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Posted: 15 years ago
A story I wanted to write for SRKAJOL.....now for AN...DO NOT Ask me reason for this...( inspiration from AN's current situation)

" Today is my birthday..I so wanted to see you Nikki..I know you are really not interested in me anymore. But how can I stop loving you.You bring smile on my face. With your presence I felt complete." reading a message on her phone, tears comes down even if she does not want.

"YES, ITS BEEN 2 MONTHS I LEFT SANJEEVNI. HE STILL REMEMBER ME." she was telling to herself but how can she deny of the love she wanted from someone.."BUT WITH LOVE HE BROKE MY HEART TOO. NOT ONCE NOT TWICE BUT SO MANY TIMES SO THAT WHENEVER I THINK OF THEM I CANNOT STOP HATTING HIM."

She received next message from him-" I have no right to ask you but tell me Nikki- HOW ARE YOU..??
I know you are still in Mumbai hiding from me and I know Riddhima knows where are you staying..I want to see you Nikki, want to feel you, want to touch you. I want to see in your eyes. Am I still in your eyes or not".Message ends here....."DING DONG" door bell rings, she wipes her tears, went to see who is on the door. A person from Sanjeevni from Dr. Shashank sent a letter for her. She receives a call from Riddhima.." HELLO". on the otherside Riddhima " HELLO NIKKI"..
Nikki-" YES, RIDDHIMA."
Riddhima-" NIKKI, PAPA SENT YOU A LETTER, HE KNOWS THE REASON, WHY DID YOU LEAVE, ACTUALLY HE KNOWS EVERYTHING ABOUT YOU AND ABHIMANYU THAN BEFORE ANYONE WOULD HAVE TOLD HIM."


continued...

now after learning it from Riddhima, Nikki open the letter sent her from Dr. Shashank.
"Hello Nikita,

Aaj tumhein Dr. Nikita nahi kahunga kyunki aaj...tumse kuch aur baat karna chahta hoon. Its not professional but its related to ur's and Abhimanyu's life.
Tumhein kuch batana chahta hoon, VO SAB JO SANJEEVNI mein kisi ko nahi pata.
Abhimanyu ko sirf meine aur Padma ne kareeb se dekha hai, chauko mat kyunki aage aur bhi aisi baatein hain jo koi nahi janta mere aur Padma ke illawa.Hum dono abhimanyu ke past ke baare mein sab to nahi par utna jaror jaante hai jitna aur koi bhi nahi janta.

Mein aur Padma jante hain tum Abhimanyu se dor rehna chahti ho Sanjeevni se nahi aur kisliye dor rehna chahti ho...Abhimanyu married hai tum ye jaanti ho par us par kya beeti hai kya ye jaanti ho..Sanjeevni aakar usne kisi ko bhi apne paas aane nahi diya, apni past ke bare mein janane nahi diya.Par mein aur padma uske kareeb hue tab jab Sanjeevni mushkil mein tha..Ya ye kahoon ke mein mushkil mein tha...MEIN SANJEEVNI KE LIYE BIKNE WALA THA...tabhi abhi manyu ne mujhe bachaya...ye baat kaun janta hai..? kya tum janti ho..? Kaun janta hai ke Armaan ke lakh koshishon ke baad mujhe riddhima ke liye Armaan ko raazi kisne karvaya Abhimanyu ne..ye kah kar..PYAR SE KAISE KOI DUR BHAGE AUR KAB TAK, YE JAANTE HUE KI VO TUMHARE SAATH HI RAHEGA...aur ARMAAN TO PYAAR KARKE SUDHAR GAYA HAI.

Aaj Padma Abhimanyu ko aise dekhti hai to kehti hai " Kash vo humara beta hota agar nahi to shayad mere DAMAD hota..".
Aapni hi baat karo nikki..kitni baar usne tumhei bachaya..tumhare kandhe pe haath rakha tab jab tum pareshan thi, tumhe Choices na dkar tumhei galat karne se roka. tumse kabhi explanation nahi mangi..

AAJ USKA PURA SACH JANE BINA HI TUM USSE DUR HONA CHAHTI HOO........."

Her phone rings, one new msg from abhi-" CAN I SEE YOU JUST FOR A MOMENT.....PLZZZZZ MANA MAT KARNA, BECAUSE I KNOW EVEN..................." msg ends.

to be continued....


continue....

Nikki thinking "EVEN.............................................."...................."I WANT TO SEE YOU ABHI" par mera dil kuch aur dimag kuch aur kehta hai..mein kya karoon!!!!!!!😭

She continues reading the letter " Haan ye sach hai Abhimanyu ki shaadi ho chuki hai, par iss sach ka dusra mod bhi hai Nikki.
Abhimanyu ne pyar kiya phir shadi bhi ki, ye soch kar ke shayad usse bhi usse pyar mile kyunki abhi ki zindagi mein koi aur hai hi nahi jo usse pyar kar sake..usse apni dil ki baat bol sake...UNKI SHAADI KE DIN HI JAB RAAT KO SAB RELATIVES SE FREE HOKAR APNE ROOM MEIN GAYA....................................APNI BIWI KO KISI AUR KI BHAHOON MEIN DEKHA....CHUP RAHA, KISI SE KUCH NAHI BOLA..JAB USS LADKI NE ABHI KO EXPLANATION DENE KI KOSHISH KI TAB ABHI NE MANA KAR DIYA..USSE YE TAK NAHI PUCHA KE USSNE UABHI KO DHOKA KYUN DIYA....BAS ABHI NE USKI AANKHON MEIN HI PADH LIYA KE VO KISI BHI HALATON MEIN ABHI KE SAATH NAHI REH SAKTI...

USS RAAT ABHI NE APNE HI ROOM MEIN UNDONO KE SAATH RAAT GUZARI...AUR SUBHAH HONE SE PEHLE, SABKE UDNE SE PEHLE UNHE WAHAN SE JANE KO KAH DIYA....SAB RELATIVES KE AANE PAR YE JANANE PAR KE ABHI KE BIWI USKE KAMRE MEIN NAHI HAI..KYUN..????

ABHI CHUP RAHA..KYUNKI ABHI NE USSE PYAAR KIYA THA.AISE HI KISI KO NAHI BATA SAKTA THA KE USKI BIWI KAHA HAI..KISKE SAATH HAI..??? KYUN HAI..??

Nikki, SHAADI KARNE SE DILON KE RISHTE NAHI JUDTE, DO INSAAN KO BANDHAN MEIN DAL SAKTE HO PAR DO DILON KO NAHI, aur phir abhi ne to usko kabhi chua bhi nahi.

Teen mahine baad abhi ke paas hospital mein ek emergency case aaya..us patient ki surgery karni thi.

Vo patient koi aur nahi Abhi ki biwi thi. Surgery karne se pehle uski biwi ne kaha ke vo abhi ke paas wapas aana chahti hai, abhi usse bacha le kisi bhi tarah, ye sun kar us waqt jab abhi usse bhul chuka tha , sirf apne kaam mein lag chuka tha ke apni zindagi tak bhul gaya..achanak se usse phir ye ummed mein dalna ke shayad uski biwi ko bachahe ke baad vo usse wapas mil jaye.....SURGERY KARNA AASAAN NAHI THA.

EK DOCTOR DUSROON KA DIKH KARTE HUE YE NAHI SOCHTA KI VO USSE BACHA SAKEGA YA NAHI, PAR KISI APNE KO DEKH KAR VO SIRF YEHI SOCHTA HAI- KE AGAR MEIN ISSE SAMBHAL PAYA NAHI TO.....AUR USKI BIWI KI DEATH HO GAYI..!!!!

Pyar mein aur kitna tute abhi, pehle apni hi suhaag raat wale din, uske teen mahine baad fir se umeed,

PHIR TUM AAYI....TUMAHRE SAATH KITNI BAAR USKA DIL TUTA.....

Uski bhi galatiyaan thi janta hoon....

Tum dono ke DIL tute hain nikki...tum dono hi APNE DIL JODE SAKTE HO....


SHASHANK."

letter ends.


continue...............


Nikki relaxes her head against the wall...thinking about the closeness she had with him..those moments...

SHE DECIDES SHE WILL SEE HIM TONIGHT AT HIS HOME AT 8...

8 o clock ABHI's house..the big one..

DING DONG, she rings the bell once, twice,thrice, butterflies flying in her stomach. " What am i going to speak with him..??"

she rings the bell again..door opens " Nikki" and abhi faints...

Nikki- " huh!!! Abhimanyuuuuuuu..... get up what happen to you???"
she hits his stomach...."oooouchh!!!!!!!!!"
Abhi- "aaoowww!!!! tum mujhe laatein marna kabhi nahi chodogi na.."

Nikki- " tum isi layak ho"

abhi - " do mahine pehle hi maar deeti"

Nikki Looks at him feeling sorry for him and feeling guilty that she didn't listen to him.....meanwhile abhi getts up.

Abhi thinking how strange we are, we know how we should meet after what all happened between us and now we are meeting with each other as if nothing has happened..."Andar aao!!!"

to be continued..


continue...

Both are thinking what am I going to tell now but somehow they could not stop being just them....šŸ˜›

"Ooohhh!! Umm Happy Birth Day" says Nikki giving him his gift.

"thanks, kya hai isme." replied abhi, continuing further he says " shall I open it...?" passing a big smile to her.

"Not now" replied Nikki. They both entered to his room, still hestitating to look in each other eyes.

Nikki spot some blood spot in his room..and ask him what is it..? he tells her when he was coming back from the mall someone hits his back. " Ur back..?" she ask him, pulling and turning him back, very nervous, scared as if something big happened to him. She spots blood on his shirt also..."remove ur shirt" telling him.
"Its ok, I will get it check tomorrow" replying in soft manner to her..But Nikki is nikki pehlewan...she removes his shirt by herself.

As soon as nikki touches abhi's waist, he shivered, knowing his feeling for her , he didn't stop her..he couldn't stop that care, he couldn't stop that love and he couldn't stop that PASSION...But BANG!!! she turns him hardly..

She ask him where is the first aid box and brings it.. cleaning his wound, she ask him " why don't you tell anyone about this..?"
" I have no one...Ni..." he gets emotional but stopped. She can easily realized that he is alone like her, but will never tell this to anyone.
She put bandage on his wound and then helps him to get on his Shirt.
THIS TIME THE RAW PASSION EMERGES IN BOTH OF THEM...😲😳..
" tum kabhi mujhpe bharosa nahi kar paogi...??" he ask her with all his emotions filled in his voice as soon as she puts the shirt ib his neck. Nikki looked at him thinking "I always trusted you."reluctantly she said " tumne kabhi mauka hi nahi diya...". Her hands rolling down his shirt and then they both shivered.
She didn't remove her hand from his waist.

"Why did you come back..?" he ask her softly. They both looked each other. Nikki was feeling him and now its his turn to feel her. His hands were reaching to her face, he started bending towards her..they could not stop each other..he reached her lips, she does not closes her eyes but to avoid the situation she said

" BECAUSE I AM HUNGARY"she whispered when he is about to kiss......
"han..oooHAAN!!!!" he said leaving her face and maintaining distance..
' We are going out, I am waiting, come outside." she told him confidently as if she is his wife ruling over him.."Yeahhhhh!" he replied, he was happy that his nikki is back who can put him under her shoes if he doesn't listen to her.

TO BE CONTINUED......

continue..........

They both sits in the car. Abhi starts driving and driving and driving and driving and driving...............

"Where are we going....?" Nikki ask him in little anger and abhi softly replied " I don't know. U said we are going out. U didn't tell me where are we suppose to go."

Nikki turns his face towards her window thinking " budhu ka budhu hi rahega..." and than whispers " IDIOT!!!" and Abhi in teasing manner replied " tumhare saath reh kar kiska dimag chal sakta hai.." and than a sarcastic smile comes on his face.

" HUH!!!!! .......There look there is a hotel...." she points the way to him.

They both get into the hotel.. They didn't know that they will get a special treat over there as it is Hotels jubilee, so the hotel's staff decided to offer free service to couples..
Abhi gives nikki an explanatory look that do not tell them that they are not couple..
They had their food and then they were invited on the dance floor...couple dance...Abhi offers nikki his hand and nikki accepts it.

THEY WERE DANCING LOOKING EACH OTHER, FEELING THE MOMENT, FEELING THE PASSION....
abhi turns her and passes her to the other man and he got some other girl..still looking each other suddenly Nikki gets into the arm of a fat, old man and Abhi got fat, old lady.

Fat old lady was happy that he got a handsome young due and said " ohho!!! bada hi handsome munda hega......Oye kisko dekh raha hai..???...oooww!!! to us kudi ko dekh raha hai...waise vo jiske saath hai na vo bada hi batameez budha hai.."

abhi starngly replied her without looking at her " JI..."

" Haan..mein janti uss bude ko pichle 26 saal mere saath hi to hai...mujhe hamesha chedne ke bahane doondta rehta hai....dekho kaise mast hoke nach raha hai uss KUDI ke saath.." being sarcastic that fat lady tells Abhi.

Abhi takes that fat old lady to that old man who was dancing with Nikki..
" excuse me SIR, can I dance with her" abhi softly and gently asking for Niki from that old man seeing nikki enjoying fat, old man company ....

Fat man refuses him smartly tell him to let him enjoy with this young girl because anyhow I have to be with his fat wife after this moment...nikki lauhgs..abhi gets more jealous... he takes Nikki from fat man's arm and in jealousy tell him" SIR, this is ur wife, give me mine because we have to leave.".
Holding nikki hand he starts moving away from them, nikki gives an old man a flying kiss...abhi gets more jealous, he hits her hand soflty asking her to avoid that man and concentrate on him..BUT NIKKI plays around this time.
They both reach to the bar area..and abhi takes two pegs immediately and ask her angrily " u seem very happy with him".

TO BE CONTINUED..................

continue.............

"yeah" teasing abhi, Nikki smiled.

Abhi takes another peg, she whisper in his ear to tease him more" I am going to dance with him".
Abhi turns and pulls her towards him and says " No, because i will dance with you"

Abhi comes in whole mood and gets down on the floor, twisting her arm, reaching her hand and holding it.
With the other hand he pulls her closer, as he puts his hand on her waist and sliding his hand to her back, she gets a shock thinking "she has never seen abhi like that before".

With his hand on her back, he turns her and started dancing, While dancing the moments were all there to look...............
Sliding his hand from her shoulder to her hand and his face was following his hand, NIKKI COULD FEEL HIS BREATH ALL OVER THERE........

twisting and turnings were part of it....


and than everything got over, they comes out of the Hotel.........Abhi was laughing loudly as he was looking nikki's stunned face, he kept on showing her his moves and she was getting more nore shocks..Abhi was drunk..so could understand what a drunk man is like...
They both sit in the Car. This time nikki is on the driving seat.....

Abhi knocks his head on the window on his side and starts laughing madly, pressing his nose against the window, he starts making strange but funny sounds and said " look at your face, u were looking funny when u were shocked...heheheheheheheheheh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"

"Abhi stop it, sit properly" nikki showing him some anger.."ooooooooooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!! BIJLI BARAS RAHI HAI" abhi replied to tease her.
"ABHI" Nikki got angry now....
"Ok sorry...SSSOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRRRRRRYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Ms. BIJLI" keeping his finger on his mouth.
A deep silence took place in the car...
Abhi start thinking about past two months and becoming sad. in sad tone now he tell her" U KNW, acha hua U left me..I am bad very bad, I didn't tell you the truth..actually mujhe tumhare Kareeb kabhi aana hi nahi chahiye tha....JAB HUM KAREEB NAHI THE HASTE THE....AUR JAB HUM KAREEB HUE BASSSSSSSS........udaaasss hi rahe!!!!"

Nikki stoppe d the car, they reached Abhi's house, Sitting in the car and listening to him she also become sad...thinking about what he is telling is ture or not, she waits a little while and said" Jab hum saath nahi the, haste the par KHUSH nahi the, Jab hum saath hue tab udaass the par Khush the".

He looks at her and thought whatever she said is true than why she left, he didn't speak anything. He was sad but brings a little smile on his face , looked outside and said " Ghar aagaya".

They entered into the house...

to be continued......

Nikki follow him while entering...he manage to balance himself and directly entered in his room whereas nikki closes the door and stands there, resting her back on the door and feeling sad, her heart fills up.......but she is not ready to drop tears from her eyes.

On the other hand Abhi in his room lying on his bed..he is also in same condition as Nikki.

Both knows now that they have leave each other once again...BUT they don't want to.
Abhi get up and tries to sit while nikki enters in his room and sits beside him...

SUDDEN SILENCE breaks in the room.. few moment later they both looked each other
Abhi expressing her through his eyes that now don't leave him and Nikki wanted the same..Before she speaks, abhi trying to appear sleepy and slowly and slowly bending on to her and put his head on her lap....Nikki does not know what to say, what to do now..?? she accidentally touches his wound, he breaks "AAHHH!!" Niki hurriedly replys "Sorry".

She put her hand on his head immediately and he again closes his eyes and went to sleep....Nikki keep looking at him, does not even roll her eyes and there Abhi feeling happy that he succeeds in stopping her......he put his head on her lap before she spoke anything and entwines his lower hand's finger into hers.

Nikki felt complete at this moment NOW and brings a smile, placed her head onto the wall back her and took a deep breath...AS IF SHE WAS WAITING FOR THIS MOMENT TO HAPPEN TO HER WHICH MAKE HER FEEL COMPLETE.

AND THEY BOTH WENT TO SLEEP HAPPILY.😊

Next morning, abhi wake up before nikki, holding his head as feeling little pain and rolling up his shirt to see if bandage is still there on the right place...and then loked towards Nikki and brings a smile...reaches closer to her face and whispers "You didn't leave me." Places her on the bed so that she could now sleep well and comfrotably. He straight away went to take the bath, NIKKI IS STILL SLEEPING...

To be continued....


Nikki woke up and looked around, found no one. She remembered that abhi was sleeping on her lap and thinks where is he now....she saw some bandage on the bed and a shirt, she guessed it " he must be taking bath". at the moment Abhi comes out of the bathroom and was feeling pain around his wound, nikki saw and hurriedly reach towards him.

Nikki got nervous and was feeling EVERY BIT OF HIS PAIN and said " Tum thodi der ruk nahi sakte the, I would have helped you..Tum bhi na..!!!"
" N..N..Nikki tum jao...waise bhi tum kal raat so nahi paayi" he tells her with pain in his VOICE. This pain was more the cause of loosing his love once again than just being hurt on the back...Nikki getting angry replied " sone tumne mujhe nahi diya aur waise bhi main yahan apni marzi aayi thi tumhari nahi, so I will leave when I want to."

Abhi tries to look her but she turns his head so that he couldn't move and have his bandages properly....
but he said " MAINE..???"

"Aur nahi to kya..tumhi to kal raat...." nikki just stopped from telling and just nervously but in anger keep on dressing him. abhi holds her hand tightly, turn towards her and asked with heavy voice " kal raat kya...????"
" Kuch nahi...kal raat kuch nahi.!!!" nikki lowering her eyes.. continues " mujhe dressing karne do.."
" Kyun..??? " he questions her and In hopes that this time......

" kyunki tumhe dard ho raha hai'..she becomes emotional and her tears are about to fall..

" TO....????" he question her again..

Niki shouted and this time just couldn't stop her tears to roll down from her eyes..." KYUNKI MUJHE BHI DARD HO RAHA HAI"

They both looked each other with PAIN in their eyes.
Nikki bends herself towards him so that she could put around the bandage removing her eyes from his. she ties the knot and he kissed her forehead...She immediately hugged him and he tighten his grip around her waist...

PYAR KA IZHAAR HO GAYA...

And they live happily everafter..!!!!šŸ˜‰




Edited by ratika89 - 15 years ago
Annu. thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
Good ratika u pasted the scene here do continue ur scene .
Ivy9 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago

very nice and emotional scene Ratika! can't wait for the next part!

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Posted: 15 years ago
Scene updated...remember this time the text of color is BLACK..
Thank you everyone for liking it....šŸ¤—
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Posted: 15 years ago
ratika, very emotional part.. very nice.. continue soon :)
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Hey Ratika, Very sweet and emotional scene.... do continue..

Mich
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Posted: 15 years ago
Wow mich part 7 is lovely
specially when Mushki says start sing rain song and abhi replies lets order food and have picnic and atul is like good idea .šŸ˜†
Loved when abhi bend towards niki while asking person for another route,and when they r in building and niki shout after looking down and hold abhi hand 😳 Also when niki eyes r with tears and she wanted to hug abhi after abhi saved armaan.

The kitchen scene was lovely i can imagine niki blushing when abhi was giving her noodles packet and the way they were romancing in kitchen and niki caring about abhi being hurt.😳
Lovely scene dear😳


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Posted: 15 years ago
oh mich lovely scene 2 hot guys shirtless is definately a treat to watch and read šŸ˜†
the kitchen part had to be my best part ,i am damn sure abhi's even a slight touch would make nikki weak in her knees
but was sad he went away early in the morning ,anyways the worlds a small place they will surely meet again
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Posted: 15 years ago

loved both ur parts Mich and Ratika! Thanx!

And Mich thanx especially for the part where they were romancing in the kitchen and get caught by Ridz! Loved it!

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Posted: 15 years ago
Aww Part 7 was too cute !!!
Loved it !!

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