}-pg95
AG in smile plz-pg96
premeer bridal wear-pg96
AG b'day updt-pg96
HC-pg96
AG-pg97
PH icons-pg97
anniversary-pg97
AG update-pg98
meet anniversaryupdate-pg98
AG 100yrs of Btown sbs-pg99
calendar shoot-pg99
AG crazy-pg99
crazy stuff-pg100
anniversary bulk updt-pg100
Ag in BRKD-pg104
Ag bday updts-pg106
HC-AG stuff-pg106
PHavis-pg107

BUlk updt-pg108

updates-pg109

BULK july12-pg110

AGSPdiwali-pg113

vm's
Ab Naa Ja-pg95

Manmarziyan-pg109

Birha Ki Agni-Pg116

Chaandaniya-pg117

MY Mind In Gutter Posts INDEX

<MIG PHingoli Analysis-Peep In>#1

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/3709651/mig-phingoli-analysis-peep-in-1

<MIG SEDUCTION Analysis-Peep In>#2

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/3730250/mig-seduction-analysis-peep-in-2

<MIG AGGRESSION Analysis-Peep In>#3

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/3835119/mig-aggression-analysis-peep-in-3

<MIG WICKED ENCOUNTER Analysis-Peep In>#4

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/3942388/mig-wicked-encounter-analysis-peep-in-4

<MIG LustyMoons Analysis-Peep In>#5

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/kis-desh-mein-hai-meraa-dil/3996062/mig-lustymoons-analysis-peep-in-5

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Edited by aishwaryagayen - 11 years ago

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aishwarya gayen

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Posted: 15 years ago

DISCLAIMER : THIS STORY OR THE INCIDENTS OR THE PERSON RELATED TO THE STORY IS BASED ON IMAGINATION NOTHING OFFENSIVE OR REALITY IS IN HERE

HEER : hello ! where were you main kitani der se try kar rahi hun tumhe cell pe

Prem : sorry darling , we were having a confedential meeting

Heer: is there anything serious ??

Prem : no jaan

Heer: oh my mistake I asked ur confidential thing

Prem : shut up ! actually there is a report of some terrorist attack and as you know its my duty being a IPS officer to take care about the national security

Heer: yes sir , so u remember mr. Pheonsake that you have to meet me in taj in 10 minutes

Prem : oh shit ! m so sorry I l I l just come

Heer: I am waiting

Prem : love you

PREM WAS JUST COMING OUT OF HIS OFFICE

Staff : sir

Prem : yes

Staff : sir there is a attack reported somewhere by the control squad

Prem : what the hell ! come on just infrom the special forces

PREM RUNS TOWARDS THE CHAMBER OF HIS BOSS

Prem : sir

Prems boss: yes prem , there is a blast and some terrorist activities reported in taj

Prem : taj ??? sir I just talked to someone over there it might be a joke I mean how come ??/

Prems boss: its just reported 5 minutes earlier we have to be fast

Prem : yes

PREM KEPT ON TRYING THE CELL OF HEER AND IT CAME BUSY OR NO NETWORK

PRME : DAMN she is inside there oh god help her !

THEY ALL CAME OUTSIDE THE SITE OF THE HOTEL

PREM : SIR it has been confirmed that there are like 25 or 30 terrorists in there , and about 250 hostages .
No demands yet

DIG OF THE CITY : We have informed the special forces and they are here lets handle them as they will like to , we will just have to wait

Prem : sir we cant wait like this , they will kill the hostages there

DIG : WE CANT HELP IT

Prem : no sir , m not going to stay like this I need to go in

DIG : I cant order you

Prem : I am not asking for any u know un logo ke saath meri pheonsake hai , I jst talked to her bfore sometimes and now she is in so danger and I cant help her

DIG : prem its not the time to be emotional

Prem : please sir ! plz

INSIDE THE HOTEL

Terrorists : come on come on get in the room u guys r hostage come on
{ they were kicking punching the human there }

here heer was trying hard in her cell to call prem

terrorists : so miss u r special ha give up the cell

heer: let us go plz

terrorists : so u wont listen ha come on

{ he holded heer by her arm and pulled her to another room }
there were some dead bodies lying in the room

heer: u killed them

terrorist: ye bhi tumhar tarah jyada bolte the and they didn't listened to our orders waise bhi kuch der baad sabko marna hai bas tumhara chance jaldi aagaya

heer : no plz let me go

terrorist just pulled over his gun and shoted

heer closed her eyes and afetr a minute she was down to the cinders hearing another shot and then a soft angelic voice

prem : heer ! r u allright
heer opened her eyes slowly and there he is her life , her soul and her existence

heer : prem

prem : r u fine

heer : why did u came in ? I mean they killed so many people In here

prem : sshhh meri zindagi andar hai aur main bahar kaise rahu

then they hugged each other with tears in both of their eyes
prem then kissed her with all his force which showed that how much he was in tension with the slight fear of losing her

then they broke off

prem : lets go the special forces are outside and we have to be out fast

heer: ab mujhe kisi ka darr nahi ab jindgi chali bhi jaye to

prem : ssh ye kaisi baatein kar rahi ho come on lets go

prem and heer came outside the room and they came towards the ground floor

prem : heer u go from here straight there will be cadets out staright in the corridorr

heer: and you

prem : I have some duty towards the nation too I have to help others

heeR: I wont leave u alone I cant

prem : just go heer go

heer hugged prem forcefully and with tears rolling down her cheak prem holded her cheeks with both his hand and tried to console her
and suddenly seeing something heer turned prem to her side and there was a sound of shot

prem looked back and there was a terrorist with empty gun and his last shot was heer
he looked towards heer who was lying in her hands like a stone and there was blood all over

there were few other shots and cadets running all over

heer felt on the ground with tears

prem : heer why did u do that

heer: I love you

prem : heer

heer: ssh just say I love you I don't have time

prem : kuch nahi hoga heer kuch nahi hoga

he tried to pick her up

heeR: nahi nahi I don't have time just be with me be with me

prem : heer u cant live me see we r going to marry in a day or so come on get up plz heer

heer: I am only urs and I am not leaving u I will always stay with u and and if tomorrow comes again like today then inspite of seeing u die I l love to die
I love u pr'..

With that heer closed her eyes and a stone angelic statue was lying in the arms of heer

Prem cried and screamed but there was no one to listen him no one to share his pain as this is just not the story of him but of thousands innocent ''''''''..

Love
Aishwarya gayen

Edited by aishwaryagayen - 13 years ago

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zohakhan7

@zohakhan7

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+ 10

Posted: 15 years ago

it was fabulous .i had tears in my eyes while reading it.but i am very angry on u why did u let heer die. 😭 😭 😭

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Whypadhu

@Whypadhu

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Posted: 15 years ago

t was fabulous .i had tears in my eyes while reading it.but i am very angry on u why did u let heer die.

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Afreen

@asyasahil928

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+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

hey
that was amazing.....i have no words to describe it....👏 tears were flowing down my cheeks....so touching.

love
Afreen

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...Nikhita...

@...Nikhita...

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Posted: 15 years ago

fabulous oneshot......very touching ansd very emotional.......loved it

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Suhana Ahmed

@Suhana Ahmed

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

very nice Aishu...
per teri villian wali soch nahin badle gi naa????
phir se tragic ending????
but seriuosly it was very well written...

regards,
Suhana.