The Destiny updated pg. 145 part 23

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Priya

@Sweet-Lioness

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Posted: 17 years ago

#11

HIIIIIII VERTIKA, main yeh soch rahi thi, k tum pagal ho ya genus......... kyoun k kahte hain k har scientist pagal hota hai, tabhi woh genius hota hai. tum kya ho ...yaar,😊 yahi samajh main nahin aaraha hai !!!!!!!!!!! matlab yahan par ek hi fic ne mera band bajaya hua hai😕. aur tum 4/5 fics ko kaise handle kar rahi ho... yaar? woh bhi ek sath!!!!!!!!!

uper se sab fics ek se badh kar ek DHAMAL ke...........👏bole to mindblowing!!!!!!!!👍🏼 ideas kahan se milte hai tumhe.........yaar !!!!!!!! koi spl. tonic leti ho kya?????? ab is fic k bare main kahoon.............nahin..... yaar.... main nahin kahne bali !!!!!!!!! pahle TONIC ka naam batao!!!!!!!!!!

LOVE & WISHES

PRIYA

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Shaina_b

@Shaina_b

Trailblazer

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Posted: 17 years ago

#12

Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!

Raj's dad is forcing him to marry Naina as he had killed Navin!!!!😊 😊 😊

Bechari Raj ki mom apne pati aur bete ke beech mein phasi huyi hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

Wakai mein Naina aur uske gharwalo ki halat bahut kharab hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj Nandini se pyaar karta tha!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒But she tried to kill Navin!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Woh villain thi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!!

Raj ke dad ka kehna bhi sahi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Woh chahte hai ke Raj aur Naina ki zindagi sudhar jaye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Raj bhi sahi hai ke woh Naina se juth bolke kaise shaadi kar le jiske bhai ko usne mara hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Raj ki mom ne Raj ko Navin ke ghar bheja hai taaki woh maan jaye shaadi ke liye!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Ush admi ne kya kya nahi kaha!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Raj ne bahut muskil se apne gusse par kabu kiya!!!😊 😊 😊

Finally Raj met Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: Shaina_b
Too good!!!!Awesome!!!!
thanks Shaina 😃😃

Raj's dad is forcing him to marry Naina as he had killed Navin!!!!😊 😊 😊

haan yaar un ko lagta hai ki Raj ko Naina ki zimmedari leni chahiye.🥱🥱

Bechari Raj ki mom apne pati aur bete ke beech mein phasi huyi hai!!!!😔 😔 😔 😔

poor Indian mom na.😭😭

Wakai mein Naina aur uske gharwalo ki halat bahut kharab hai!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

vo to hone hi hai kyounki agal bagal k log jo jeena mushkil kar dete hain.

Raj Nandini se pyaar karta tha!!!!!😒 😒 😒 😒 😒But she tried to kill Navin!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Woh villain thi!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛Thats great!!!!!

haan yahi hai concept kyounki mujhe lagta hai ki i hate Nandini's character.😡😡

Raj ke dad ka kehna bhi sahi hai!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊Woh chahte hai ke Raj aur Naina ki zindagi sudhar jaye!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

kab tak aise hi jiyega Raj?😕😕

Raj bhi sahi hai ke woh Naina se juth bolke kaise shaadi kar le jiske bhai ko usne mara hai!!!!!😭 😭 😭 😭 😭

Haan vo jaanta hai na ki jab sach pata chalega tab Naina nahi sehan kar paayegi us ko.😭😭

Raj ki mom ne Raj ko Navin ke ghar bheja hai taaki woh maan jaye shaadi ke liye!!!!😛 😛 😛 😛 😊 😊 😊 😊

Haan bechari koshish kar rahi hain na aage dekho kya hota hai.😛😛

Ush admi ne kya kya nahi kaha!!!!😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡 😡Raj ne bahut muskil se apne gusse par kabu kiya!!!😊 😊 😊

vo kahega hi hum kisi ki jabaan to nahi rok sakte na.😲😲

Finally Raj met Naina!!!!😊 😊 😊 😊

Yeah first time.😉😉

Thanks Shaina for reply.😊😊

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Tania Roy

@TaNia2008

Explorer

Posted: 17 years ago

#14

hey nice start.👏 👏

Raj is not ready to marry Naina...😭 😭

but i think raj's mom is right....his dicision will be changed after meeting Naina...

waiting for the next.

update soon.

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375400

Hibernated

Posted: 17 years ago

#15

HIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIII VARTIKA SWEETY SO WHAT'S UP DEAR

AWESOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOME

START

CONTINUE SOON DEAR

WITH LOVE

DEEP.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: *Rajeevian*
nice fic.ud soon........

thanks Versha dear.😊😊

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#17

Originally posted by: prerna1
that was so sweet plz continue soon

thanks dear.😃😃

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Riya

@Riya_16

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#18

Hi!!!Vertika!!!

Read the intro portion now......awesome dear...

very interesting....

Continue soon.

Take care.

love

Riya.

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 17 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: RSZR
hii pls do countinue.. wat a lovely part..
its jus mindblowing😛

?????????????????????????????ritu😊

thanks a lot Ritu dear for reply.😊😊😊

Edited by Mahak Sinha - 17 years ago

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Usha Rani

@quietrajpri1623

Voyager

Posted: 17 years ago

#20

amaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaazing concept Vertika...darling u r a star in writting ffs.....i think this is ur 5th ff na...and i know that till now i haven't commented in others...SOOOOOORRRRRRRRRRYYYY.....i have started with this ff....please please update soon dear...can't resist to read further....i love the concept......a huge round of appalause for such beautiful concept and title is beautiful.....👏...love u for this new RN ff....all the best for the next update.....