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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

.Precap. ..hmmm chalo padhte hai..abhiiii....

The prince was sitted alone in front of an empty ocre scroll, while the night developed calmly. hai ram..yeh kaun,..veer jaisa toofan toh nahi ho sakta..its so ironic na..Veer ke saath shanti..calm n kl..I guess dharam...

Not knowing what to write, he gets up and commences to walk slowly around the room, when he notices the spectacular moon through his window. He goes close to it and recalls the most singular night he had ever spent, in wich she won over him. hmmm..wooohoooooo..dharam recallin hi first romantic night wiv sia..ayyeee hayyyeeeee...bechara still confused on what to write..Yahi hota hai..mumma's gd boy n Lover..?????? bechari sia..vaise yahi hota hai..zindagi bhar mumma's boy..toh baad men love lyf problematic hi hoti hai..bechara...Poor D

Suddently, just when he is about to get some inspiration for his letter, the door crashes. heheeeeeeee...lollll...i CRACKED UP THE MOMENT I read tis..bechara..finally..FINALLY jab bichare mumma's boy ..humare pyaare sankari Dharam ko kuch samajh aa raha tha..tabhi..humein nahi lagta yeh letter kabhi pohochega sia ko..abhi toh inspiration ai thi..ki voh bhi chali gayi..hai allah..kya hoga inki Love story ka...???😆🤣

"Dharam!!" Mohini shouts entering in.

Alarmed, he turns to see, an interesting scene. hmmmmmm kahi chuhe billi ka khel toh nahi chal raha..hmmm..dekhna padega...

Vah archu ji..VAHHHHH...kya baat hai...I seriously split up...gosh..bechara Dharam..hmm n what's tis inspiring scene..Kya hai bhai......
woooohoooooooo archu gazab..
hmm now cont fast..plzzzzzzz i can't wait nymre....
Love ya loads baby......t.cccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: cute_madhu

Vah archu ji..VAHHHHH...kya baat hai...I seriously split up...gosh..bechara Dharam..hmm n what's tis inspiring scene..Kya hai bhai......
😳 thanks for ur complis dear. 😃.
by inspiring scene, are u referring to the night he was remembering? if yes, then it was when they got locked in his bedroom. 😛 chapters name is door locked i guess.
woooohoooooooo archu gazab..
hmm now cont fast..plzzzzzzz i can't wait nymre....
yes, will continue fast, just trying to make the chapter longer. 😛
Love ya loads baby......t.cccccc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Omggg!!! full edit even on chote se precap!!!
🤗🤗🤗
muaaaaahhh!! darling i love you!!

Originally posted by: hiri

wow gr8 loved the precap

thanks a lot Esha, dear. 😃
Edited by Girl_2007 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

thanks a lot 😃
well, im thinking of good scenes for them, i alwas love to write veer and shera scenes.. but i dont know if ppl wud like them, anyways, one reason of the yatra is their meetings. 😛

well if u wont write ur beauty ideas, u wont know how they are, good or bad, right😉.......besides as long as u write with ur inspiration, veera fans will read it atleast I will so dont worry and go all out.......thats wht I-F FF section is all about, right😃.......and yuh if u r confused, do ask.......anyone or me😳......will gladly help😉
anyways abou the precap...........😲u left me speechless, it was mysterius and m very curious as to wht will happen and yuh plzz do updt soon since its break...........PM me wen u do updt😃
ciao
Jiya
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: act12

well if u wont write ur beauty ideas, u wont know how they are, good or bad, right😉.......besides as long as u write with ur inspiration, veera fans will read it atleast I will so dont worry and go all out.......thats wht I-F FF section is all about, right😃.......and yuh if u r confused, do ask.......anyone or me😳......will gladly help😉
thats so sweet of you! 😳
yup, i wont know the result until i try. but.. its difficult... 😕 coz im the type of person who always likes to predict the consequences of wat i do and wat i dont do.. means, that i think too much even when its not needed. 😕😆
anyways, will ask u for sure when i write those scenes, for now, im only thinking on how sia will reach to the yatra. 🥱😆
anyways abou the precap...........😲u left me speechless, it was mysterius and m very curious as to wht will happen and yuh plzz do updt soon since its break...........PM me wen u do updt😃
thank u Jiya, 😃 its a pleasure to know that it was mysterious enough. 😆, thats the reason of the precaps.. to intrigue ppl. 😳 😛
will update between today and tomorrow. 😊
ciao
Jiya

thanks for commenting, 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

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Omggg!!! full edit even on chote se precap!!! Yes that's mah style..archu..well actually I cudn't resist the urge to give full edit..I seriously split up readin Dharams plight..yaad aya nahi..kuch likhne ka socha nahi..ki CrasHHH...lollll
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muaaaaahhh!! darling i love you!! Well I love u tooooooooooooo baby....
Love ya loads archu..update supersn....t.cc
-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago

Writers note:

hi all! Just updated another bit of the chapter (page 82), i know, i told that i wud post a huge update by weekend, but it cudnt be possible, im sorry. Anyways, some readers allready know me.. and my careless behaviour on this matter of the fic. As its written there, its in progress, it means, that i will be posting this chapter scene by scene, hopefully, on Tuesday, ull will have the whole chapter posted finally, its a long one btw. As i might have said, you can comment now or after the whole chap. is posted, as per ur wishes, i wont mind.
One more thing about wich i wud like to tell, i have choosen the name "Kahaniyaa" for this story, wanted to know ur opinions, before editing the title.
Thanks.
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey archu it 's ok and i think the title is perfect it's outstanding kahaniya
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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: hiri

hey archu it 's ok and i think the title is perfect it's outstanding kahaniya

its ok if its ok, but have u readed the update? 😕😛..
and thanks a lot dear, for ur opinion about the title. 😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey archu
read the part-was waiting for u to update
sorry im not able to give a long comment as im busy
but i realli enjoyed reading the second part of the chapter
ur a fantastic writer-keep it up
btw the name perfectly suits ur fic

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