RISHTEY-FRIENDSHIP n LOVE epilogue page 199

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kalyani

@anasrashid_fan

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Posted: 16 years ago

yes dear ...............go ahead............i really liked all the character sketches that u described..............plz go ahead ..........we all will get new things to discuss.

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kalyani

@anasrashid_fan

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: veersherafan1
thanks Kalyani i'll continue

ur welcome dear..........go ahead.😃😳

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanks shona . Pls wait. I'll continue soon.

Tum sab log mujhe suggetion bhi de sekhte ho for improvement of my story.

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mehraan

@mehraan

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Posted: 16 years ago

wow dear..im sorry 2 comment it late...bt its nice 2 c a new ff!!!i like the charcater sketches...u can go ahead!

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 16 years ago

Thanks mehraan . It's ok. Take ur time. I updated 1st part. read it and comment it.😊

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393507

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Posted: 16 years ago

Originally posted by: veersherafan1
Thanks Rumi .Par tum log improvement ke liye suggetion bhi de shekete ho . Aur criticise bhi kar sak te ho and main apni story line ko improve karne kiye liye sochu.

ok lakiin u wrote it v. well toh saggu ki zaruraat neahi jab hogi tab de dange😉

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393507

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Posted: 16 years ago

woh intresing v. intresting😉

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kalyani

@anasrashid_fan

Dazzler

Posted: 16 years ago

Nice update..........precap seems quite interesting😃..............I liked that Rishi is sleeping under his bed😆😉.............haila pehli baar suna hain.........koi apne bed ke niche sota hain😆😉🤣