The Destiny updated pg. 145 part 23

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Destiny a fic

Hello guys mai aap k liye ek new fic le kar aa rahi hoon that is destiny. I hope u all will enjoy it.

"Maine keh diya na ki mai is baat par aur koi discussion nahi karna chahta hoon . Aap ko aur aap k bete k liye yahi accha hoga ki aap dono meri baat sune aur jo mai keh raha hoon vahi karein."

"Par dad mai us k saath khush nahi reh paoonga. Pls samjhne ki koshish kariye." A young man said.

"To is ka karan bhi tum hi ho na?" His father said.

"Ye kya bole jaa rahein hain aap?" His mom now said.

"Kyoun is ka karan nahi hai kya ye? Is ne hi Naveen ko goli maari thi aur ab mai jab keh raha hoon ki Naina ki jimmedari is ko uthani chahiye to..." His dad said again.

The man did not say a single word n his eyes filled with tears n he went straight to his room from their.

"Ye accha nahi kiya aapne", her mom said n about to go to his son when..

"Tum bhi yahi samjhti ho ki mai galat hoon." Her husband asked her.

"Nahi", she turned n said, "Nahi mai aisa nahi samjhti kyounki mai jaanti hoon aap jo kar rahe hain vo apni jagah sahi hai." The lady said to her husband.

"Archana jaanti ho tum,jab mai Naveen ki maut k baad us k gharwaalo se mila tha to un ki kya condition thi? Poora samaj un ko us cheej k taane maar raha tha jis me un ka koi dosh nahi hai. Sab achanak un k khilaaf ho gaye hain. Yahan tak ki un k apne bhi un k saath nahi reh gaye hain . Naina ki kya galti thi jo us ko apni padhai becch me hi chodni padi aur ab ye haalat hai ki koi us se shaadi karne ko nahi taiyaar hai; sab ka kehna hai ki vo ek traitor ki behan hai. Jab ki hum ye baat acchi tarah se jaante hain ki ye jhooth hai."

"Mai jaanti hoon tabhi mai keh rahi hoon ki aap apni jagah galat nahi hain par Raj ko bhi samajhne ki koshish kariye na.Nandini ka gum abhi vo bhula nahi hai ki kaise Nandini ne hi us k best frnd ki jaan lene ki koshish kit hi; aur fir vo bahut pyaar bhi to karta than a us se. Vo kaise ek aise ladki k saath dhokha kar sakta hai jis k bhai ko us ne hi maara hai."

"Yahi to mai chahta hoon. Mai yahi chahta hoon ki vo apna gum bhool jaaye aur apni aur Naina ki zindagi bacha le barbaad hone se. Apni bhi zindagi ek naye sire se shuru kare vo."his father said with a week voice.

"Mai jaanti hoon par us ko thoda sa time dijiye vo maan jaayega is baat k liye." His mom said.

"Theek hai tum koshish kar k dekho." His father said.

His mon nodded n left the room.She was thinking how to slove this problem. So she finally decided some thing n went straight in his son's room.

Here in Rajveer's room:-

"Kaise kar sakta hoon mai aise? Maine apne dost ki jaan apne haath se hi li hai aur mai us ki behan se jhooth bol kar us se shaadi kaiseee ?Phir main eek baar pyaar kiya tha kisi se par us ne mujhe dhokha diya ab fir kabhi mai... Mai aisa nahi kar sakta chahe job hi ho jaaye." Rajveer was thinking in his mind.

"Beta ek kaam karna hai tujhe." His mom said entering.

"Kya maa?" Rajveer asked.

"Beta ye thodi bahut kaam ki cheejen hain Naveen ki family ki in ko tu de aa." His mom said.

"Nahi maa mai vahan nahi jaa sakta." He replied.

"Kyoun ab aisa kya ho gaya kit u vahan nahi jaa sakta hai." His mom asked.

"Maa mai un logon ka , un ki aankhon ka aur un k sawaalon ka saamna nahi kar paoonga." He said almost crying.

"Beta aisa kuch bhi nahi hai tu vahan bus un se milne jaa raha hai ek kaam se aur kuch nahi." His mom tried to console him.

"Par maa maine un k bete ko maara hai mai un k same jaane k bhi layak nahi hoon." He said again.

"Kab tak tu ye sab sochega ki tune maara hai Naveen ko. Tune us ko maut nahi mukti de hai ye soch. Tune bus vahi kiya hai jo Naveen ne kaha tujh se karne ko." His mom was trying to make him comfortable.

"Kuch bhi ho maa par maara to tha na maine." He again said.

"Bus kar ab aur mai jitna kehti hoon utna kar." Her tone was strict.

"Par ma vo log bahut self respect waale hain. Vo log ye sab aise nahi lenge." Rajveer said.

"Tu de dena un ko ye aur mera ye letter bhi de dena , vo log le lenge." His mom replied.

"Par mom is me hai kya?" He asked in curious manner.

"Ye tujhe jaane ki jaroorat nahi hai bus tu jaa aur un ko de kar aa jaana." She instructed.

He nodded n his mom smiled at him."Accha to ab so jaa kal subah tujhe jaldi nikalna hai na."

He couldn't sleep that night he was thinking how will he face Naveen?s family members.

Next day he got up early morning n left for Dehradoon.

"Tum ne us ko un logon k ghar kyoun bheja Archana.?" Rajveer?s father asked.

"Aap se maine kaha tha na ki mai koshish karoongi bus vahi koshish kar rahi hoon mai aur bhagwaan jaanta hai ki agar meri koshish sacchi hai to laut k aane k baad Raj is shaadi k liye haan keh dega." His mom told his father.

"Bhagwaan kare aisa hi ho." He said.

He reached Dehradoon at 2'0 clock in after noon. He asked some people about their address.

"Bhai sahib aap bata sakte hai ki ye log kahan rehte hain?" he asked.

"Are vahi gaddar Naveen ka pariwaar na. Are bhai sharam bhi nahi aati hai in logon ko ki ye sehar chod kar chale jayein pata nahi kyoun yahan ka naam kaharab kar rahe hain." That man said.

Raj felt to punch him hard but controlling on his emotions he asked, "Aap pata batiye."

That man told him the way n gave him a free advise too, "Dekho bhai tum acche ghar k lagte ho aise logon se door he raho to accha hai."

"Thanks," Raj replied with anger. His anger was growing now.

He took the way n reached there in half an hour. When he entered there he found an utter silence as if no living creature lives there. He was shocked because of this silence. He rang the bell after ringing it three times a young girl opened it.

"Jee kahiye." She asked.

To kaisa tha ye first update friends.

Here is it's character sketch:-


Rajeev Khandelwal as Captain Rajveer Singh Shekhawat

Priyanka Bassi as Naina Singh Ahluwalia

Sameer Sharma as Late Naveen Singh Ahluwalia

Vikas Mankatala as Amardeep Huda

Arjun Bijlani as Alekh Sharma

Ghazal Rai as Pooja

Harshad Chopara as Ali Beg

Kunal as Yudi

Baaki k sab wahi log jo the LRL me.

Pls reply jaroor kariyega aap sab.
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fanatic 21 thumbnail
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Posted: 16 years ago
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loved d start......inetersting as well ...updt soon

ur fics r always diff.....so waitin to read ahead
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Posted: 16 years ago
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awesome starting dear

fantastic
plzz do cont.
and ud soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: fanatic 21

loved d start......inetersting as well ...updt soon

ur fics r always diff.....so waitin to read ahead

thanks Lipi.😊😊
Aap sab ka agar encouragement milta hai to accha lagta hai aage likhna.😛
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: KRIZZY

awesome starting dear

fantastic
plzz do cont.
and ud soon

Thanks Karsihma dear,😊😊
Thanks a lot and shurely i will cont soon.😃😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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hii pls do countinue.. wat a lovely part..
its jus mindblowing😛

ritu😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
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that was so sweet plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hey Vertika dear,
G8 that u started a new fic too.😃😃
Starting is superb, concept bhi accha hai pehle se alag.😊😊
Cont soon.😛😛
Edited by varshita - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi Dear
This is ypur 5th Fiction i think so in dis forum..How do u come up with such brilliant story ideas..I cant think of 1 plot n u r dealing with 5 simultaneuosly..👏
Believe me i love your fictions very much ..B it Zindagi,Unknown Desires,(Inhe bhi update kar diya karo frequently) Eternal,Chahat etc etc...😆
Update was really gud n story is little different but i have read something of this sort in LRL threads..
Do update soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow one more ff..i would love to read that..the concept sounds interesting....i am waiting for more

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