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Archana

@Girl_2007

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Posted: 16 years ago

#651

Originally posted by: **Shona**
hey archu
read the part-was waiting for u to update

sorry im not able to give a long comment as im busy

but i realli enjoyed reading the second part of the chapter

ur a fantastic writer-keep it up

btw the name perfectly suits ur fic

thanks Shona. 😃, well its the complete 1st part of the chapter. 😛.

its ok, u dont need to give me a long comment, thanks for ur opinion about the title, will keep it in mind. 😃

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jiya

@act12

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Posted: 16 years ago

#652

Again a very interesting part.......short tho but interesting......mmmm SIya going to Yatra......mmmm looking forward to it, atleast u r giving DS scenes, well i jus hope u give VS scenes soon.....Plz PM me again with the update

Ciao

Jiya

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shikhar agarwal

@Shikhoo

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Posted: 16 years ago

#653

Originally posted by: Girl_2007
.Precap.

The prince was sitted alone in front of an empty ocre scroll, while the night developed calmly.

Not knowing what to write, he gets up and commences to walk slowly around the room, when he notices the spectacular moon through his window. He goes close to it and recalls the most singular night he had ever spent, in wich she won over him.

Suddently, just when he is about to get some inspiration for his letter, the door crashes.

"Dharam!!" Mohini shouts entering in.

Alarmed, he turns to see, an interesting scene.

koi pls..mere dharam ko akele jhodo...

VO JAB SOCHTA HAI NA.....

BHAUT KHOBSOORAT SOCHTA HAI.........

oh behen ki entry.......to theek hai.....

kaam chal jayega !!!!!!!!!😳

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Archana

@Girl_2007

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Posted: 16 years ago

#654

Originally posted by: act12
Again a very interesting part thanks 😛.......short tho but interesting 😲 short!! ok... will try to make next part even longer.. 😆😛 ......mmmm SIya going to Yatra......mmmm looking forward to it,thanks..😳 atleast u r giving DS scenes, well, u can find DS scenes in other ffs too. like Kirus. well i jus hope u give VS scenes soon.....yes, but after yatra.. sorry.. Plz PM me again with the update of course, ur among the less persons who comment on my fic. 😆🥱
Ciao

Jiya

thanks for commenting. 😃

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Archana

@Girl_2007

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Posted: 16 years ago

#655

Originally posted by: generator

koi pls..mere dharam ko akele jhodo...

VO JAB SOCHTA HAI NA.....

BHAUT KHOBSOORAT SOCHTA HAI.........

oh behen ki entry.......to theek hai.....

kaam chal jayega !!!!!!!!!😳

aaw! thanku for ur comment on my precap....

but have to tell, that the part is allready posted!!!!!!!!! 😡 didnt u bother to read the title or wat?

😆😆😆 anyways, ur wish bro...

well, yes, dharam is a sensible man, hes able for sure to think beautiful things.. but this was his first ever letter to a girl 😛

behen ki entry?... uhm... not only behen 😆 but poori gang ki entry... read the chapter quick! ppl say that its short, so it wont take much time from my busy bhaiya. 😃

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Ams

@CutieA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#656

aww Archu huni...i simply loved part 1...the way u described n narrated...im gona mish these bits wid Mohini not there....so finally...lol...Dharam wrote a leeter for his beloved...bles...so shweet! mwah thanks huni xxx

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Ams

@CutieA

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Posted: 16 years ago

#657

thats a prefect name for ur FF huni....superb xxx

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Archana

@Girl_2007

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Posted: 16 years ago

#658

Originally posted by: CutieA
aww Archu huni...i simply loved part 1...the way u described n narrated...im gona mish these bits wid Mohini not there....so finally...lol...Dharam wrote a leeter for his beloved...bles...so shweet! mwah thanks huni xxx

thanks!! thanks a lot 😃; it took me really long to write the scene of dharams chamber. 😛, had to be a bit different, as mohinis going and all.. 😛 but well, shes still there for atleast a couple of scenes in the yatra.

yes yes, dharam wrote a letter. 😆 😳

thanks to u Amsie, 🤗

im glad that u noticed the efforts while describing and narrating. 🤗

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thats a prefect name for ur FF huni....superb xxx[/quote]

thanku!! 😃