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Kashish

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Posted: 16 years ago

hey visma....jst read the whole story! really interesting concept and excelent protrayal of the characters! you hve dne a great job! loved the story from start to end! keep up the good work! =D

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missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

Hiya Visma

Awesome part

Bechari Bani being left clueless

But I love how the kids are beginning to bond with Jai

And love the subplot with their teenage love lives and sibling squabbles

Cant wait to read the next part

Love TJ

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missindia26

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Posted: 16 years ago

Heya Visma

Loved the last part

Though it was all very fast, a very cute ending

Thankfully it was all happy

Aw love that they had 3 more cildren. Diya especially is so sweet

And it was nice to see the relationships Jai formed with Ami and Shaun, I like how it is now Dad instead of Mr Walia

And at last Bani was happy

The last line was lovely - "time and family changed him"

Really enjoyed reading your FF

Do write more when you can

Love TJ

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