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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: leaves45

Wow mich I am crazy busy these days but stil came on to IF to see if u had a new scene up and viola!, here it is.....................so cute and believable, I just pictured it all in my head, which means u r a brilliant writer..........I am sending u hugs for making my day.




OMG leaves I have been missing you so much......Long time not seen a post from you....I am so so happy to see this post from you..... You've made my day with your lovely words ! Thanks so much and special thanks for those lovely hugs which I fully reciprocate 🤗 🤗 🤗

thanks once again


@ Sonali, Thanks so much, glad you liked the scene.. 🤗 🤗

Mich
Edited by mich09 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
hey guys.................some one post some new scene na............mich y dont u ???
waiting desparately
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Posted: 16 years ago

**Scenes written by mich09**

SCENE 6




Well Vaishnavi, I don't have a romantic scene of AN but intstead I was just picturising this girlie scene between Riddhima & Nikki who are frustrated with the respective men they love.... Riddhima thinks Armaan is faking his memory loss while because of SLD's interference things are still pretty cold between AN

Nikki has recovered from her toe fracture and is back at Sanjeevani. Sitting in the locker room, she is thinking about Abhi and wondering how to mend things between them when Riddhima enters grumbling "Stupid, Idiot, Jaan bhujkar yeh sab kar raha hai" Nikki comes out of her reverie and looks at Riddhima who is livid so Nikki asks her what happened.. Ridz says "this Armaan, he is driving me mad... I know he is just pretending that he has lost his memory. He is just doing it all to irritate me ! I tell you these men na would do anything for attention !" Nikki joins in saying " I completely agree with you ! They are such pain ! Look at Abhi, zara sa kuch ho jaye aur gussa naak pe chad jaata hai" Ridz continues says "I feel like taking something and banging on his head, perhaps then he'll remember he has a memory. !" she gestures as if she would wring Armaan's neck. Nikki says "I feel like doing the same to Abhi, perhaps then his gussa will come out of his nose !" Frustrated both end up looking at each other and then after a good few seconds they burst out laughing at their ranting. After some time with a crestfallen face Ridz says "Dekho na Nikki, kaisa satata hai !" Nikki also says sadly "haan, Abhi bhi na kitna tang karta hai. Then looking heaven wards she calls out loudly "Duniya mein ladkon ki kami thi kya jo tumne mujhe us akkadu se pyar karvaya!". She throws her hands up in frustration. Suddenly with a twinkle in her eyes Ridz looks at Nikki and says slowly "Waise dekha jaaye Nikki, tumhare liye Abhimanyu se acha ladka nahin mil sakta. Nikki looks at Riddhima in annoyance and says "Riddhima tum meri dost ho ya uski jo uski taarif kar rahi ho " With a smile Ridz says "woh kya hain na tumhe sambhalne ki kisi ki bas mein nahin. hai. ......sirf Abhimanyu teek se jaanta hai tumhe kaisa handle karna. She breaks into a wide grin.... Nikki's eyes pop open wide as she mouths a shocked "AAHH" . She lets out aloud Rid.....dhi.....maaaaaaa. Ruk main tumhe dikhati hoon she starts chasing Ridz around the bench and Riddhima is laughing as she dodges her..........After managing to dodge Nikki round the benches for a few rounds Riddhima runs out of the locker room followed by Nikki who continues chasing... As Nikki runs out of the locker room she bangs straight into someone who was passing by. The arms steading her makes her realise its Abhi. Ridz turns around as she hears a clash and can't help but smile seeing both Nikki and Abhi drowning into each other's eyes. Suddenly Abhi realises many pairs of eyes are staring at them and he straightens up and moves away. Looking sternly at Riddhima who is trying to hide a smile and then at Nikita he says "Dr. Riddhima, Dr. Nikita kya tum dono ko yaad dilana hoga ke ye hospital hai playground nahin !" Redfaced, Nikita and Ridz avoid looking at him and look downwards. Nikita says a soft "Sorry' looking nervously yet fondly at him followed by Riddima's "Sorry Dr. Modi !" Abhimanyu looks at both of them and then firmly says "Get back to work both of you ! Right now!. Ridz & Nikki shake their heads in agreement and turning their backs to him slowly walk away... Having walked a few steps they look slyly at each other, wink and then try to stifle their giggles while the reason for their chase, keeps watching them completely baffled..... 😆 😆 😆

Mich



Edited by mich09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
love your scene Michelle it was cute and sweet! also very insightful of Riddhima to point out only Abhimanyu Modi can handle Nikita!
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Posted: 16 years ago
Michelle read all your scenes and love them
your so talented
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Posted: 16 years ago
Hey Guys!!! This is my 1st Ever Attempt 2 a Scene...I've Posted it on the the AN FC & I thought I'd post it here also...

Btw...Please exuse my hindi if its not right... 😳 😳

This scene is meant to be after Nikki & SLD finish speaking to Abhi on the phone [16th July, 09]... ENJOY!!! & Plzzz Do feedback!!

'Uh, yeh Susu Ji Nikkita Ki Halat Aur Bigardegi…Aur Waise Bhi, Uski Tabiyaat Kuch Theek Nahin Hai.' Abhimanyu sighed to himself after he putting the phone down. He felt a lot better speaking to Nikita, but at the same time felt bad for her after trapping her with SLD…He decided to call her back. 'Nikki…please phone utao' he said tapping his desk desperately.

Nikki looked at her phone half lying on her bed 'I'm gonna kill him' she said to herself. Luckily SLD wasn't around. She has informed Nikita that she had left some of her belongings at home, so she had gone to fetch them. 'Main Nahin Utane Wali Dr Abhimanyu Modi' She said with a smirk. But then, all the times she spent with him raced through her mind. The fights, the hugs, and all the other priceless moments. This compelled her to press the answer key on her phone and take the phone to her ear. She didn't say a word. She didn't know why but tears filled up in her eyes. They suddenly prickled down her cheeks. 'Nikki' Abhimanyu said waiting for a reply. As she heard her name, she fluttered her eyes shut. 'Im Sorry Nikki' he said with a sad look. He waited for her to say something as she sniffed. Pressing the wrong key on the phone, thinking she had ended the call she started crying aloud. 'Kyun?' she said 'Hamesha Meri Waje Sai Logo Ko Kyun Takleef Hoti Hai? Kyun Maine Kuch Nahin Bhola Us Raat? Kyun Mein Abhi Ki Achayi Armaan Ke Samne Nahin La Payi. Kyun Mein Nahin Bata Payi Ki Abhi Ne Mera Saath Hamesha Diya Hai, Mera Khyal Hamesha Raka Hai? Kyun??' She sobbed. She paused. 'Nahin. Ab Aur Nahin!'

On the other hand Abhimanyu hearing this was shocked. 'Nikki! Meri Baat Suno….Nikita!' he said.

Nikita got up from her bed and stood up unsteadily. She reached for her crutches, but failed to do so and stumbled and ended up on the floor. She reached for support and only found the table beside her bed to lean on. The flowerpot on the table fell with a crash onto the floor and partly hit Nikita's hand. The little pieces dug into her skin as she screamed with pain.

Meanwhile, Abhimanyu stood up and shouted 'Nikki!' Keeping the phone to his ear, he hurried out of Sanjeevani and into his car. 'Nikki, Humhe Kuch Nahin Hoga, Mein Araha Hoon, Nikki, Meri baat Suno, Nikki!!' He cried while he feeling like a knife was stabbing at his heart.

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'Nikki' he shouted as he saw the main door open. Puzzled he hurried inside, up the stairs and into Nikita's room. Staring at her sitting on the floor at the edge of her bed she was howling with pain. He ran towards her. Hugging her like crazy he said, 'Nikki, tum theek ho? Tumne to Mujhe daaradiya tha!' He carried on hugging her holding her tightly, not wanting to let her go. Not aware of her hand 'Ugh, Abhi, Mera Haath, Kuch Karo, Bohot Dard Ho Raha Hai' She cried letting go of him. He realized and the guilt of not being careful hit him. He held her other hand, 'Niki, Dekho Meri Taraf.' He said. She avoided looking into his electrocuting eyes. 'U, Meri Taraf Dekho' he said softly. Surprised by Abhi's softness, Nikita looked him in the eyes. 'Mein tumhe kuch nahin hone dunga, I Promise.' He said still holding her one hand and and cupping her check with the other. He stood up, picked her up letting her blooded hand touch his chest. She stared at him while he was carrying her onto the bed. While placing her gently down he stared at her as she stared back. He moved a strand of her hair seeing that it was disturbing her. She felt his touch on her bear back and she blushed away forgetting the pain on her hand. He looked away and looking at the floor he said, 'Mein first aid box lekar Aata hoon' and with that he went to fetch it. She lay there staring at her hand thinking how on earth he knew that she was hurt.

Soon he came back with the first aid box and sat near her. Neither said a word. She stared at him while he opened the box. He took her hand and started wiping the blood gently off her hand. 'Ouch!' Nikita said and clutching onto his shirt. Abhimanyu swallowed 'Nikki, aake band karo aur mera haath pakro. Aur dekna, you wont feel anything.' He said sympathetically. 'Tum jaanti ho ki mujhe kaise pata?' he said smiling. 'Kyunki mujhe jab chot laga tha, thab tumne mera haath pakra tha…yaad hai?' he asked. They stared at each other, remembering the night after Armaan & Abhi's boxing match. How Nikita had taken care of Abhi and how they shared eyelocks. Coming out of the memories, Nikita smiled and closed her eyes. She felt Abhi Take her hand and entwine it with his. 'Dekha? All done!' he said smiling. She opened her eyes again letting tears fall down her cheeks. Abhi stared at her and bent down kissing the tears off her cheeks. 'Hey' He whispered into her ear. 'Kya Hua?' he said still with his fingers entwined with hers. She fell into his arms and hugged him tightly. He hugged her back tighter than ever, firmly holding her waist. 'Shistar Ji!!' Abhimanyu and Nikita let go of each other as they heard SLD downstairs. Abhimanyu sighed and stood up as SLD walked in. 'Hayye, Dr Abhimanyu Jii..Aap?'


Please Tell Me How I Did...So I Can Improve If You Guys Want Me 2 Do Anova 1 😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
@lovebapu18...thanks!! 😉

Hey Guys...i also 4got 2 add...if any1 wants to request specific scenes...i dnt mynd...u c cuz serials are taking over my holiday lyf! 😆!!

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Edited by bengiangel2k8 - 16 years ago
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I thought of this scene because its like one of my DREAM scenes…with one of my favourite couples…really hope u guys like it…pleaseee leave your critisms, suggestions and comments. 😳

'Yes!!!' Nikita thought. At last SLD was needed at Sanjeevani and she could rest in peace. Without any 'Shister Ji' activities or any 'Hayye' Lullabies…Nikita started to close her eyes when she heard a noise. Startled, she sat up and switched on her bed lamp. After a few seconds, it turned off. She struggled and somehow got to her crutches, this time succeeding. Afraid of the dark she tried the light switches like crazy, but none seemed to work. Then, she heard another noise. 'K..k…kaun?' she said clutching onto her crutches…'Kaun hai yahaan?' Walking backwards slowly, she tripped against something and let out a scream. She dropped her crutches, anxious. It took her a few seconds to realize that that something was in fact a someone. It was Abhimanyu. He carried on staring at her holding her up to stop her from falling. They shared a long eyelock before Nikita examined him closely before hugging him tightly. 'Abhi, tumne to mujhe daradiya tha! Agar Mein Girjati Toh?' She said still hugging him. It took Abhimanyu only a second to think before wrapping his arms around Nikita and rubbing his face near hers. Nikita's hands only wrapped more and more around Abhimanyu's neck. Abhimanyu, lost in her completely closed his eyes, never wanting to let her go. Meanwhile Nikita remembered who she was with and what he was capable of. She let go of him while Abhimanyu clung onto her. 'Nahin Abhi,…ye..yeh theek nahin hai' she said stammering. She turned her back towards him and looked down. Abhimanyu stared at her. She could feel him coming close to her as her heart skipped a beat. 'Kya?' He whispered into her ear, 'Kya theek nahin hai?' He slowly moved closer to her and softly took her hair in front of her, leaving her back empty. Her eyes fluttered shut as she swallowed hard not knowing what to do. 'Abhi…' She managed to say. Abhimanyu bent down, moving closer to her and placed a soft, tender kiss on her neck. Nikita turnt around fast, eyes closed and wrapped her arms around him once again. Abhimanyu smiled hearing Nikita breathing loud as he knew that she was feeling shy as ever now. 'Nikki' he whispered again. But Nikita broke in 'Abhi…mujhe mat chorna…mujhe aandere se bohot dar lagta hai' she muttered burying her face into his chest. Abhimanyu's smiled again.

A few seconds later though , the lights turned back on. Abhimanyu and Nikita straightened up, not knowing what to do or say. 'Tum andar kaise aaye?' Nikita blurted out, frowning. Although she knew she was pleased with what had just happened, she wanted to get rid of the awkwardness between them. 'Uh, wo mein kidki se aaya. Kyun…kyunki wo Suman Ji Mujhe aur tumhe aakela nahin chorti na?' he said with a little smile. Nikita blushed and looked away. A strand of Nikita's hair caught Abhimanyu's eye. He stepped forward wanting to move it away, which caused Nikita to step back. Abhimanyu once again stepped forward which caused Nikita to shy away and take another step back. This continued until there was no where Nikita could go. Behind her was an bare wall. She looked anywhere but into Abhimanyu's eyes. Abhimanyu stepped closer to her which made Nikita stiffen. Nikita closed her eyes as Abhimanyu lifted his hand to move the strand of hair. He brushed it away making sure there was not even an inch distance between them. Abhimanyu swallowed, reaching down for her hand interlinking it with his fingers. 'Nikita…'he whimpered. 'I…' Nikita softly placed her hand on the top of his lips, not letting him speak another word. They once again shared another eyelock. Nikita let her hand brush past his lips to his cheek, letting her feel that he was actually there. Abhimanyu closed his eyes, mesmerised by her touch. All of a sudden, Abhimanyu's phone rang. Startled, both of them let go of each other. Abhimanyu searched his pockets for his phone and picked it up. 'Dr Armaan' He sighed. 'Nikita, mujhe jaana hoga…'he said not wanting to leave her. 'Mat Jaao' she said holding him by the arm as he turned around, about to leave…

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Posted: 16 years ago
@mich
that was such a cute sccene.. loved the way ridz told niki that abhi is the only person who can handle her and then AN takrar :) they cant help meeting like that i guess :) wonderful job girl

@bengiangel2k8
Both the scenes were so good... romantic... amazing job.. hope to see many more :)

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Posted: 16 years ago
@Priyanka...Thank u...😳...but their not better than the ones i've read by u & Ivy...😆...

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