My ff *Last Preparations 1* - page 82 - Page 64

Originally posted by: cute_madhu

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Hailya meri archu ek writer hai..

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uhm.. haan.. or no.. well im just learning darling.. 😛

are u really so much surprised?? 😆😆

uhuu hunnn...u didn't temme b4..

aaaaww!! well, i didnt tell u before bcz i wast updating na? 😛 i just wrote after soooo much time on saturday i think

gosh u such a brilliant writer...⭐️

really?? thanksss!! 🤗

jus loved most of the prts...excellent...beautifully written..loved prem mohini scenes too...Dharam sia's were gd..now don't tink I read all the prts..like it was a hush hurry while findin VS scenes....😳

thank u a lot!! 🤗 😆.. uhm.. vs scenes? so sweet!! 😳 glad u liked them, and glad u liked prem-mohini, u know, i didnt expect them to be here 😕 😆

will give a bbbbbbbbbbioiiiiiiiiggggggggggg compli ltr...like after I read all prts n mind u..mera big yani vv vry vry vry bigg..I'd give ya full edits for each prt n mah feelins too...😳😳 Hpe u don't get boreddd😉😉😉

yyyyyaaaaaaaaaaaaayyyy!!! 🥳 really!! woow!! muahh!! bored!!?? do u think i will get any chance to get bored?? [uhmm.. does that make any sense??] anyways, no darling, i love to read comments, long long comments 😃😳, of course jaan, only when u are able to 😛

Gosh I jus read what u wrote abt passionate scenes when I checked the latest update for any VS scenes..hmmm

gosh..mera kya hoga,..I too will hav to ask my readers abt their opinions on Passionate scenes..haila story line..😲

gosh..

the comment wala? well, it started actually bcz of prem mohini, then i asked if she wud mind seeing vs like that and she told that nop, she wud like reading about them. 😊

Ajj raat humein neend 🥱nahi ayegi..kyunki..kyunki..I'll hav to think of sum sensible friendship wala inncocent, sweet scenes b4 passionate ones...😭😭😭

aww! darling, dont worry, anyways, i have pmed u about this thing 😊

hmmmmmmmmm..oye hoyeee......

gosh now me gettin confused as usual.😕.jus hpe u like VS meetin in mah FF...😕

sure, 😃 i will surely surely likeem, i will love them! 😍

well buh in U'r FF..VS mmeeting was..jus too brill..😉

thanks!!

it was sooooo sooooooo fresh..like so gd..I wud hav wanted it mre passionate..buh then they start fightin...so how can it be like mre than what it was..I loved it..like when he says muuh dikhao..hmmm..em inspired..it was one of the best meetin scenes of VeEra till date..I truly loved it...👏

really!! 😳 aw im so gladenned!! well, yeah, it starts fighting, but just like ahm.. its not a real fight, they just want to show their skills, na, actually hes getting bored and sees her, but doesnt know that shes a girl, so he asks her for a muqabla, and she accepts just to end it soon.. but then they get lost somewhere.. and all that things 😆 😛

n wow..Veer kl n shera confused..buh then nturally sympathy toh atti hai..he too was hngry na...I loved the way he slept wiv the anklet..n the line

dill mein likhne ke liye koi naam toh batakar jati...

woooowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

that was jus..wowwwwwwwwww...gosh such a heart throbbing dia..like I cud feel the passion..like it was used after first meetin..n sumtimes..u know tis is the person..or u feel like romantic unintentioanlly in front of sumone...well guess the same wiv veer...

em in love wiv that dia..its jus fab..fantastic..superb dia.....👍🏼

thankss!!! thanks a lot!! 😳

yeah, actually shera is not bad at heart, she is actually softened bcz she had someone in her life na? she had a brother who cared for her, and was cared by her, so, she is not that cold and cruel, like the serials shera was supposed to be. 😛 thats why, in the fruit seller incident, she was looking for a coin, only when she realized that she hasnt got, she went to steal it. 😛

aaand veer... he slept unknowingly... and kher.. u read all parts and just u will get to know 😛 coz me really bad at explaining anything 😆😛

and the line!! my my! only 2 or 3 readers noticed it.. and wow! just loads of months later, u get to read that part by chance, and u notice it!! wow! my my my!! and u got whatever i wud have wanted to say! 😳 exactly Madhu, wat u writted is exactly wat i wanted to express 😳 i knew that it was a real and true feeling, but i was doubting, but now im completely sure, its a real feeling 😛

hmmm..waitin for yatra eagerly..I guess VS wud meet their....

yup, yatra is an excuse for them 4 to meet. 😛

n then passionate scenes...😛

yeah

now again i hav tension.........goshhhhhhhhh

lol why so?

Chalo nyways..me bac to readin....😆lolzzzz....can't be serious..will think of a gd storyline for VS at night😆

sure dear, but read my pm. 😛

Love ya loads archu baby.......t.ccccccccc

-Ur's Ever Madhu😳

Originally posted by: CutieA

hehehe....yays! mwah i cnt wait huni xxxxxxxx

Originally posted by: act12

cool update, though short but nice, anyways wy arent u doing veera ......m eagerly waitin for more of their scenes so plzz do cont. soon

Originally posted by: ashah03

heyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy

i just read this part now... it is awesome..........

pls pls plsssssssssssssssssssss update soon...................................

love ya loadssssssss...............

update soon

Originally posted by: Girl_2007

😆😳 wat happened?? 😛