FF- Crying Hearts IMP NOTE p7

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi not sure if anyone remembers me, from my other FF's.
But here is a new one😊
This one is based a bit on reality, (except losing my dad). I hope you like and comment.
ANy comment would be welcome, if there is no responce I will discontinue. Not sure how many of us faithful ksians are still lurking here😆
Here goes:
Chapter 1 page 1/c2p2/c3p3/c4p5

Crying Hearts

Prologue

Bani Dixit was raised in a large extended family. Her dad Nishikant Dixit was a teacher, her mom Kiran a housewife, and her baby sister Rano. Then there was her dad's brother Sonny, his wife Rama, their 2 sons Daskh and Tarun and their daughter Pia.

Their family was originally from Mt Abu. And life there was happy and peaceful. However the downslide of the economy forced many young men to leave their parents homes and move to Mumbai where they could find better paying jobs and venture into careers that were not possible to achieve in Mt Abu.

Nishikant Dixit had the same dreams for his young wife Kiran, and soon the newly married couple bade their families a tearful farewell and made their way to the city. ND was a hard working and respectful man, so it was not long that he found himself being employed for one of the richest private schools in India. The couple though, not wealthy by any stretch of imagination, managed to live a decent and content life and soon Kiran gave ND the gift that he wanted most. A child.

Being a teacher ND loved kids, for him any child was a gift from God, he cared less if it was a boy or girl. He could never fully understand why girls were treated with such contempt by society, for as far as he could tell all his brightest students over the years were all girls! Intelligent girls that were forced to abandon their studies to marry or sacrifice their careers etc for their brothers and families. ND swore that his children boy or girl would always be treated equally.

When little Bani was 3 years old, she was gifted with another baby sister Rano. Bani was fiercely protective over Rano and it amazed her parents how their little daughter took over the care of her sibling so single minded. As the years would prove later this was perhaps divine intervention, for it would soon became Bani's full time job.

5 years later

Sonny Dixit and his 7 year old daughter Pia and his wife Rama appeared at ND front door one stormy day, and life at the Dixit house suddenly changed. There was nothing to do in Mt Abu, and Sonny had to fend for his wife and child. Coming to ND was the only option they had as they knew no one else in Mumbai. Kiran and the girls made adjustments, and soon the small family of 4 became a growing family of 10 as Rama had given birth to twin boys.

For years things were going great and Chota papa and Choti ma as Bani and Rano called their uncle and aunt, and their sons Daksh and Tarun and Pia, became an integral part of their lives. The girls loved their Chota papa as he would spoil them rotten and often side with them when the terrible two (twins) fought with them or stole their toys. So it was up to Kiran and ND to side with the boys.

CP was thriving in his job as an accountant at the Walia group of companies. However with his achievements in his career a quite discontent was settling in the Dixit house. Kiran's health was deteriorating. The added chores were getting to CM and she was also very aware that it was her husband now that contributed far more to the household expenses than ND did. All these issues and the fact that her husband doted on the girls at the expense of her sons did not go well with CM, and her increasingly distant and aloof attitude did not go unnoticed by ND and Kiran.

Bani had just turned 12 when she became a woman, and it was also that same year that Kirans health failed her and she expired. Bani was devasted, but she had to keep herself strong for Rano and her distraught dad. The gloom and doom in the house continued for days, and one day their CP surprised them all by saying that they were moving into a big new house, where there would be sufficient room for everyone and a huge garden to play. But Bani was apprehensive for the move. She was old enough now, to realise that her CM was not too keen on the idea. Since their mom's death her CM hardly spoke to Rano and her, and she made it a point that Pia kept away from them as well.

She also knew that secretly her father too did not want to move from the house that reminded him of his beautiful Kiran and their once happy life. CM was getting irritated by her brother in laws attitude, and old fashioned ways. Couldn't he see that the kids were growing and they needed their own space? Besides he wasnt going to pay for any thing anyway was he? In fact, she reasoned why her husband couldn't accept the fact and leave his brother and nieces to stay in the old house, while they moved on!.

But CP would hear nothing of it. It was his brother and sister in law that stood by him when he was struggling and he will never abandon them now when the tables were turned. He loved his brother like a father and the girls as his own daughters they will move only if they could all go together.

So her plans to move into her "mansion" became her sole purpose.

But CM must have wished very hard, as just a month before they moved ND joined his wife.

Bani and Rano, the new orphans packed away their parents most precious belongings and reluctantly took up residence in the new house.

It was no surprise to her that she and Rano were given a single bedroom furthest from the rest of the family.

10 years later.

Sonny Dixit looked at his stunning nieces and smiled. His eyes misted. If only Kiran and bhaia were here to see them he wondered. How proud would he have been? Rano, intelligent, feisty Rano,

who would have thought that the young tomboy who found more joy as a child playing with her brothers cars and climbing trees would turn out to be such a lovely girl. He chuckled, thinking off all the times she and the boys would drive the household help up the wall playing "cops and robbers".

But the boys treated her like their queen. Nothing that their Rano di did was wrong, and whenever she got into trouble for not completing her chores, it was a delight to see the 2 terrors 'helping" the help to save her from their mom's taunts. Now at 15 and Rano 19 they still cajoled her to play with them, for their own sister Pia was far too busy with make up and fancy dresses.

He looked across and Bani and sighed. How exquisite she looked. So graceful and poised. Just like her mom Kiran. A lump formed in his throat looking at his beloved niece. Bani was not a catwalk beauty, that was Pia with her stunning looks and flamboyant style, Pia would turn heads wherever she went, but Bani was different. Bani possessed an internal beauty, ethereal looks coupled with a dusky complexion and such arresting eyes. Her dimpled smile was a rare treat, but it was her captivating eyes that bewitched a person. He shuddered thinking that one day she would no longer be in his protective care.

He shook himself, calling out to them to leave. They were attending a Walia function and they did not want to be late.

The Walias

Uday and Krishna Walia stood at the door welcoming their guests. They were a striking couple. Their 2 children stood beside them too, greeting and meeting the people that were steaming into their magnificent home. Jigyasa Bali their eldest child looked striking in her designer sari and matching jewellery. Once could see that she inherited her mom's aristocratic looks. But whereas her mom's look was subdued, Jigyasa was anything but. She wore bold colours and over the top accessories, but she carried it off with such finesse that even the most critical fashion designer would forgive her. Besides her stood her husband Aditya Bali, a senior manager at WGI, their handsome son Ranveer and daughter Anu. They made a pretty picture and it was obvious from the ay that Adi and Jigyasa included their children with the people that they were a genuine friendly lot.

Then there was Jai.

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ducky_euro thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey i see u have a new ff
its really nice. so rano-bani arent accepted by CM. i think bigger problems are coming..
cont soon, i really look forward to read the next parts
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Posted: 16 years ago
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A very good start indeed.Please update and keep the forum busy

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Posted: 16 years ago
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wha what???? why did you stop there????? continue, continue continue please!!!! that was a great start and nobody has forgotten you or your previous fanfics :D
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HEY KAHTIJA
GR88 PART DAER
really feel bad for bani and rano
but loved the way chote papa is supporting then
and now its turn for jai and bani to meet
plzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
Edited by jeenal20 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi !
do continue ....who can forget your wonderful stories ...looking forward to the next part :)
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thanks for the comments.

Chap2 was ready i was waiting for responses. Here goes.
Chapter 2

Then there was Jai.

How would one describe Jai Walia without being indulgent? He was a doting son any parent wanted, an indulgent brother any sister loved, a genuine friend a friend could need, a fierce businessman that any business respected, a thorough gentleman and a sexy desirable man any female crazed. He was charming, suave and sophisticated. Jai Walia worked hard and played harder. He loved luxury without being pompous, and pursued what he wanted until he got it. But Jai also had a grey side. He never suffered fools, he had a mean temper and at 32 he pretty well knew what he wanted in life and no one was going to sour his plans.

JW was a handsome good-looking man with his thick gelled back wavy hair, muscular arms, broad chest, strong hands, Roman nose, ripped abs (well-defined abdominal muscles), strong chin, chiselled features and dreamy eyes. And JW was doing what he does best, charming the pants off a besotted woman.

Jai had his back turned to the entrance and did not see Sunil Dixit (nickname Sonny) and his family enter, until his mom nudged him.

Jai did not hear his accountants greeting, or his wife's Namaste, he barely acknowledged the boys and some pretty girl that was shaking his hand so earnestly. Jai Walia's eyes was riveted on the most gorgeous, exquisite and exotic face that he had ever seen before. He didn't realise he was still gaping until his father slapped him on his back.

Pia Dixit thought she died and went to heaven. Up until half an hour ago she thought that she lived in luxury and wealth. This however was something extraordinary. The place smelt of richness and elegance. Every corner of the house was tastefully done. From where she stood she could clearly see the magnificent spiral staircase leading to what must be the bedrooms. To her right was the gourmet kitchen and dining areas and her left more rooms.

But Pia was more interested in the owners of this palace. The Walia's were picture perfect. Her trained eye for fashion quickly recognised that the women of the house were wearing designer saris and jewellery and the men the finest hand stitched suits. And of course Jai Walia was just a sight to behold. Pia felt the first flush of adult magnetism to a man she just met!

Bani and Rano stood apart from the vast crowd.

R- Di CM did not even introduce us to the Walia's did you see that?

B- Rano forget it. You know how she is?

R- Yes I know but still . Di I don't want to be here, do you think we can leave? and this stupid salwaar is scratching me all over.

Bani chuckled, No we can't go, CP will get upset, and besides nothing is scratching you. I know you just want to get back into your t-shirts and jeans. Rano you look so pretty, be a girl sometimes, Bani teased pulling her sisters cheek.

Rano sulked while Bani smiled.

Jai was getting irritated with the woman in front of him. Who was she? He tried to place her but couldn't. Suddenly he saw Mr Dixit coming his way, followed by that same obnoxious hand grabbing girl and two rather bored looking boys.

Oh Hi Jai I see you met my wife Rama. This is my daughter Pia and my sons Tarun and Daksh. He signalled for the boys to extend their hands. And this is my nieces Rano and Bani……not seeing them he asked. Daksh where is Bani and Rano?

D- Don't know dad there were here a min ago.

Never mind them Sunil , I am sure they are around here somewhere, intervened his wife rather abruptly.

But Jai did not miss the sudden tension in the air, as the woman spoke. Perhaps Sunil Dixits nieces were little brats that she did not want around he reasoned, hence her annoyance.

Jai suddenly excused himself when he caught a glimpse of the beauty he saw earlier. Trust his good fortune. He had looked everywhere for her and here she appears saving him from unwanted attention.

She was standing right under the massive chandelier, and the many lights and crystals bathed her in a warm rich golden hue. She had on a pink sari, elegantly draped around her slim shapely body. Her long jet black hair fell softly to her waist. she had on such minimal jewellery. just bangle, earrings and a thin gold chain around her exposed neck. Jai took in her appearance, momentarily mesmerized by the vision she created. She was frowning at her friend and then smiling, her smile eclipsing her earlier frown. She had dimples. He sighed.

He virtually walked on air reaching her.

Would you believe that Jai Walia was tongue tied? Bani and Rano stared at the handsome man, who was staring at Bani with such fascination that it scared her. She shifted uncomfortably in her shoes. When she met his still silent stare, she looked to Rano helplessly. Getting the hint, Rano clicked her fingers in front of his eyes.

Hey mister, what's up? Seeing him not responding, Rano nudged him quite hard, and Jai yelped in pain.

What the.. Are you mad? Jai shouted in pain.

I am mad, you are mad, why are you staring at Di and who are you. You look crazy and how did you get here? Do the Walia's know you are here? You look quite decent, are you gate crashing?

Jai was stunned by this crazy girl. What was she saying? Actually I was er I am…..

Rano – ok I get it, I know this party is boring. But the exit is that way, and My Di – pointing at the still silent Bani= who is Mrs Walia understands that you want to go , don't you Di she asked fibbing confidently.

Bani just nodded anything to get this man away from her.

Jai was flabbergasted. This chit of a girl was calling him mad and accusing him of things and being uninvited, an imposter?, when clearly she lost her marbles. And wait what did she say her Di was Mrs Walia. Oh no was his dad having an affair? His face paled.

Suddenly it occurred t him that she was lying to get rid off him. So he decides to play along.

I am so sorry. Look I am staring at your Di because she is absolutely gorgeous. The moment I saw her she took my breath away.

Turning to Bani. Apologies "Mrs Walia" I had no idea you were married. He frowned looking at her hand. And there is no ring too. I had no idea that Uday Walia got married again, he whispered. He is quite old and I mean his wife is still alive, Jai feigned surprise.

Bani was aghast at where this conversation was going. Look Mr it's not like that.

No, Jai interrupted, Oh forgive me then you must be Jai Walia's wife. His son, he offered quizzically.

Yes, that right she is his daughter in law, not wife, how silly can you be, Rano quipped.

To her horror, Bani saw Uday and Krishna Walia approach them. She nudged Rano and shifted her eyes pointing to them.

Listen Mr you better leave, Mr and Mrs Walia are coming to speak to Di, and I don't think that they will take it lightly that another man was ogling their daughter in law now, don't you?

Jai turned to see his parents. A wicked smile and thought crossed his mind.

You are right em ….

Rano. my name is Rano.

I think I will apologise myself, Jai offered.

Bani found her voice at last. Trust Rano to go on and on. Actually don't bother. It's fine please go.

No I insist. Insisted Jai.

Jai interrupted his dad before he could call his name out; He was going to play this game to the finish, and deal with the mad girl later.

Oh hi Mr and Mrs Walia, he greeted his confused parents.

Apologies, I seem to have made a big blunder here.

Uday Walia looked at his son in bewilderment.

Jai winked at his dad, the wink that said "just go with this"

Really what have you done young man, questioned his equally humorous dad.

Immediately Krishna Walia understood that the father and son were at it again and stood by watching the drama unfold,

You see sir; I was quite taken by this absolutely gorgeous young woman here, pointing to the now furiously blushing Bani, not realising that she is your daughter in law. ) Stressing daughter in law).

Krishna coughed. My daughter in law?

Yes mom er Mrs Walia, he stammered.

I had no idea she was married to Jai, your son.

Krishna looked at the girl and smiled. She was indeed gorgeous. She remembered her at the entrance, greeting her with a shy Namaste and taking Uday's blessings. She was surprised not many girls these days held such traditional values. She meant to find out more about her but it seems, fate played his part already.

But she also noticed that both girls were really quite taken aback and scared, so she decided to get them out of their misery.

Em look miss

Bani

Bani, I must apologise. Firstly this young man here, pointing to Jai and pulling his ears, shocking both Rano and Bani speechless. This young man had no right to make you feel uncomfortable. Normally he is running away from girls, not running to them.

And she continued looking now at Rano, I can assure you he is not uninvited, he is not mad, but he is my son. Jai Walia. Now Jai apologise to the girls for this prank and bring them along to join us for a meal.

But mom, they were pranking me….I

Do it Jai commanded his mom in her no nonsense tone and left, dragging a helpless Uday behind.

When Jai turned to look at his tormentors he gasped, they disappeared.

In their haste to leave, Rano ran into another clumsy man. She turned around insulted him in her choicest words and left. Ranveer Bali gaped open mouthed at the beautiful girl telling him off, while Jai Walia on the other end of the room closed his fists in fury.

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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey khatija

gr88 part dear
that was soo fun
jai teasing bani and rano
and now jai has fallen for bani
while ranveer for rano
hehehehhee
cant wait to read the next part
plzzzzzzzzzzzzz cont soon
Edited by jeenal20 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Very sweet one...i cant imagine that am reading so many FFs just when there are talks of archiving this forum ! the prank that Jai played was a fast one ! but crying hearts ! hope this does not end sadly !

Swathi
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I'm a newbi and have read all you stiories (FF'S) and love them including this new FF, which is great by the way, please continue.
Will be around, love this forum, and all the wonderful things it offers us, especially you fabulous writers.
Always a KS fan - rosi -

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