SS:Khwaish LAST PART 5/11 pg13 - Page 5

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi everyone...i just found out the links for my this short FF...this FF is very close to my heart...cuz its about GOLDEN TIME OF OUR BELOVED KS....
i dont like leaving things behind whith out finishing them...i dont know if any one likes this FF any more...but if you guys do then please let me now...i will continue and finish it soon....
Love
Mina A.K.A sonam
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hani it seems ki sirf tumhi or davia ko pasand hai or kisi ko bhi nahi....
agar pasand huti tu shayad woh comments karthi.....
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey i think u should cont..i liked the storyy and it was just getting to the good part...
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Posted: 16 years ago
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a very good ff i dnt think u should stop writin it plz continue soon

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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
hi ur ff is really awesome i jus read the whole thing rite now plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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thnx guys for liking it...
the bad thing is that most ppl view it but dont comment....and as writer i feel very low and i feel that ppl dont like it ...so it depends if ppl comment then i might update....
i really appreciate for the coments....i hope others comment too....
Mina
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hey sonam
will read ur ff in the evning
and will post the comments by tomorrow
god bless
*edited*
hey mina
gr88 story
loved it
read all the 4 arts in 1 go
plz dear cont ur story na
Edited by jeenal20 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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HI ppl thanx for the warm appreciation...its really encourging...i will hopefully try to update for you guys soon...thnax.....davs specially for you...thanx for the threat😳😳...
ch 6
The next day all the Walia's were ready to go for picnic in their farm house for the weekends. Everyone got in their cars...as usual jigz and roshani sat in Jai's car and like always roshani sat in the front with jai as much as jai hated it he cudnt said anything...they were waiting for bani to come...as bani came out wearing a nice comfy salwar kameez...next she was shocked to see roshani setting her place...she cast hatered glance at roshani then at jai....in response jai tried not to look at her and roshani grinned at her kooly....bani ended up setting next to jigz...which she hated...the whole ride was quiet for jb...bani keep giving him murderous looks and jai ignoring it....though the other two did not stop there bunters............

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Everyone got off from their cars and walked in the farm house...it is beautiful ....quiet small than WM though still it is beautiful...with the huge swimming pool inside the garden...the jhula in the garden too... it was picturesque view for bani and rano as it their first time seeing such beautiful bungalow...

They guys immediately throw their clothes out and jumped in the pool...the girls went in and viewed the house and then bani, massi and dadi went to kitchen to prepare some lunch for every one...dadi asked bani if she liked the bungalow...yes it really nice dadi...said bani...beta tum yaha pheli nahi ayethi kiya?...asked massi...woh nahi massi...kabhi time nahi mila isleye...said bani...massi thought jb must have been here before but no...yeh jai bhi na...humesha kaam...thought massi...

The girls got the food ready and went out to where they guys were...they set the table and got all the food out...they guys were still swimming more like playing with each...bani's attention caught jai only in his shorts and swimming away...he looked hot...bani hated the fact that roshani was staring at her husband...anger rose in banis eyes...how dare her looking at my husband...cursed bani under her breath......

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Bani is bani she is not gonna set queit and happly give her husband to a some sl*g...she has every right to keep her husband to herself...he is her husband only hers...they have taken saath vachans together...and promised to be with each other through thick and thin in every step of life now she cannot just back out of the promises that she took during their wedding...no matter what i will never give my husband to some stranger.....this is what i have now besides my sisters...but he is more important to me then my sisters....he is the one whom i will be living my life with...he is my husband may be not in true sense but still he means a lot to her...She nows what jigz and roshani's inttebntions are but she will never give up...she will fight to get her husband back at any cost...

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during lunch roshani keept on talking all along and played on...whenever jai got the chance to talk to bani then she wud come and take him with her away....they day went by...with everyone playing games, talking, swimming etc...massi observed jb weren't talking all day and she noticed that ther was a slight tention between her bahu and son...during dinner she made mental note to talk to bani...though she knew the reason.....all of them set together to watch a movie...bani borught warm coffee to everyone....as she approached jai with two mugs of coffee in her hand, jai moved slightly to give her some space to set next to him...they both sat there quite comfy....not talking to each other..

bani find the movie quite boring so she gently got up from her set and walked out to the garden...jai and massi notice this...they exchange glance and massi stood up and walked behind her....

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good or bad do leave comments....
Edited by SonamKHAN - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
hey mina gr88 part
loved it
wow so bani is now jealous of roshh
gr88 goin
i hope jai maofies her and
massi dose not give her some lecture
plz kick this roshni out of jbs life
plzzzzzzzz cont soon mina
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Posted: 16 years ago
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I remember this FF, but when was the last time you posted an update? I think I need to read all the updates before I leave comments on this part.......

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