Written Update : Killer Whistle

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Part 1

There is an empty office.. just one dude is there... he is seeing some files.. another person enters.. and sees all inside out.. the first man feels someone is there and checks but he finds no one so no problem... he continues to work.. he goes into a cabin and there he ons a recorder and starts recording what is to be done to certain files.. and then the second man starts walking towards the cabin... he then whistles as he enters the cabin.. the first man is scared.. he says what are you doing here? What do you want? You want money? but then the second man takes a knife and kills the first man.. the recorder falls...

CID comes.. the dead man is Rakesh.. he was plunged once onto his chest... Daya says must be a professional killer.. Abhi asks the staff why was Rakesh here and his sectretary tells that Rakesh was here to work some papers and Rakesh always recorded what was to be done to papers in a dictaphone so she could come in the morning check it and do the needful... CID looks for the dictaphone and it was beneath a table.. they take it out.. and listen.. there is someone whistling and then the same thing what all Rakesh said...

Freddie says must be a guy for gals cant whistle like that.. Anushka whistles and so it can be a girl too.. Daya says as far as he knows he hasnt heard this tune at all.. Abhi says how can you be so sure?? And Daya says that maybe not 100% sure bt he does hear to many songs.. old new, all kinds... So they decide that the tune is not popular atleast and so decide to visit a music expert..

they visit a shop and the man there tells he doesnt know the tune.. he says that maybe this can be a tune as there are so many music companies coming up daily.. and each gets a music director from somewhere.. and so there can be a new tune he knows not of.. he then suggests them to go to the radio stations.. they have a record of all old and new songs and even the new albums are sent to them for publicity...

Abhi and Daya go to a music station.. the RJ there plays the tune and asks the listeners to call her if they have heard the show.. she then tells Abhi and Daya that she will let them know if she gets a response.. Daya and Abhi leave..

In the bureau, Freddie is playing the whistle and Daya and he are listening to it.. Freddie stops the cassette as the whistle ends and Daya asks to let it play.. it might have caught something as it was playing the whole night... Freddie does so.. and then after a little while.. they hear the door close and even after that they hear someone speak something.. first they replay it to make sure that there is a sound.. and then Daya replays it by first modifing the output voice and then they hear 'camera phone ki jai'.. and hence Daya concludes that there was some 3rd person there for sure in the room...

Daya concludes there needs to be a 3rd person.. he calls Abhi and tells Abhi 'Camera phn ki jai' Abhi is in car with Anushka.. Abhi says gud work.. and then they are going.. Abhi tells Anushka and then he gets a call.. the RJ tells her that a girl called who knew the tune.. her name was Preeti and she was in a recording studio at the moment and gives the address of the girl..

Daya and Freddie go there.. and Daya says that whoever was here didnt have gud intentions.. and then he must be hidden somewhere for else Rakesh must have called him for help and then Daya sees an almirah.. the only place where one could hide.. Daya tries to do it again.. he hides and takes his camera and asks Freddie to enact the murderer... Daya says the 3rd person took the pic and will blackmail the killer.. bt the question is where did he go and how will they find him? And then they begin searching everywhere... in the office for clues...

Daya chks in the cabin and Freddie outside... then Daya too comes out to search.. Daya is chking the dustbins when Freddie calls.. Freddie found gloves in another dustbin.. must be the murderers or what were they doing in a builders office?? Daya says it has to be the 3rd persons for else they should have blood...

ACP, Abhi and Anoushka enter the office... they ask for Ms Preeti.. and they say room number 103.. Abhi goes and calls her from the room.. ACP is out.. he asks where did she hear the tune? And she tells that she heard it in the studio the last day while working.. she works in an ad company and visits here often and it was a sweet tune and so just stayed on... She doesnt knw from where it was coming.. she then showed where she was when she heard the tune.. ACP says that as the recording studios are sound proof so how can she hear the tune? So she tells that she was coming out... to do a call and so she heard it.. ACP says stand where you were that day and we shall play the tune opening the door of each room one by one and so she can tell what she heard was like... Preeti isnt really glad to do it... bt she does it... Anoushka plays the tune and Abhi opens the door for her... how sweet..

Finally Preeti recalls from where she heard the tune... a guy and a gal were standing there and so the door was open..

ACP asked the manager who were in room number 4 and whatever the manager said wasnt audible bt it was something for ACP and ABhi were shocked.. they ask where will these people be now? and then they leave... a band is performing somewhere and CID comes there.. and then suddenly a man enters the stage is singing the same tune.. he is Baba Sehgal... we see a flashback showing Baba Sehgal as the same guy who killed Rakesh...

and the show ends!!

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AlexithyMia thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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crapman! I didnt watch it as my Granny took over 😔
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I put the update.. no worries...

I wanna see the other half soon.. I think it will come next Sat
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Posted: 16 years ago
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and jinkies Ramya.. evn I speak crap man.. lov it
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hehe 😆 n even I used to ... infact while TALKIN i say Jinkies...I learnt that frm Sccoby doo...

ohh meri judwaa Didii main aa rahi huun 😆 milke shaadi kar lete hain. u with Abhi n me with Daya 😆

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Posted: 15 years ago
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OMG... we need to be twins.. jinkies.. and even I got it from Scooby :D :D


Okie Part 2.....
Sorry people I missed the first half an hour for guests at the place.. bt didnt miss the main part...


okie.. so the whistle led them to Baba Behgal and ofcourse Baba Sehgal wasnt the killer... duh...

Now... they are checking the gloves they found.. Dr Saluke says he found something in the gloves... and he shows them some small balls floating in water in a test tube.. Freddie says this is food.. so the blackmailer must have eaten before seeing the murder... and Saluke says that for that he needs to be a fish as this is fish food..

and they remember the fish tank in Rakesh's office... Daya says that the blackmailer then needs to be someone who comes to take care of the fishes...

they find which shop sends people to Rakesh's office to clean the fish tank and then go there.. in shop owner... tells them that 3 guys cover that area... one didnt do it.. the other is on leave and the 3rd one didnt come since 23rd.. the same date as when Rakesh was killed... so they go to this 3rd guy's place...

the house is all topsy turby... and the bosy of the guy is lieing there... been killed for long.. looks like.. the pockets have nothing and they dont find the cell phone either.. but then they find a matrimonial ad for a bride by Manoj...

ABhi says they can find manoj's address from the PO Box number... and they do so..

They go and meet Manoj.. he says how can I help if someone committed the murder seeing the ad.. he had met only a gal since then for not long ago did he give the ad.. and he said that he will meet a few gals today and a few tomorrow.. Abhi says that they will see the gals with him..

In a restaurant.. 3 really weird luking guys are sitting.. I recognised Abhi.. he just had a moustache and some long ahir.. Freddie was next.. he had beard on... and looked American... Now you had to see Daya... I couldnt recognise Daya till real long... Daya had long hair... and beard and a totallly different look... and he luked muah in it :D :D

Well then the 3 talk and then Abhi gets up and goes and sits with Manoj.. the first gal comes with her parents... Abhi says he is Manoj's elder brother...
Slowly and slowly girls come and go... and then Daya is clicking pics of all the girls that have come...

And then.. a gal comes... Abhi is shocked to see her... Manoj is glad like he is seeing all other gals.. even Daya and Freddie are taken aback... and then the gal is the same one who called them knowing the tune.. Ms Preeti...

She is fine and all bt then Abhi takes off his moustache and she is taken aback...


At the bureau.. Preeti is trying to say she didnt kill anyone.. she just knew the tune and so she thought to help CID... bt they arent listening.. they say that she killed and so she led them on a false trail... and then ACP mentions Rakesh and the fish boy.. and listening to Rakesh's name Preeti starts crying very much and says that she did the murders...

ACP asks her how did she kill and she says that she killed the 2 isnt that enough?? and ACP says no you didnt kill.. thats why you dont knw... and he says that she is trying to defend someone and asks who is the killer? and how is she related to him??

Preeti gets very senti.. she cries and says thats my daddy... Rakesh had cheated them and so...

CID goes to Preeti's place... the servant is there.. he says that Preeti's dad went out.. he first gave a few blank calls and then left.. Abhi redials and gets to know its the residence of some dude... and this dude is the business partner of Rakesh and he too had cheated Preeti's dad...

They rush to this dude's house... meanwhile.. in the dude' s house.. the man is taking breakfast kinda thing and Preeti's dad turns up at the door.. he is angryy and has a knife in hand... he walks towards the man.. and CID is coming and coming.. Preeti is crying in the car... and then preeti's dad has the knife of the man's neck and CID comes there... first they stop the man and then DAYA actually goes and lifts him away :P :D

and then Preeti's dad confesses.. he says that he saved every penny for his own house and Preeti's marriage bt the two said that they will get him a house bt the building was never made and he was broke.. he says that the tune was so good that he heard Preeti whistling it and he himself started whistling it... he says he killed the fisher boy for he started blackmailing him... he said that the fish boy called while Preeti's dad was cutting the matrimonial column... and the fish boy said that he has a pic of the murder and so Preeti's dad kills the fish boy with the very scissors he had...

Preeti's crying badly and thn the dad says that how could I forget that who will now marry a criminal's daughter??? Daya tells the other man that he too will be punished for cheating...
While Abhi tells Preeti's dad that they will see that Preeti's wedding happens nicely and even try that Preeti's dad could attend it...

thats it!!

OMG.. I loved to see Saluke Takla and loved how young Daya luked.. bt somehow.. Abhi luked just the same.. he hasnt changed even a lil bit :D :D
and ACP is growing young :D
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Posted: 15 years ago
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no no. Salunkhe takla, Abhi - Daya luked different n cute sweety! n ACP sir...just rockin as usual. n yeah a bit younger too 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😆 yeah. ws a bit confused. now he luks younger 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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ACP is like Shekhar Suman... growing younger with years :P
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Bt ACP luks nice like this only... I couldnt see him with hair...

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