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diana

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Posted: 16 years ago

#11

hey khatija,

just read both the updates. i'm so glad you started another ff. I enjoyed reading all your other ffs. Anyway i like what i'm reading so far. Rano and her pranks, she has to play a prank on jai walia himself. Hahaha that was hilarious. Uday and krishna looks like cool and supportive parents. Poor bani and rano lost both their parents. Even though they have their uncle, its not the same. On top of that their aunt dont really like them. continue soon

nadia

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kitkat_2002

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Posted: 16 years ago

#12

loved it amazin

awesome

have no words to tel u hw much it was to read it

do continue soon plz

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shweta

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Posted: 16 years ago

#13

thanks for updating ....how can they even think of closing this forum :(
btw why is Jai mad at Ranveer ...

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Perveen

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Posted: 16 years ago

#14

Okay Know I'm loving this new FF of your babez.

Rano is just to much I think poor Ranveer & Jai lets see what is in store for Our two Dixit girls?

byebye

Love Perveen.xx

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scorpion3110

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Posted: 16 years ago

#15

Well hun for starters I think all KSians still haunting the forum do remember you and also ur promise at the end Reclaiming my wife of starting an RR FF. LOL That being said, Interesting start, Jai hooked already... Rano introducing Bani as Mrs Jai Walia was too good, and Jai teasing... Looking forward to ur next update, and a lot of JB mush and hopefully some RR mush too... Crying Hearts sounds like a sad FF hope its not so.

Luv, Eva

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suwas

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Posted: 16 years ago

#16

Simply love both chapters esp Jai Bani intro & Jai & Rano's confronation. Looks like mother son liked bai in first glance. Pia is eyeing jai . But CM has more reason to be mad at her niece.

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btkr

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Posted: 16 years ago

#17

Very cute parts, K! Good to see you back on the forum with an ff. Jai really putting the girls on the spot, but then Rano asked for it!!!!

Waiting for more!

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Indian_Goddess

@Indian_Goddess

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Posted: 16 years ago

#18

Awesome ff so far! I absolutely loved the scene with Rano-Jai-Bani 😆 It was too good. And looks like our hero has fallen for our Bani Rani at first sight---- pyaar hogaya usko. 😳 This is really too cute. I have a bad feeling about choti ma though and pia. Somehow I think they will tamper with JB's relationship. Anyways, hope you continue soon. Can't wait for the next update. 😃

Love,
Dil

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Yoga4life

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Posted: 16 years ago

#19

Hey Khatija,

I am really enjoying this story. Though the first part was a bit depressing, with the girls loosing their parents. But I liked the second part very much where Jai Walia played a hard one on Rano and Bani. Though Rano's trick backfired but she is one spitfire, spontaneous and daring. I played a prank on someone whom I had not even met. When after few years I met that person and came to know that he has been told that I was the one who did it, only I know how embarrassing it was.

Waiting for the next part. I am waiting for their next meeting.

cheers

Shweta

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pooks

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Posted: 16 years ago

#20

The sexy Jai is besotted by Bani, but alas in all the pranking it seems like his princess has dissapeared. Waiting to see how he finds her and what happens next 😉

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