My ff *Last Preparations 1* - page 82 - Page 68

Originally posted by: *Nishi*

Archanaaaaa Nishhhhhh!! 😃😃

see I read😃yaaaa! 😭🤗dont think im so weak... i posted the crying emoticone coz of the song tune... 😛 inn lamhon ki daman mein... no idea of why i didnt delete it yet... 😕😳

actually only 5 parts....😆 I will try to read more over the weekened well thats fine 😃

But wooow😲 shabash archu👏👏 wonderful writing. Thats one thing I knew before I started reading. aw hows so? 😳 I knew that if it was written by u it will be nice FF😊 I really really loved it yaar!! So funny and original. so lovely😳 thanksss!!! 😃🤗 and so cute tooo... aww veer upset for his ladoos😳 yep, at that moment he was more chilsidsh ya.. a reader thought that in the second part (mohinis entry, they were kidoos still...😆😳) i did that to hinna one time... she said i was so greedy.. out of all the things i wanted in india i told asma to bring me ladoos🤣 whos asma Nish? 😛 but yeeh... laddoos is indeed worth of it! and bhindis, and son papdi or sumthng... and jalebi...! and besides all the clothes and all! 😃 well, i wud have asked for clothes u know... 😛😳😆

but anyways, to the ff.. i loved everything yaar. I cant wait to read more later too... but my sis isnt letting me on the lappy😡 will have to go to the library or something am not sure😆

aw! u liked it!! 😃

but i was so shockeddd😲 mera archana.... archana😲 the one girl who writes whole essays just commenting on someones FF writes short lil updats haan🤣🤣🤣 seriously u write so much its like telling ur whole life🤣 but its not a bad thing. u know i like the long comments😃

🤣my lifee uh!! 🤣.... lol i will try to control ya, ok? well... i wont start telling my experiences and all in the fic na?... well, u know, i write every scene like 2-3 times.. 😊😆, in that i correct, make it shorter, delete.. etc..

and more important, i know that generally, ppls like long long comments on their fic, even when they are not directly related to them.. 😆😛 and i too know that a long part can be perjudicial for the fic... the readers and the writer.. 😛 so i always update short, and always read short parts fics, even though i wud like to read many other fics, but they end to be too long, and i cant afford it for sum or other reason.. 😕😊

its actually more easier for me to read FF's when they are medium size updat u know😆 when its really long and i really have no interest its hard to read na. and thats one thing, it will take me some time to read this archu. its so hard for me to read stories in hindi yaar😭 my hindi isnt even good now... but its ok i really want to keep reading this so i will keep tryng😃 i think this is actually helping my hindi too..

lol... 😆 just watch hindi serials, it will help ur hindi a lot! 😃 for me, its also hard, especially when ppl narrate in hindi! i just left it.. kya karoon, its not my fault na...

try to read fics, the first thing when u come to IF, u have more concentration power... otherwise after 2-3 hours on net u actually dont feel like reading anything longer than 2 paragraphs..

hey u mentioned researching for this ff? you actually research😲 wow thats great😃👏 but have to ask u... is this normal hindi? like modern? or is it old hindi... like the kind they actually spoke back then? thats really good if it is.. its more realistic😉 i loved india back then tooooo😲 i love ancient india like that.. beautiful palaces and everythingggggg😳 oh yeah and are these same characters in the FF in the show? Cuz i want to watch a few episodes to see what its like. and the characters too. it will help me picture the sotry better😊

yayaaaaaa!! u love India, and in that century too! 😃 then u have to read Samyukta! 😃 i wil give u the link and the description to convice u in other comment, here only. 😊

i search, but i do it for english even! 😆😃... and for hindi, i have no idea if this is the same hindi as it used to be in that century, i think no... 😊 i just decided to put the dialogues in hindi coz it wud make this more realistic, nothing else.. 😛 and the hindi i know.. its really poor, i cant talk in hindi u know.. at home we speak sindhi and spanish, well, we speak a remix of three languages 😃😆😆

no, well yes, everyone is the same in the serial, except Mohini and Prem. 😊 Mohini was a desire of mine, i actually wanted (want) to have brothers, especially bros like DV 😳 so i sketched a girl like her 😃 and then, the sudden idea of a... wait... u have read only till chap. 5 na? Prem isnt there yet... uhm... nothing nothing just keep reading 😊😃😆

yes i think u will have to watch the show to understand my story... i never thought this fic wud go out from DV forum u know.. thats why didnt think of efforting in decribe the characters or anything..

and thats good idea too... think of nice ending and then write a new one. i love this sotry already yaar😃 i really cant wait to read more😳 keep up the wonderful work👏

i have already thought about two possibles endings 😊 but there is a big number of chapters before the ending u know... i am yet to start wid both love stories...

Originally posted by: *Nishi*

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awwww i knew it😃 dharam has his princess and veer has his... somethin😲 woohoo he is is smart.. showing her face and for shera.. its okay she will get over it 😆😆 yeah she mde him mad 😡 she will get from him..😡😆