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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey .......this is really nice ff ..........sorry to know about ur mamaji....may his soul rest in peace in heaven and guide you for years to come
Edited by nishiraju - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi Sonam

Very das to hear that your Mamaji passed away. My heartfelt condolences for your family and you.

Please don't worry about the updates. You take time and spend with your family. We will read the updates later.

Regards

Sangita
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hi sonam ... sorry to hear about ur uncle... may Allah bless his soul... and don't worry about update ... do them when ur free...

Take care and have a safe journey...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Thank You so much for all your wonderful comments…it really means to me a lot…I would really like to reply to each on of you but kya karo yaar I don't have internet at home and I don't get enough free time in school…but plz do comment or ha I'm really sorry for not updating earlier again the internet is to be blamed…

Part 4


Hello you two what's going on…said aditya…jb both break the eye locking and felt really embarrassed…
jai: we are getting late…
adi: yeah that's what I was trying to say…locking at jb…both feeling embarrassed again…bye bani beta said aditya
bani: bye…said shyly

that day passed with bani keep thinking about jai…how he was nice today…and he didn't eve feel angry at what happened at breakfast table in fact he seemed happy today… on the other hand jai was thinking about bani…merely he was thinking of his own bad behaviour… to be honest he was very ashamed of his behaviour towards bani…he was happy to realise his mistake…its never to late to realise your mistake and apologise… yes he has to ask for forgiveness from bani…I have to… thought but for that I have to wait for the right time…..

days passed jai was calmer now then before his behavioural toward bani was way better than before even bani and the rest of the house was a bit shocked (except massi, since massi doesn't know the truth) every thing was getting better between jb…bani would everyday gave him his stuff i.e. wallet, watch etc…she would send food for him in the office, she would wait for him to return home and then she would pretend that she was asleep but jai new all her little tricks and he would just smile and feel really happy that someone was there to look after him….(sry piple have to go and do cooking before my sister chop my head off)


(ello I'm back finished cooking and made chai for everyone…some times I hate cooking Tam yaar…why do gals have to cook always? and make tea)

jigs and roshini were fuming on non stop (these two never get tired…leav piple alone women) making plans on haow to kick bani out of the house and lately theu saw jai's behaviour towards bani…now they were planning really carefully…the rest of the family were always the same burbling on and on…

one of the day jai got a little late he was getting ready in his room bani was making the table….just then massi asked where is jai?

bani: he is getting ready…smiled
massi: why don't you go and help him beta…
bani: but massi…cutting her off
massi: don't worry about the table I will be able to do it….smiled
bani: ji massi…then she head it to her room…jai was really in hurry since the meeting was gona start at 9:00 and he had to be there at 8:45 so he could check some of the files….as bani was about to enter jai rushed out…I'm getting late…that's all he said…bani shock her head…and the went in the room…gosh the room was messed up…oh god bani sighed this man will never change…just then she notice some thing on the bed…she realised what it was…

bani: oh shoot…mr walia…she rushed out her room…jai was about to step down the stairs when bani reached to him and pulled his arm…jai stopped immediately…he was shocked with this gesture…
jai: what the hell…angry…what do you think your doing...I'm getting late….
bani: breathing fast.. I'm sorry mr Walia…wov…she didn't know how to say it…
jai: irritated WHAT…then at the mean time massi came…bani saw her then she quickly stood in front of jai…
bani: massi app...
massi: looking confused at both jb…mai parsad deni aye thi…she extended her her hand to bani…bani took the parsad and thanked massi so as jai…masi realised what was going on so she smiled to bani and to jai…I think you should go to your room munna bahu needs to talk to you said massi….now jai was confused what the hell first bani was stopping him and now massi…jai tried to protest but massi was stubborn so jai give up and headed toward his rooming fuming on non stop…
jai: what bani I'm getting late I told you…what is it…trying to calm himself down…
bani: mr Walia are you going to office like this…
jai: what do you mean of course like this… I'm not going to wear my nightie and go to office am I …in angry tone…
bani: giggled she came close to him… holed him from the shoulder and took him to where the mirror was…jai looked at her in a confuse way then to the mirror…WHAT THE HELL…he got the worse shock of his life….
To be continuing…

sorry guys I know that was bad timing to stop but I have given you guys a lot of clue so keep guessing until next part which will be up tomorrow


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Posted: 17 years ago
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OMG..JAi has forgotten to wear his pants.... 😆

Lovely update
continue soon
nishiraju thumbnail
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Posted: 17 years ago
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oooooooohow can he forget to wear his trouser......... 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Hey Sonam ... lovely update as well as embarrassing... 😳 😆 ... poor Jai ... he probably forgot his trousers... 😆 ... can't wait for next part... wonder how he'll react... do cont soon...

P.S. cooking sometimes can be very problematic ... when you have to cook so many different things as in different dishes... but I refer cooking ... when I'm free... and very true why do girls always have to cook... 😆 ...
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Posted: 17 years ago
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thanks people for commenting...i get very few comments i guess people dont like my ff 😭 😭 if you guys dont like it then dont comment...i will stop updating...but if you do like it then do comment plzzzzzz

sonam 😭
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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey sonam cheer up dear ...... 😉 dont get upset we r here for u always,,,,,, ur ff is really nice ...... 👏 👏 👏 keep on going plssssssss......dont u dare to stop 😡 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
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Now what did Jai forgot 😆 😆 poor guy, going to be very embarrassed 😆

nice update Sonam.....please continue......don't stop writing 😭 😭

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